ShortBusMusic

ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic 19th Mar 2015 15:07 - 11 years ago

on Mellow days by vivk
I second Ed's comments. First welcome to the Loop. Secondly, it is obvious you have a whole bunch of talent. I look forward to hearing many, many more from you. This was a beautiful ride, with wonderful dynamics. It goes great with my cup of morning coffee out on the patio. Stellar first effort, nothing like setting the bar really, really high, haha. Again, beautiful work. Welcome, and I hope all is well.

Bear
vivk
vivk replied 30th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Hi Bear, Thanks for all the good vibes and nice comments. If you read the reply I gave to AnalogDisc above, you will see why I have taken so long to respond here- unforseen circumstances. Anyway I really appreciate it and I will be adding more stuff soon and look forward to hearing your music.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 17th Mar 2015 15:25 - 11 years ago

on everything is right with my world by promenade2239
Alex, it is always a masters class in composition when I drop by your corner of the world. What a great song you have arranged here. Superb jazz/fusion feel. I think that is probably you doing that wonderful work on the keys. Stellar effort.

There is nothing to critique here. Just a beautiful song to enjoy with my coffee this morning. Thanks as always for the inspiration and pure enjoyment that you provide with your music. I hope all is well.

Bear
promenade2239
promenade2239 replied 17th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Thank you Bear.

This track is based on the idea that was sent to me by ferryterry earlier, it is actually my 2nd take on this material. I reharmonized it and found vocals that fit as well as other sounds. I had to cut vocal to make it fit in here - the title is from original lyrics (I removed that verse). Yes indeed, I played all keys in here (and violins) - as always.

Thank you for listening to this song and your words, really glad I could provide you some enjoyable moments.

All the best to you, Alex
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 17th Mar 2015 15:17 - 11 years ago

on Ill Do Anything muzic by Baggadub by FullCapicityMuzic
Well, like Ed, I come out of hibernation and discover I missed this jewel of yours. It doesn't matter what genre it is, you can sing it. I could sit and listen to you sing the phone book and be one happy guy :) Kudos to Baggadub as well for his great backing track.

You have some serious talent, and I sincerely hope people are taking advantage of it. I hope all is well in your part of the northeast.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 17th Mar 2015 15:02 - 11 years ago

on One for Bear by doudei
Beautiful work Savino, absolutely stunning. I am amazed that you could take those stems and make something this incredible out of them. It is nothing short of remarkable, absolutely remarkable. What a great way to start off my morning. I have downloaded this one so I have it to enjoy with my coffee on beautiful happy mornings like today.

The build on this is so nice, the mix so spot on. You are a master my friend and I am honored that you were able to get a small bit of inspiration from the stems. Thank you for such a wonderful end result. I hope all is well my friend. I am off to hit play again, and again, and again.

Bear
doudei
doudei replied 11th May 2015 - 11 years ago
hey Bear
i hope all is well my friend. it was really my pleasure and certainly will love to do that again anytime. it has been a smooth experience to work with your stems at all times and time flew by sooo quickly....
that's always the good stuff when that happens. i mean when nights seem to only last a few minutes, that kind of time dilation.
sorry to you too about the ultra slow response.
first i had to go help serve in the civil protection (instead of military) for a while and then i caught a bone inflammation in my elbow from over-straining it by my own weight as i was sitting at the table. what.. weird stuff, i must have been quite distracted that i didn't realise it sooner. oh well, it's all back to normal one of these days and finally i may also use the computers and keyboards again, so i am excited!
already did a small number this weekend and will upload that in the next few minutes if all goes as planned.
so long man, have a great time and thanks again!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Mar 2015 15:45 - 11 years ago

on One Step by beerling1970
Steve, nicely done! I think it is pretty incredible that you have only been at this since 2011. You have great compositional skills as this tune illustrates. It is hip hop as it should be served, fresh, haha.

Outstanding effort from the start to the finish. Terrific use of the vocals throughout. This one could be playing on the radio. Well done. I hope all is well with you and your family.

Keep making music. You are really good at it.

Bear
beerling1970
beerling1970 replied 19th Apr 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the comment Bear :)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Mar 2015 15:38 - 11 years ago

on beat01 by doudei
Great piano work on this one!!! It has a jazz fusion feel to it....Jazz/fusion/hip hop. I like it.

