ShortBusMusic

ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic
Really, really nice work. Great use of dynamics throughout the track, loving the build towards the end. I'd say it's the start of something pretty special and I look forward to the completed track.

You have great compositional skill sets and a talent for this type of music. My hat is off to you. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
SoundbenchCreative
SoundbenchCreative replied 25th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
Wow I'm flattered :)
Thank you very much :)

Still can't finish it xD

Greetings SBC
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 17th Apr 2015 04:57 - 10 years ago

on Street Policies by blunierty
I really like the big cinematic feel to this one. It has enough sparseness in the mix to allow for the addition of vocals. There is a dissonance in this one, that really works pretty well (I'm not in love with that guitar riff, but that is personal taste and not a criticism).....not an easy thing to pull off.

Definitely not your "run of the mill" beat and in my humble opinion, that's a good thing. You have to be able to set yourself apart from the competition, and tracks like this one will do that.

Well done.

I hope all is well.

Bear
blunierty
blunierty replied 17th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
wow thank you, I appreciate the feedback and love best of luck to your music also, have a wonderful day...
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Apr 2015 02:34 - 10 years ago

on Unexpected Situation by SoundbenchCreative
Lovely work Norbert. I can see this being used at the end of a film as the closing credits roll on by.....

You are a serious composer with a ton of talent, and I hope that someday you get to score a movie or two. This one is really special, and gives us all a brief glimpse of what you can do.

I really respect what you do and how you do it. Well done! I hope all is well.

Bear
SoundbenchCreative
SoundbenchCreative replied 17th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
Hey Bear,

Wow, I am flattered :D YOur words mean alot to me :) To make a score for a movie or something similar would be like a dream come true :D

Greetings SBC
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Apr 2015 16:11 - 10 years ago

on Agape Love by Twanna1
Miss Twanna, how are you? I haven't been around much lately, but this morning I saw your featured track and thought I would drop by for a listen while I had a cup of coffee. Boy oh boy, am I glad that I did :)

Simply sensational in every way. Beautiful vocals with a great message, delivered perfectly. Wonderful musical accompaniment - Eric is always a wonderful addition to any song, and the way your weave his golden licks through the song make for a stellar musical tapestry.

Outstanding job (you always set the bar so high and never, ever disappoint) and a definitive add to my favorites. Beautiful!!! I hope all is well.

Bear
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 18th May 2015 - 10 years ago
Bear...please forgive me for not responding back to you sooner. I love to hear from you and I always get a visual of you having your cup of java listening to music. Thank you so much for your very encouraging appreciation and I do miss you on Looperman. You are soooooo talented and add so much to this great community of artists. Please give a big hug to your "sweet one" from me.

Much love,

Twanna
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 24th Mar 2015 15:50 - 10 years ago

on Garden by EtherBlu
EB, this track absolutely made my day.....light, happy feeling to it. You captured the emotions I feel when I am around puppies (all dogs for that matter) as well, haha. I can see this one as a backing track to a great dog commercial.

Wonderful way to start my day. Thanks for putting a smile on my face and warming my heart a bit this morning. Really well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
EtherBlu
EtherBlu replied 27th Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
Hello Bear,

That's one of the best comments I have ever received. I feel my hard work has paid off a little, Really appreciate your kind words and yes, if i get a chance, i'll definitely try to pitch it for any dog commercial that comes across. This comment actually made my day and this time, thank you for putting a smile on my face :)

Cheers!

-EB
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 24th Mar 2015 15:44 - 10 years ago

on Atlantic drifts by Danke
I grabbed a cup of coffee and now I'm sitting here enjoying a great track by one of Looperman's finest musicians. This is beautiful Danke. It has great space in the mix, almost a 3 dimentional feel to it. Great clarity on all of the instruments as well.

Simply beautiful, calming, and inspirational. I know you have a lot of live gigs coming up, enjoy those and come back soon with more great music after things slow down a bit. One of your best tracks. Thanks for posting and for the download :) I hope all is well.

Bear
Danke
Danke replied 25th Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
Hey Bear!

Thank you dear friend...these calm, chillis tracks are very very close to me at this time...at live, we play loud and after the gigs, it's very good to relax a bit...

Appreciate every word you wrote and thought!

Greetings and handshake, Danke
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 22nd Mar 2015 15:43 - 10 years ago

on Vascular event by mpoppitt
Beautiful soundscape in the intro and outro, definitely could work in a film or video game. The section in the middle has such a great driving beat to it. I too think the mix sounds really nice....wide stereo field, with great balance and space for all of the instruments. This was definitely a well thought out piece.

