Listen To HOME - Joe Cramer On SBM - Proximal Vicinity Pop Song By Joecramer At Looperman.com

5th Nov 2014 18:37 - 11 years ago
Description : This is my vocal version on - ShortBusMusic - Proximal Vicinity - I used the master that i done for the SBM comp. This is a love song. I think it´s the first real love song i ever made. -Enjoy-

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give joecramer some feedback.

Mosaic
Mosaic 6th Jun 2015 07:07 - 10 years ago
Hey Joe

Very nice track in deed, really loving your vocals, great voice, very easy on the ear, could listen to you singing all day... instrumental spot on, whole track tells a story, one of the better listens today while doing reviews...Rarely download tracks from here on Looperman, but this one is a must, thank you so much for sharing this great track...MASSIVE fav man...Peace n much Respect...Mosaic...
joecramer
joecramer replied 6th Jun 2015 - 10 years ago
Hello Mosaic

Thanks for your friendly words about the vocals and my voice, Always nice to hear that there are people around who like it.

While i done the master for this track (SBM Comp) i had the feeling like you, that the music tells a story. And i start to sing abit to the music (first only to get the timeing problems that SBM produced to see who can handle it) and later i done the vocals ´cause i had the feeling that they fit not to bad at all.......

That you downloaded this one is realy something special to me,´cause i mostly also never download songs here (only if i wanna work on/with them) and so i am realy happy to hear that you done so ´cause you like it. Thats realy great!

So thanks a lot for this realy nice and friendly comment, the download and the fav!

stay tuned
joe
silverman
silverman 4th Jun 2015 22:48 - 10 years ago
You'll probably think I'm crazy but it gives me a mix of Van Der Graaf Generator Iggy Pop and Eno.
I like being crazy and I love this.
To me this is early seventies prog rock and that isn't meant as a put down in any way shape or form.
Very nice bit of work.
joecramer
joecramer replied 5th Jun 2015 - 10 years ago
Hey Silverman,
thats some real gentle words you wrote. Me in a row with "them" - wow
Maybe you are right and this track is more progrock then pop but i wasn´t never real good in genres at all :)
I hope that peoples don´t have to be crazy to like this ....

The music itself isn´t from me. I just made a master mix from the stems from Mr. ShortBusMusic for his competition. Ok, this mix is a bit different to the most other master mixes from his stems but it is still his work, ´cause i didn´t change much. Mostly i changed it just to a minimal version

So thanks again for your nice comment and it is nice to know that you love this little lovesong

stay tuned
joe
Orlando51
Orlando51 4th Jun 2015 21:35 - 10 years ago
Haha, Joe...you brought back some nice memories , you jungle -lover boy:)...but far from just that....cause this is completely new and fresh twist on this familiar tune...how could I have overlooked this before...am I blind or it's just the Alien in my stomach the guilty one..:) This sounds incredibly and as always with a proper dose of refined sarcasm. And production....ahhh yes, production is criminally insane with its perfected crystal clarity. it's beyond me how this haven't got a single 'fav' yet!!??..well, here is one now!:)

Hat's off and respect______Orlando

p.s Ohh shit...now I see I already posted a comment 7 months ago....I guess I was thinking too much of Iggy then...today was more focused.:)
joecramer
joecramer replied 5th Jun 2015 - 10 years ago
:) Thanks a lot for the fav Orlando

Realy cool that you like it at the second time more then the first time.

This Iggy thing is tooo cool, ´cause i realy like much of his stuff but i never had the idea in mind that i sound in a way like him. Maybe it´s what the Thai people call
SAME SAME BUT DIFFRENT ... i think it is the kind of talking/singing/timeing that makes you and SBM believe it sounds like Iggy

Always nice to hear something from you
I realy enjoyed your comment

stay tuned
joe
Axion
Axion 9th Nov 2014 23:26 - 11 years ago
Very cheerful song right here. I like it all!
joecramer
joecramer replied 10th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks a lot Axion for your friendly comment
Nice to know that you like it

stay tuned
joe
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Nov 2014 16:09 - 11 years ago
Great work Joe. Your voice does sound quite a bit like Iggy Pop, and that's a great big compliment for sure. Like SJ suggested, the vox just need a little bit of reverb and placed a bit farther back in the mix. Other than that small critique, I wouldn't change a thing. Well done Joe, really well done. I hope all is well.

Bear
joecramer
joecramer replied 7th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks Bear for this nice comment.
I hoped that you like it, `cause it´s your music.

I made a little update with some more reverb over the voxs. And a few little changes on the levels and so but not sure :) like mostly :) about the result ...... itz much more easy to say "a bit farther back" then to do (for me)

Hope i didnt change it to the bader, if, tell me and i reupload the old version :)

Thanks for the listen and the helping words

stay tuned
joe
promenade2239
promenade2239 7th Nov 2014 05:23 - 11 years ago
hi, I like the special colour you achieved here and some old-styled manner in your voice. This is very nice. Is it inspired by some specific songs or style?
Anyway I really enjoyed your song - I had that impression something was missing on this competition track and you filled it up very well.
Very nice work, Alex
joecramer
joecramer replied 7th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey Alex

I am happy that you enjoyed the listen and found it nice.

No, this isnt inspired by someone special. In fakt it is realy made just for (or maybe by) this minimal master of SMB´s track that i made. I had the words already in my mind when i done the last version of the mastering comp.

Cool to hear that you believe that this filled the comp track very well.

So thanks for your friendly words and the time you spent.

stay tuned
joe
Orlando51
Orlando51 5th Nov 2014 21:47 - 11 years ago
Does your vocal delivery remind me on Iggy Pop, or am I halucinating?:)

Cheers____orlando
joecramer
joecramer replied 6th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
:) mmmm Iggy - thats a compliment - thanks a lot Orlando.

So thanks a lot for this friendly words

stay tuned
joe
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking 5th Nov 2014 21:39 - 11 years ago
Hahaha! This is great!
It has this slippery, smoshy feeling over the lyris and all over your voice - as there should be in a love song.

I think your vox could benefit from having a little more distance, at the moment it's very close to the ear somehow. Maybe a touch of reverb and delay and maybe layering it a few times also in between the chorus.

The instrumental it self is one of my favourites here.

Cheers!
/ SJ =)
joecramer
joecramer replied 6th Nov 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey SJ

A slippery voice :) thats cool in a way.

And you are right, i am not 100% happy with the vox.
I think i will do some more takes and see how i can master it a bit better.

So thanks for your comment and your little help.

stay tuned
joe

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