Tags : | Pop | 8.79 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : This is my vocal version on - ShortBusMusic - Proximal Vicinity - I used the master that i done for the SBM comp. This is a love song. I think it´s the first real love song i ever made. -Enjoy-

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  1. Mosaic
    Mosaic on Sat 6th Jun 2015 - 4 years ago

    Hey Joe

    Very nice track in deed, really loving your vocals, great voice, very easy on the ear, could listen to you singing all day... instrumental spot on, whole track tells a story, one of the better listens today while doing reviews...Rarely download tracks from here on Looperman, but this one is a must, thank you so much for sharing this great track...MASSIVE fav man...Peace n much Respect...Mosaic...

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hello Mosaic

    Thanks for your friendly words about the vocals and my voice, Always nice to hear that there are people around who like it.

    While i done the master for this track (SBM Comp) i had the feeling like you, that the music tells a story. And i start to sing abit to the music (first only to get the timeing problems that SBM produced to see who can handle it) and later i done the vocals ´cause i had the feeling that they fit not to bad at all.......

    That you downloaded this one is realy something special to me,´cause i mostly also never download songs here (only if i wanna work on/with them) and so i am realy happy to hear that you done so ´cause you like it. Thats realy great!

    So thanks a lot for this realy nice and friendly comment, the download and the fav!

    stay tuned
    joe

  2. silverman
    silverman on Thu 4th Jun 2015 - 4 years ago

    You'll probably think I'm crazy but it gives me a mix of Van Der Graaf Generator Iggy Pop and Eno.
    I like being crazy and I love this.
    To me this is early seventies prog rock and that isn't meant as a put down in any way shape or form.
    Very nice bit of work.

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey Silverman,
    thats some real gentle words you wrote. Me in a row with "them" - wow
    Maybe you are right and this track is more progrock then pop but i wasn´t never real good in genres at all :)
    I hope that peoples don´t have to be crazy to like this ....

    The music itself isn´t from me. I just made a master mix from the stems from Mr. ShortBusMusic for his competition. Ok, this mix is a bit different to the most other master mixes from his stems but it is still his work, ´cause i didn´t change much. Mostly i changed it just to a minimal version

    So thanks again for your nice comment and it is nice to know that you love this little lovesong

    stay tuned
    joe

  3. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Thu 4th Jun 2015 - 4 years ago

    Haha, Joe...you brought back some nice memories , you jungle -lover boy:)...but far from just that....cause this is completely new and fresh twist on this familiar tune...how could I have overlooked this before...am I blind or it's just the Alien in my stomach the guilty one..:) This sounds incredibly and as always with a proper dose of refined sarcasm. And production....ahhh yes, production is criminally insane with its perfected crystal clarity. it's beyond me how this haven't got a single 'fav' yet!!??..well, here is one now!:)

    Hat's off and respect______Orlando

    p.s Ohh shit...now I see I already posted a comment 7 months ago....I guess I was thinking too much of Iggy then...today was more focused.:)

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    :) Thanks a lot for the fav Orlando

    Realy cool that you like it at the second time more then the first time.

    This Iggy thing is tooo cool, ´cause i realy like much of his stuff but i never had the idea in mind that i sound in a way like him. Maybe it´s what the Thai people call
    SAME SAME BUT DIFFRENT ... i think it is the kind of talking/singing/timeing that makes you and SBM believe it sounds like Iggy

    Always nice to hear something from you
    I realy enjoyed your comment

    stay tuned
    joe

  4. Axion
    Axion on Sun 9th Nov 2014 - 4 years ago

    Very cheerful song right here. I like it all!

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks a lot Axion for your friendly comment
    Nice to know that you like it

    stay tuned
    joe

  5. ShortBusMusic
    ShortBusMusic on Fri 7th Nov 2014 - 4 years ago

    Great work Joe. Your voice does sound quite a bit like Iggy Pop, and that's a great big compliment for sure. Like SJ suggested, the vox just need a little bit of reverb and placed a bit farther back in the mix. Other than that small critique, I wouldn't change a thing. Well done Joe, really well done. I hope all is well.

    Bear

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Thanks Bear for this nice comment.
    I hoped that you like it, `cause it´s your music.

    I made a little update with some more reverb over the voxs. And a few little changes on the levels and so but not sure :) like mostly :) about the result ...... itz much more easy to say "a bit farther back" then to do (for me)

    Hope i didnt change it to the bader, if, tell me and i reupload the old version :)

    Thanks for the listen and the helping words

    stay tuned
    joe

  6. promenade2239
    promenade2239 on Fri 7th Nov 2014 - 4 years ago

    hi, I like the special colour you achieved here and some old-styled manner in your voice. This is very nice. Is it inspired by some specific songs or style?
    Anyway I really enjoyed your song - I had that impression something was missing on this competition track and you filled it up very well.
    Very nice work, Alex

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey Alex

    I am happy that you enjoyed the listen and found it nice.

    No, this isnt inspired by someone special. In fakt it is realy made just for (or maybe by) this minimal master of SMB´s track that i made. I had the words already in my mind when i done the last version of the mastering comp.

    Cool to hear that you believe that this filled the comp track very well.

    So thanks for your friendly words and the time you spent.

    stay tuned
    joe

  7. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Wed 5th Nov 2014 - 4 years ago

    Does your vocal delivery remind me on Iggy Pop, or am I halucinating?:)

    Cheers____orlando

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    :) mmmm Iggy - thats a compliment - thanks a lot Orlando.

    So thanks a lot for this friendly words

    stay tuned
    joe

  8. SeriouslyJoking
    SeriouslyJoking on Wed 5th Nov 2014 - 4 years ago

    Hahaha! This is great!
    It has this slippery, smoshy feeling over the lyris and all over your voice - as there should be in a love song.

    I think your vox could benefit from having a little more distance, at the moment it's very close to the ear somehow. Maybe a touch of reverb and delay and maybe layering it a few times also in between the chorus.

    The instrumental it self is one of my favourites here.

    Cheers!
    / SJ =)

    joecramer
    Reply by joecramer

    Hey SJ

    A slippery voice :) thats cool in a way.

    And you are right, i am not 100% happy with the vox.
    I think i will do some more takes and see how i can master it a bit better.

    So thanks for your comment and your little help.

    stay tuned
    joe

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HOME - joe cramer 17.09.2014
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I was lost - in the jungle
In the jungle of love - i lost my mind.

But there was a girl - in the jungle of love.
She took my hand and said - I know the way.

We followed the river - out of the jungle
We followed the river - down to the beach - and she said
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Come on lets go down - down to the beach
Come on boy let's go down - down on the beach - and she smiled
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There are a million stars - they shine every night
each one for a lover - in this universe

There should be two new - in the sky tonight
Will you be my lover? - Will you hold me tight? - and she said

I will guide you tonight - to the place that you lost
`cause you can't walk on - this way alone.
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I will stay - with you - right on your side
I wanna be - you lover - be two stars in the night

I will follow you - blind - wherever you go
Please follow the way - that I don't know.

Take me home - Take me home
Take me home - tonight
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