ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic comments on tracks

ShortBusMusic has posted 1167 comments on other peoples tracks.

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ShortBusMusic 19th Sep 2014 07:03 - 11 years ago

on House Full Of Lonely by Twanna1

You are just sooooooo good!!!! Seriously, I cannot for the life of me figure out why your music isn't playing on radios, IPods, IPhones, all over this country. Maybe I should lobby "The Voice" and see if we can't get you on national TV. Your father would be so proud of this one.

This is seriously radio ready. Allen is such a huge talent, but when he jumps in and plays along with your amazing voice....well, it is a bit of auditory magic.

I'm definitely adding this one to my favorites, and I will enjoy again and again here on Looperman.

You, young lady, are incredible. But I think maybe you already knew that. I hope all is well.

Bear

Twanna1 replied 19th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago

I just love you, Bear...You always touch me with what you say! So heartfelt. I pray that you and your lovely wife are both well. It feels so great to reconnect!!

As I told TG in my response to him, I can only say in due season. Believe it or not, I auditioned for The Voice, TWICE. Was turned down both times. That's why I say, in due season. Doors seem be closed around me, but that does not stop me from creating. Music is who I am...who He has designed me to be.

The scripture keeps coming to mind, James 1:4 - But endurance must do its complete work, so that you may be mature and complete, lacking nothing." This is wisdom.

Much love to you both and God bless.

Twanna

ShortBusMusic 19th Sep 2014 03:11 - 11 years ago

on Proximal Vicinity Spivkurl Mix 13B Master B by Spivkurl

Somehow, I knew when I hit the play button this was going to be something quite special, and as always Pat, you did not disappoint. There are many of us who aspire to do great things with the mixing and mastering side of things, and then there are a few like you and Malu who set the standard for the rest of us to follow.

There is just so much space on this one....it seems like the stereo field is endless. I also like the way you were able to bring the bass forward and still allow the rest of the instruments to breathe.

You truly are a master at sound design. Epic effort my friend. Thank you for working on this and for contributing such a great track. I hope all is well.

Bear

Spivkurl replied 11th Oct 2014 - 11 years ago

Bear, you are too kind! I'm just so pleased that the effort I put into this did not go unnoticed! I've rarely done this kind of detail work on full length audio files, and I guess it was worth it. I also was using a few new effects in my chains that I hadn't really tried before, and this helped me get to know what they were good for. To be in a class anywhere near Mahloo is just so cool to me, as he obviously knows what he's doing, so thank you for that! Even with the subtle mistakes, your stems were some of the best audio I have worked with when mixing someone else's song, so that helped a lot. Working with your song really helped bring me back to the mono compatibility school of thought, and that is helping me with my own work. I am loving the plugins which have a mono version included, because when I drop those on a track, it's instantly summed to mono and not just centered. Thank you so much for the comment, running the competition, and the T-shirt!

ShortBusMusic 17th Sep 2014 15:32 - 11 years ago

on Proximal Vicinity by Psychedeletribe

First let me say, welcome to Looperman. Second let me say this is really a nice clean crispy mix. Accenting the highs gives a completely different feel to this one from many of the others. Great use of panning all of the instruments and ending up with a really nice stereo field. The transition into the third movement was nicely done.

There are some really great mixes in this competition and this one ranks right up there with the others. Well done and a big thanks for throwing your hat into the ring. I hope all is well.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 14th Sep 2014 16:04 - 11 years ago

on PROXIMAL VICINITY by strscottT

Well, I think there just may be a new sheriff in town :) Beautiful mix, with a wonderful sound field. Everything is sitting nicely in the mix, exactly where it should be. And you did a great job working with stems that had reverb/delay/compression beforehand. It shows you have some major production skills.

Seriously Joking was able to point out another flaw in the original stems...the guitar that comes in at the 2:25 mark is playing a minor chord when the rest of the instruments are playing a major. That guitar needs to have the 3rd note pitched to mesh with the rest of the instruments or eliminate that note entirely (just another little challenge I tossed in).

As far as the mix and master goes, yours is definitely at the top of the food chaine. Well done. You know your stuff. Thanks for entering and good luck. I hope all is well.

Bear

strscottT replied 17th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks short bus... yeah about that gtr, didn't know if I was to fix it?? well I just kinda did it quick, I spent 2 1/2 on it. I think I spent more time trying to get it up on the site.. lol.. :) but it was fun... the people on here really seem like great peeps and been listening to some really nice music.. glad I joined..