Really tasty bass line driving this one along. I think this one would be a must have for any upcoming rapper. Hopefully some of the talented vocalists on the Loop will jump all over this one. Very nice ending too!

As always with your work, it is outstanding. Added to favorites. Well done Savino. I hope all is well.

Bear
doudei
doudei replied 16th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
hey Bear
thanks for explaining the "hearing is shot" phrase, at first i expected the worst and thought you had an accident or something that damaged your ears.
although i guess technically it's an accident, just one that creeps up on you over the years.
i noticed about two years ago that i hear slightly less on my right side, but it's very minimal still.
a reminder to watch out for prolonged exposure to excessive levels. i always work with headphones and i am especially prone to go overboard with the volume there. it's easy to forget as long as the hearing seems ok. and very comfortable cans don't help either hehe.
also thanks for your lovely comment. glad you like the piano. i have also prepared something this evening for you which i will upload shortly.
cheers my friend
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Mar 2015 15:21 - 11 years ago

on Midiman007 and My03 - Versus - Alive by midiman007
James, this one certainly is magic. Great keyboard work, and the vocals are really nice as well. Superb groove happening here, with an outstanding bass line.

The mix is nice - great balance and width.

Outstanding job to all involved. I hope all is well.

Bear
midiman007
midiman007 replied 16th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
ShortBusMusic

Thanks for your nice compliments. I really was digging this tune also. Really has a good beat to it. I had the basic Idea I owe My03 a lot he totally made it happen.

I hope all is well with you also.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Mar 2015 15:15 - 11 years ago

on Poisen by steve010101
I'm usually not a big fan of dubstep, however, if it all sounded as good as this one, I would be. I love the intensity this one conveys. It is so good that it would work well in film or TV. It isn't easy to paint a picture this clearly with music, yet you managed to pull it off, and did it really well. Added to favorites. Really nice job. I hope all is well.

Bear
steve010101
steve010101 replied 15th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the kind words. I suppose it does have cinematic undertones since the track paints a story, albeit a short one. Thanks again,

Steve
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 15th Mar 2015 15:07 - 11 years ago

on Insomnia by KingVortex
Great pads in this one, they balance the tribal feel of the drums. There is plenty of room left on this one to add a bunch of instruments and vocals if you are so inclined. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 13th Mar 2015 13:58 - 11 years ago

on I Am Here ft Stacy Robinson by mrwolf14
Domenico, this is absolutely beautiful work. Like Wayne said, you can tell you spent a great deal of time on it. Very emotional guitar work, and the vocals are stunning. There is nothing to criticize here, just 4:21 of beautiful music. The mix is really nice as well. A great track to close out your album my friend. This one got my day off to a wonderful stop. I lift my coffee cup and salute your talents. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 replied 20th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks Bear,
I have actually not spent so much time here: I think I had most thinks "in mind" before starting recording.
Of course there are several layers of sound, but they are quite "simple" so I didn't have to adjust to much to have them sounding "OK".
Ciao, Domenico
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 9th Mar 2015 16:11 - 11 years ago

on Discotechnique by crucethus
This is so good on so many different levels. First off, your synth work is just as good as it gets (those little riffs around the 2:40 mark and again around 3:20 are so nice). You have a rare skillset (both musician and composer) and you execute your ideas flawlessly. Terrific mix on this one as well. Everything is sitting nicely, really crispy sound. Another outstanding effort from one of the best musicians on Looperman. Really, really well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
crucethus
crucethus replied 11th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Ahh you are too kind Bear.
Believe it or not the Keyboard I used
for this was a $199 Yamaha. Even the drums, but I used a most expensive Roland Guitar processor to make some of these sounds magical. Mixed on the fly on a 4 track Sony It was fun to revive this one with modern mastering.
"Another outstanding effort from one of the best musicians on Looperman."
is a very high compliment from a great musican yourself and I am humbly grateful for that.
All the Best
Steve
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 8th Mar 2015 00:07 - 11 years ago

on Successfully Black by ThaTruth1
I see you told Pat you used a pre-mixed instrumental, so with that in mind, I think the result here is quite remarkable. The most difficult thing in the world is to add vocals to a completely mixed track. Things are a lot easier if you have all of the instrument stems so you can mix everything at the same time.

So, from a mixing aspect, outstanding effort. Really good vocal work on this. Very nice backing track as well. Keep chasing the dream. I hope all is well.

