Description : 2nd track of my future vocaloid album, Acerbus 2.Many thanks to Spells for the Drums!

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  1. JWilson
    JWilson on Tue 17th Nov 2015 - 8 years ago

    Really love the melodic tone and vocal instrumentation.
    If you don't mind, I put up a remix to this and wanted your thoughts on it.

    https://soundcloud.com/ythejoshuatreey/on-n-on-jwilson-remix

    Eighteen
    Reply by Eighteen

    I am very honored that u remixed my song :D
    I'm happy that u like it,
    very nice man, I like it!

    Cheers!

    ~Eighteen

  2. Mosaic
    Mosaic on Tue 23rd Jun 2015 - 8 years ago

    Hey 18

    Has a highland sound when first starts to me, different sounding piece but in a seriously good way, love the vocals, great effects on the vocals, so different again but captivating, something special about this piece mate...Everything sounds like it is all in the right place, making for a very impressive listen...Wish it was longer, but no matter, will have another listen before leaving the track...FV...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

  3. ShortBusMusic
    ShortBusMusic on Mon 26th Jan 2015 - 9 years ago

    Very original and different, and definitely different in a good way. As Joe said, the music world is always on the lookout for something original, something new that we haven't heard before. This is very creative and like the others, I just wish it had been another two minutes longer, haha. I enjoyed this one. Well done. I hope all is well.

    Bear

    Eighteen
    Reply by Eighteen

    haha :D thanks man!
    yeah I love to make diffrent things xD

    Very maybe I will extend this song later on, now I am also a bit dissapointed about the lenght of the song, also the quality can be a bit better in my opinion.
    tnx for the feedback :D

    ~Eighteen

  4. Venuslove
    Venuslove on Fri 23rd Jan 2015 - 9 years ago

    pretty song :)

    Eighteen
    Reply by Eighteen

    Thanksss :D

  5. TheSavage
    TheSavage on Mon 19th Jan 2015 - 9 years ago

    A unique sound here, I like the vocal modulation effects. Nice melody too!

    Eighteen
    Reply by Eighteen

    Thank u very much =^^=

  6. FreeRadical
    FreeRadical on Mon 19th Jan 2015 - 9 years ago

    This is something a little different and also very cool. Love the way you've blended that vocal in with the music. It's got sort of an eastern house vibe to it and it's something i've not heard before so kudos for originality.
    The mix has been done beautifully as well.
    Really like this piece.
    FR

    Eighteen
    Reply by Eighteen

    Thanks man :D Yeah I'm all about being a little different haha.

    cheers!

  7. ValveDriver
    ValveDriver on Fri 16th Jan 2015 - 9 years ago

    This is a pretty nice little tune.

    It does kind of an Asian sounding vocal melody, even though it's in English. That alone makes it pretty unique. The layering and panning on the vocals are good. There's plenty of dynamics. Sounds good.

    The kick is nice and full without cutting out anything else. The hats are clean with a nice sizzle but not too bright for the mix. I think the only problem I have with this, other than being too short, is that the snares are a little buried in the mix. You could probably stand to boost them a little. But, not by much. But, that's just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth.

    Take care.
    V.

    Eighteen
    Reply by Eighteen

    Oh yes now I understand what the others mean with the japanese stuff, indeed I am kinda in love with oldskool JRPG game music, so I guess I kinda always put something in my songs that sounds like that a bit :)

    yes the song is indeed short, I was trying to challenge myself into making a song as short as posible, but still being able to fit a lot in it, you know?
    though when I listen back to it xD I kinda want it to be longer haha. oh well, next time I will make my song a bit longer.

    I agree on the snares, I couldn't get them quite right with my current skills :(

    Anyhoo thanks for ur kind words :D cheers!

    ~Eighteen

  8. soundhound
    soundhound on Wed 14th Jan 2015 - 9 years ago

    Got that Japanese Funk goin on...Very nicely done not easy to do and keep
    that flow happening but you banged this one on the head, the nail that is...
    Tight harmonies locked in top shelf stuff...I like it...

    Peace...TG.

    Eighteen
    Reply by Eighteen

    Haha it's fun to read your comment.
    I also really appreciate what u said, Thanksss :)
    Glad you like it,

    Cheers

    ~Eighteen

  9. Danke
    Danke on Wed 14th Jan 2015 - 9 years ago

    Very cool track with Chinese, Japanese kinda vocs...short but essential...easy listening...

    Respect and shake hands, Danke

    Eighteen
    Reply by Eighteen

    Very nice to hear :D thanks man!
    it is indeed a bit japanese-like, though th vocals are english, but hard to make out most of the time,
    thats why I wrote lyrics to clear them up a little :) only the chorus though

    Cheers!

    ~Eighteen

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