I see you live in Austin. Great town with even better music. You are surrounded by great musicians. I'm assuming this is you on the bass on this one. If so, masterful job. Added to favorites. I hope all is well.

Bear
mpoppitt
mpoppitt replied 22nd Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks Bear. It's all me on these compositions, this one is all programmed/loops, no 'real' instruments to be found.

Austin TX is the place to be; can't really imagine living anywhere else...
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 21st Mar 2015 14:51 - 10 years ago

on Stealth Matriculation Vocal Mix by Spivkurl
Hey Pat, I needed something more than coffee this morning to get me started after two days of watching basketball, so I dropped by for a bit - you are my substitute for caffeine, haha.

You bend circuits better than anyone I know. Terrific job and a great way to get not only my juices, but my neighbors juices flowing. By the way, I believe the Tetris key is Aminor, so using any white key on the piano is going to put a note from that scale into your music. Nothing but coincidence Pat, nothing more. Hell, Alicia Keys made a whole album out of songs in Aminor, haha. Hope all is well.

Bear
Spivkurl
Spivkurl replied 21st Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
Hi my friend! I appreciate your visit today! It's interesting you mention Aminor, as aside from scale calibration and maybe a bent Korg, this was composed in C major, which you I'm sure know uses the exact same notes. That explains the tetris comparison, and probably the slight detuning makes it sound a bit more minor than it should. Happy that you can find a substitute (synergy) for coffee in my music. Sometimes I find it nice to deprive myself of things (like Kramer!) and yesterday I went all day without coffee, by the evening my head was aching and my jaw hurt, so I know how the need for stimulation goes. I think I had heard that Alicia Keys thing before, but had forgotten... it's a humorous play on her name! Thank you very much for listening!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 21st Mar 2015 14:43 - 10 years ago

on More Than a Day Snippet by oliverzookamoo
Great vocals along with a great guitar riff. Now that you have this great start, keep working on it to get a complete song. It has a tremendous amount of potential, so keep after it. Add a bass line, drums, figure out a chorus and a bridge. KEEP AT IT!!! Stellar start to this one. I hope all is well.

Bear
oliverzookamoo
oliverzookamoo replied 21st Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
Thank you for so much positive feedback!!! I am doing so... The finished product should be out very soon!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 19th Mar 2015 15:07 - 10 years ago

on Mellow days by vivk
I second Ed's comments. First welcome to the Loop. Secondly, it is obvious you have a whole bunch of talent. I look forward to hearing many, many more from you. This was a beautiful ride, with wonderful dynamics. It goes great with my cup of morning coffee out on the patio. Stellar first effort, nothing like setting the bar really, really high, haha. Again, beautiful work. Welcome, and I hope all is well.

Bear
vivk
vivk replied 30th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Hi Bear, Thanks for all the good vibes and nice comments. If you read the reply I gave to AnalogDisc above, you will see why I have taken so long to respond here- unforseen circumstances. Anyway I really appreciate it and I will be adding more stuff soon and look forward to hearing your music.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 17th Mar 2015 15:25 - 10 years ago

on everything is right with my world by promenade2239
Alex, it is always a masters class in composition when I drop by your corner of the world. What a great song you have arranged here. Superb jazz/fusion feel. I think that is probably you doing that wonderful work on the keys. Stellar effort.

There is nothing to critique here. Just a beautiful song to enjoy with my coffee this morning. Thanks as always for the inspiration and pure enjoyment that you provide with your music. I hope all is well.

Bear
promenade2239
promenade2239 replied 17th Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
Thank you Bear.

This track is based on the idea that was sent to me by ferryterry earlier, it is actually my 2nd take on this material. I reharmonized it and found vocals that fit as well as other sounds. I had to cut vocal to make it fit in here - the title is from original lyrics (I removed that verse). Yes indeed, I played all keys in here (and violins) - as always.

Thank you for listening to this song and your words, really glad I could provide you some enjoyable moments.

All the best to you, Alex
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 17th Mar 2015 15:17 - 10 years ago

on Ill Do Anything muzic by Baggadub by FullCapicityMuzic
Well, like Ed, I come out of hibernation and discover I missed this jewel of yours. It doesn't matter what genre it is, you can sing it. I could sit and listen to you sing the phone book and be one happy guy :) Kudos to Baggadub as well for his great backing track.

You have some serious talent, and I sincerely hope people are taking advantage of it. I hope all is well in your part of the northeast.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 17th Mar 2015 15:02 - 10 years ago

on One for Bear by doudei
Beautiful work Savino, absolutely stunning. I am amazed that you could take those stems and make something this incredible out of them. It is nothing short of remarkable, absolutely remarkable. What a great way to start off my morning. I have downloaded this one so I have it to enjoy with my coffee on beautiful happy mornings like today.