Bear
ThaTruth1
ThaTruth1 replied 8th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Wuddup ShortBusMusic

Thanks for the feedback. Just like you said it's really tough to mix on a pre-mixed instrumental. I think the engineer did a pretty nice job to work on this. I really like the outcome but you know, it is always good to have a different feedback from different people. I am glad you like it thank you for your review :) And of course, let's keep the dream alive.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Feb 2015 15:51 - 11 years ago

on chrysanthemum by DanGoldstein
Another stellar effort from you Dan. It is always a pleasure to have you describe your inspiration for each piece. This song fits the image of a beautiful flower nicely. Really well done, minimal yet extremely effective. I hope all is well.

Bear
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein replied 12th Apr 2015 - 11 years ago
hey Bear. just discovered this comment. glad you enjoyed this and thought it worked with the art. it's my muse and I guess I will keep going with it. all the best. Dan
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 22nd Feb 2015 16:23 - 11 years ago

on foggy forest by DanGoldstein
I'm so glad I grabbed a fresh cup of coffee for this one Dan. Beautiful work with the glass bow synth. It is not easy to work with an instrument that has such a dissonant sound, but you did so with remarkable results. My only complaint is that it wasn't another two to three minutes longer, haha. I loved it. Time to hit play again and finish that cup of coffee. This one proves that less sometimes can definitely be more. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein replied 22nd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
i'm happy you had a chance to check it bear. the glass bow was a little tricky - you have that right. glad if it was working for you. we need to give ourselves at least a moment of satisfaction for what has been achieved, because we are always pushing ahead, trying to get to the next level. glad you were digging it! Dan
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Feb 2015 16:01 - 11 years ago

on Moon River Remix by PDMuzak
Ah, really nice version of this song. My mom and dad used to listen to Andy Williams sing this one over and over, dancing along cheek to cheek. I used to play trombone to the Henry Mancini/Johnny Mercer version when I was a wee lad, haha.

Really took me down memory lane. You have great chops on several different instruments - a musician's musician for sure.

This one got my day off to a great start. Beautiful work from start to finish. Thanks for sharing. I hope all is well.

Bear
PDMuzak
PDMuzak replied 21st Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the kind words. I think we may share the same decades. As far as being able to play multiple instruments. I would like to claim I do. But the keyboard is the only instrument I play. Thank goodness for VSTs to provide the sounds I need.-Thank you PDMuzak
ShortBusMusic
Wow Kevin, really outstanding work, especially the keyboard in the funk section. Very nice transition into the dubstep portion of the track as well. I actually like the last part of the song...kind of like ending with the bridge, instead of the chorus. Great use of both genres. I think you have a future in funk/RnB if you so choose to go that route. Great work. I hope all is well.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Feb 2015 16:05 - 11 years ago

on The Italian Job by ZankFrappa
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Just sayin'
ZankFrappa
ZankFrappa replied 4th Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
And you are right!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Feb 2015 16:01 - 11 years ago

on What Bo Said by ZankFrappa
Most entertaining two minutes of my day (something my wife says on occasion). This was really well done. And representative of many hits from the past. Like TG said, it took some talent to assemble this one. Respect.

Bear
ZankFrappa
ZankFrappa replied 3rd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Actually it took more time than talent.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Feb 2015 15:49 - 11 years ago

on Modnex - CLUB X by Modnex
I think this sounds really good, but I know nothing about house music so I'm not one to ask about the commercial sound aspect. I do know I liked it, and it had my head bouncing to the beat...and that's about as close as this old guy gets to dancing, haha. So, from my standpoint this is a success. I'm sure some others will give you much better ideas on what to add/improve. I liked it a lot. In the end, that is all any of us can ask from a listener. Well done.

I hope all is well.

Bear
Modnex
Modnex replied 4th Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks my friend! I'm happy you liked it. Hopefully someone can help with the commercial bit. Making commercial tracks seems to be so easy yet so hard. Perhaps commercial sounds are not as easy as I once thought it was. Thanks for your two cents and have wonderful day!
ShortBusMusic
Hey Mark, nicely done. Just the thing I needed to add to my coffee this morning to get the day started out right! Beautiful composition, well thought out, and perfectly delivered. Chilled as chilled can be :) Outstanding effort. I hope all is well.