ShortBusMusic 9th Sep 2014 23:34 - 11 years ago

on Realm Ft Oceanically by promenade2239

Outstanding keyboard improvisation Alex. This song is just about as chilled as it gets. Great pacing throughout. Loved the mix on it as well. There is a lot of great things going on in this one. One of the best songs I've heard this week.

Stellar work Alex and a song worthy of being a favorite. Thanks for sharing it with all of us. I hope all is well.

Bear

promenade2239 replied 12th Oct 2014 - 11 years ago

hi Bear, sorry for a slow reply on this one. It's so nice to read your very kind comments - thanks a lot! Really glad you enjoyed my playing and the track - more music soon!
Greetings, Alex

ShortBusMusic 9th Sep 2014 23:26 - 11 years ago

on fight the fear by DanGoldstein

Really nice cinematic effort Dan. Great use of percussion to move the track along from one stage to another. There isn't anything to really critique here....the mix is spot on, the composition is solid, and the execution is outstanding.

You really do have a gift for composing great music. Keep it up man, we need more music like yours in this world. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear

DanGoldstein replied 10th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago

appreciate it very much Bear. all is well. won't let the day job break me and won't give up the dream. I felt I got to a little better place with the percs on this one. your thumbs up on that was a big boost. all the best. Dan

ShortBusMusic 7th Sep 2014 16:12 - 11 years ago

on When You by VickyDan

My friend it is always good to have you return to Looperman, but it is even better when you return with a song. I think normal adjectives fall short trying to describe just how good this is. Ed and Michael are in a league of their own, but when you couple their talents with your immense talent and ability...well, you get something very special indeed.

Sometimes when words fail me, it is best to simply acknowledge by standing and applauding and saying BRAVO!!!

I have downloaded this one to enjoy many more times today. FOr now, I fill my coffee cup, hit the play button again, and let you take me somewhere else. Thanks for the beautiful interlude Dan. I hope life settles down for you, and that the fall is peaceful on your little corner of the world.

Bravo maestro, bravo.

Barry

ShortBusMusic 7th Sep 2014 16:00 - 11 years ago

on Psakoudia by spauly

I don't know anything about the genre, but I do know a well constructed song when I hear one. Because I lack any knowledge of deep house, I cannot give you any tips to improve. However, I do think this one has a chilled vibe that would work well in video or film. It's a great track to plug into the CD player and hit the road with. Really nice job.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 3rd Sep 2014 16:03 - 11 years ago

on Proximal Vicinity By ShortBusMusic EazyBeatz Edit by EazyBeatz

Hey Eazy, great percussion on this one.....really does increase the drama a bunch. I would say it would work really well in a film or television show. Definitely has a current vibe to it. It is always great to hear a remix from a talented person like yourself.

Definitely added to my favorites. Maybe next time I'll do a remix competition with another tune. Outstanding effort my friend. I hope all is well.

Bear

EazyBeatz replied 4th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago

Hi there!!!!!! , I am so relieved and happy that you enjoyed this piece Mr. (ShortBus) , then reading u say that you favorited the track just sent me over the clouds!! thank you for being so kind my friend, and please stay tuned!! -EazyBeatz :)

ShortBusMusic 3rd Sep 2014 15:58 - 11 years ago

on Here I Shall Lay by beerling1970

Hey Steve, I have to mirror the others....this is thoughtful, well planned and even better executed. Absolutely beautiful and something the listener can get lost in. Fantastic work as usual. I hope all is well.

Bear

beerling1970 replied 3rd Sep 2014 - 11 years ago

Bear,
thank you so much for taking the time to listen and comment :)

Steve

ShortBusMusic 3rd Sep 2014 15:50 - 11 years ago

on Modnex - Circus by Modnex

Hey Modnex, very nice!! I would think this one could be playing in any of the clubs in Las Vegas....it is mainstream enough to appeal to the masses, but also different enough to appeal to those that don't conform.

Nice crisp mix on it too. Radio ready I would say. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear

Modnex replied 3rd Sep 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks Bear! I agree with you, this does have a mainstream sound to it as well as sound different which is always a good thing. I'm happy you enjoyed this, take care!