The build on this is so nice, the mix so spot on. You are a master my friend and I am honored that you were able to get a small bit of inspiration from the stems. Thank you for such a wonderful end result. I hope all is well my friend. I am off to hit play again, and again, and again.

Bear
doudei
doudei replied 11th May 2015 - 10 years ago
hey Bear
i hope all is well my friend. it was really my pleasure and certainly will love to do that again anytime. it has been a smooth experience to work with your stems at all times and time flew by sooo quickly....
that's always the good stuff when that happens. i mean when nights seem to only last a few minutes, that kind of time dilation.
sorry to you too about the ultra slow response.
first i had to go help serve in the civil protection (instead of military) for a while and then i caught a bone inflammation in my elbow from over-straining it by my own weight as i was sitting at the table. what.. weird stuff, i must have been quite distracted that i didn't realise it sooner. oh well, it's all back to normal one of these days and finally i may also use the computers and keyboards again, so i am excited!
already did a small number this weekend and will upload that in the next few minutes if all goes as planned.
so long man, have a great time and thanks again!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Mar 2015 15:45 - 10 years ago

on One Step by beerling1970
Steve, nicely done! I think it is pretty incredible that you have only been at this since 2011. You have great compositional skills as this tune illustrates. It is hip hop as it should be served, fresh, haha.

Outstanding effort from the start to the finish. Terrific use of the vocals throughout. This one could be playing on the radio. Well done. I hope all is well with you and your family.

Keep making music. You are really good at it.

Bear
beerling1970
beerling1970 replied 19th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks for the comment Bear :)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Mar 2015 15:38 - 10 years ago

on beat01 by doudei
Great piano work on this one!!! It has a jazz fusion feel to it....Jazz/fusion/hip hop. I like it.

Really tasty bass line driving this one along. I think this one would be a must have for any upcoming rapper. Hopefully some of the talented vocalists on the Loop will jump all over this one. Very nice ending too!

As always with your work, it is outstanding. Added to favorites. Well done Savino. I hope all is well.

Bear
doudei
doudei replied 16th Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
hey Bear
thanks for explaining the "hearing is shot" phrase, at first i expected the worst and thought you had an accident or something that damaged your ears.
although i guess technically it's an accident, just one that creeps up on you over the years.
i noticed about two years ago that i hear slightly less on my right side, but it's very minimal still.
a reminder to watch out for prolonged exposure to excessive levels. i always work with headphones and i am especially prone to go overboard with the volume there. it's easy to forget as long as the hearing seems ok. and very comfortable cans don't help either hehe.
also thanks for your lovely comment. glad you like the piano. i have also prepared something this evening for you which i will upload shortly.
cheers my friend
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Mar 2015 15:21 - 10 years ago

on Midiman007 and My03 - Versus - Alive by midiman007
James, this one certainly is magic. Great keyboard work, and the vocals are really nice as well. Superb groove happening here, with an outstanding bass line.

The mix is nice - great balance and width.

Outstanding job to all involved. I hope all is well.

Bear
midiman007
midiman007 replied 16th Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
ShortBusMusic

Thanks for your nice compliments. I really was digging this tune also. Really has a good beat to it. I had the basic Idea I owe My03 a lot he totally made it happen.

I hope all is well with you also.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Mar 2015 15:15 - 10 years ago

on Poisen by steve010101
I'm usually not a big fan of dubstep, however, if it all sounded as good as this one, I would be. I love the intensity this one conveys. It is so good that it would work well in film or TV. It isn't easy to paint a picture this clearly with music, yet you managed to pull it off, and did it really well. Added to favorites. Really nice job. I hope all is well.

Bear
steve010101
steve010101 replied 15th Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks for the kind words. I suppose it does have cinematic undertones since the track paints a story, albeit a short one. Thanks again,