Bear
larrywiggles1
larrywiggles1 replied 2nd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Hi Bear,

Great to hear from you again, a big thank you and really pleased you enjoyed it. Even better that it went down well with your coffee!!
thanks again Bear,
Take care and my best wishes,
Mark
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 2nd Feb 2015 17:00 - 11 years ago

on JAweGuy - Earthly Love by JAweGuy
Beautiful work my friend. I wish it was a lot longer :) I also think it has a place in a film somewhere. Really well done (you might consider boosting the master by a decibel or two to get the tracks overall volume up a little). Those are my only two small critiques of this great piece of work. I hope all is well.

Bear
JAweGuy
JAweGuy replied 2nd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Hey ShortBusMusic,

Thanks a lot for checking the track out, it's a pleasure to read your comments.

I'm so used to not having the volume too high as those who use my tracks usually put the volume up for me. I'll see what I can do in future works!

All the best,
JAweGuy
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 2nd Feb 2015 16:57 - 11 years ago

on Wont Stop Loving You by BradoSanz
Another chart topper from the vaults of EpicRecord. Man, you really do need to take this show on the road (need a Bus, haha). Seriously, there is nothing to critique in your work. You just need to record these in a proper studio environment, and then shop the demo for the best deal out there. Really, really well done man. I hope all is well.

Bear
BradoSanz
BradoSanz replied 2nd Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Haha, that bus reference made me lol :P And thanks man, you are very kind!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 28th Jan 2015 16:28 - 11 years ago

on Never Let You Go by BradoSanz
First off, great song. It has everything it needs to be a commercial hit...great vocals, great lyrics, great hook, great arrangement. The only thing missing is a recording done in a quality studio setting and some proper marketing (and a little luck).

I think it is pretty clear that you have the chops and talent to do this for a living. Do you perform live? If not, you need to get your azz out there and start playing in front of live crowds. Build yourself a fan base and see what happens. One thing is for sure, you've got all the ability in the world, now all you need is to put in the work to take it to the next level.

Outstanding job again, from start to finish. I really enjoyed this (as did my wife, and she's no bubblegummer, haha). I hope all is well.

Bear
BradoSanz
BradoSanz replied 28th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Haha, thanks SBM :) I do play live on occasion, but it's mainly just been a hobby for me at this point as I am pursuing my degree in Environmental Science at this point and have been kept pretty busy these past few years :P But music is still one of my first loves haha. Who knows what will happen? Maybe someday I'll make it big, get to share my message to the world. Until then, I am just another college student making music in his spare time :P Thanks SBM, if you wanna download it or any of my music, just message me and I'll get you a link to it!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Jan 2015 16:26 - 11 years ago

on What My Heart Needs--Instrumental by soundhound
Smooth guitar work TG. I keep forgetting my Zoom pedal has the volume pedal.....I always try to mess with the volume knob on the guitar - this was a great reminder to use the tools I have at my disposal, haha. Just a really nice transition there. I liked everything about this one. Great groove throughout. Well done! I hope all is well.

Bear
soundhound
soundhound replied 16th Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Bear...Hi
And thanks for stopping in....

Yes...It's so much easier using a pedal more so then the Knobs
on the Axe...
I don't find that the transitions are as smooth, I've got lots of toys
that I've picked up along the way, 4 different crybaby's all kinds
of distortion pedals, Phasers and Chorus's...
All of those sounds and about 700 more are in the Digitech RP355
Guitar Processor... And all can be Modified another 40 ways, so all
that other stuff will end up in the pawn shop, trade them for some-
thing I can use today the easy way...
Glad you enjoyed it...

Peace..TG.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 26th Jan 2015 16:17 - 11 years ago

on That old piano sound by FreeRadical
FR, this is exactly what I needed to get my azz moving this morning, haha. Got a bunch of leaves to rake up and I needed something more than coffee for inspiration. Really solid work as usual. Not sure why you have 40+ plays and only one review...where in the hell is the love people. Anyway, another great track from one of the Loops most creative people. Well done man. I hope all is well.

Bear
FreeRadical
FreeRadical replied 26th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Make that 40 plays and two reviews. I wasn't expecting much of a response on this really as it's just a bunch of loops really. My new years resolution is to get some better VST's and start making my own stuff again. Glad you could stop by and i hope all is cool with you as well.
FR
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