Steve
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Mar 2015 15:07 - 10 years ago

on Insomnia by KingVortex
Great pads in this one, they balance the tribal feel of the drums. There is plenty of room left on this one to add a bunch of instruments and vocals if you are so inclined. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 13th Mar 2015 13:58 - 10 years ago

on I Am Here ft Stacy Robinson by mrwolf14
Domenico, this is absolutely beautiful work. Like Wayne said, you can tell you spent a great deal of time on it. Very emotional guitar work, and the vocals are stunning. There is nothing to criticize here, just 4:21 of beautiful music. The mix is really nice as well. A great track to close out your album my friend. This one got my day off to a wonderful stop. I lift my coffee cup and salute your talents. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 replied 20th Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks Bear,
I have actually not spent so much time here: I think I had most thinks "in mind" before starting recording.
Of course there are several layers of sound, but they are quite "simple" so I didn't have to adjust to much to have them sounding "OK".
Ciao, Domenico
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 9th Mar 2015 16:11 - 11 years ago

on Discotechnique by crucethus
This is so good on so many different levels. First off, your synth work is just as good as it gets (those little riffs around the 2:40 mark and again around 3:20 are so nice). You have a rare skillset (both musician and composer) and you execute your ideas flawlessly. Terrific mix on this one as well. Everything is sitting nicely, really crispy sound. Another outstanding effort from one of the best musicians on Looperman. Really, really well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
crucethus
crucethus replied 11th Mar 2015 - 10 years ago
Ahh you are too kind Bear.
Believe it or not the Keyboard I used
for this was a $199 Yamaha. Even the drums, but I used a most expensive Roland Guitar processor to make some of these sounds magical. Mixed on the fly on a 4 track Sony It was fun to revive this one with modern mastering.
"Another outstanding effort from one of the best musicians on Looperman."
is a very high compliment from a great musican yourself and I am humbly grateful for that.
All the Best
Steve
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 8th Mar 2015 00:07 - 11 years ago

on Successfully Black by ThaTruth1
I see you told Pat you used a pre-mixed instrumental, so with that in mind, I think the result here is quite remarkable. The most difficult thing in the world is to add vocals to a completely mixed track. Things are a lot easier if you have all of the instrument stems so you can mix everything at the same time.

So, from a mixing aspect, outstanding effort. Really good vocal work on this. Very nice backing track as well. Keep chasing the dream. I hope all is well.

Bear
ThaTruth1
ThaTruth1 replied 8th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Wuddup ShortBusMusic

Thanks for the feedback. Just like you said it's really tough to mix on a pre-mixed instrumental. I think the engineer did a pretty nice job to work on this. I really like the outcome but you know, it is always good to have a different feedback from different people. I am glad you like it thank you for your review :) And of course, let's keep the dream alive.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Feb 2015 15:51 - 11 years ago

on chrysanthemum by DanGoldstein
Another stellar effort from you Dan. It is always a pleasure to have you describe your inspiration for each piece. This song fits the image of a beautiful flower nicely. Really well done, minimal yet extremely effective. I hope all is well.

Bear
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein replied 12th Apr 2015 - 10 years ago
hey Bear. just discovered this comment. glad you enjoyed this and thought it worked with the art. it's my muse and I guess I will keep going with it. all the best. Dan
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 22nd Feb 2015 16:23 - 11 years ago

on foggy forest by DanGoldstein
I'm so glad I grabbed a fresh cup of coffee for this one Dan. Beautiful work with the glass bow synth. It is not easy to work with an instrument that has such a dissonant sound, but you did so with remarkable results. My only complaint is that it wasn't another two to three minutes longer, haha. I loved it. Time to hit play again and finish that cup of coffee. This one proves that less sometimes can definitely be more. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein replied 22nd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
i'm happy you had a chance to check it bear. the glass bow was a little tricky - you have that right. glad if it was working for you. we need to give ourselves at least a moment of satisfaction for what has been achieved, because we are always pushing ahead, trying to get to the next level. glad you were digging it! Dan
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Feb 2015 16:01 - 11 years ago

on Moon River Remix by PDMuzak
Ah, really nice version of this song. My mom and dad used to listen to Andy Williams sing this one over and over, dancing along cheek to cheek. I used to play trombone to the Henry Mancini/Johnny Mercer version when I was a wee lad, haha.

Really took me down memory lane. You have great chops on several different instruments - a musician's musician for sure.

This one got my day off to a great start. Beautiful work from start to finish. Thanks for sharing. I hope all is well.

Bear
PDMuzak
PDMuzak replied 21st Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the kind words. I think we may share the same decades. As far as being able to play multiple instruments. I would like to claim I do. But the keyboard is the only instrument I play. Thank goodness for VSTs to provide the sounds I need.-Thank you PDMuzak
ShortBusMusic
Wow Kevin, really outstanding work, especially the keyboard in the funk section. Very nice transition into the dubstep portion of the track as well. I actually like the last part of the song...kind of like ending with the bridge, instead of the chorus. Great use of both genres. I think you have a future in funk/RnB if you so choose to go that route. Great work. I hope all is well.

Bear
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