ShortBusMusic 3rd Sep 2014 15:45 - 11 years ago

on Wir lagen vor Madakaskar by joecramer

Hey Joe, really creative work here. I haven't heard the original shanty, but I know you have put a really cool modern tilt to it and it works really well. Like I said, it isn't easy to take a song that is over 80 years old and make it work in today's market.

Outstanding effort. It is a little bit long, but what the heck, it is a shanty. They are supposed to be long :)

Bear

joecramer replied 3rd Sep 2014 - 11 years ago

Hello ShortBusMusic

Thanks for your kind words.
I am happy that you think it works.

Maybe i realy should do a -Madagaskar- track,
with the knowing that i do a -Madagaskar- track.

....the only thing is, my daughter hates the lyrics
- to depresive - :) so i have to do it in the night

stay tuned
joe

ShortBusMusic 2nd Sep 2014 16:21 - 11 years ago

on Proximal Vicinity Short Bus Mixing Comp by fixxxer

Hey Fixxxer, like Simon says, nobody will kick you for this effort. You really did clean things up a bunch. The biggest challenge in this mix was the sheer number of instruments trying to occupy the same space, especially the guitars. I think you did a good job cleaning up the majority of the mud. And I like the way you emphasized the woodwind at the end as well.

Overall, I would say you rose to the challenge and produced a really nice mix and master. Well done my friend. I thank you for participating and your support. I hope all is well.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 2nd Sep 2014 16:14 - 11 years ago

on Proximal Vicinity - ShortBusMusic Mix Comp by WongKiShoo

George, man this is soooooo nice. Crispy, crispy mix, with a fantastic bottom end. Loved the way you panned the intro. I can hear all of the instruments really well, and that's the key to a great mix. I think you cleaned up the timing issues fairly well. The percussion really sounds sharp, and I think the reason for that is your vast experience working with house music.

I really enjoyed your interpretation. I am downloading as we speak, and when all of the entries are in, I am going to make a CD of them and put them in my car's audio system for the ultimate test. You are a true pro my friend. Outstanding effort. Thanks for participating. I hope all is well.

Bear

WongKiShoo replied 5th Sep 2014 - 11 years ago

Hey Bear :)

I just wanna say thanks for putting this comp up in the first place.. I had to go out of my way to learn how to do certain things and as a result I'm now far more conscious about mixing in mono/stereo and more comfortable using the plugins I have at my disposal! :D

Thanks again

George

ShortBusMusic 1st Sep 2014 23:47 - 11 years ago

on Proximal Vicinity- Short Bus mixing comp by Ensam

Simon, beautiful work!

The pitching of the piano was a really smart move because there were a lot of things occupying the mids. Love the delay on the percussion. You cleaned up all of the timing issues. I think the most impressive thing is the amount of clarity given to each instrument, and then the outstanding use of dynamics to build to the end.

I knew you would set the bar really high for the others, and you did just that. This shows just how good a great producer/arranger can make a song in the studio. You illustrate that even when given stems that are not quite up to standards, a gifted engineer can make them sound really impressive.

I thank you for showing just how good this one could sound. Bravo my friend. It will be fun to see how the competition responds to this terrific effort.

I hope all is well with you and the family.

Bear

Ensam replied 2nd Sep 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks Bear, I'm glad you liked it. I have always enjoyed working on your tunes, they are well written making my job easy.

Thanks for your too kind words and let the games begin lol ;)

Simon

ShortBusMusic 24th Aug 2014 16:05 - 11 years ago

on The Source ft FutureAnalysis by promenade2239

For the most part, I like what you have done here....but I'm not sure the vocal part - especially the sections with the recognizable "Titanic" melody - actually works with the rest of what you have done. Having that melody is OK, but I think it detracts from the great work you have done on the instrumental underneath it. Perhaps you could find a different vocal that wouldn't stand out quite as much.

Or you could leave it as is, because I'm an idiot and don't know what I am talking about, haha. Seriously though, it is a great fusion cinematic piece worthy of a film. Beautifully crafted. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear

promenade2239 replied 24th Aug 2014 - 11 years ago

Hi and many thanks for your comment.
I do not know music from 'Titanic', haha:) byt think all
vocal lines are really good here and I like this composition exactly the way as it is. Of course it is possible to extend it and add some another sections for example with some instrumental improvisations or just work on it again and see what comes up more:)
Nice day to you,
A.

ShortBusMusic 15th Aug 2014 16:04 - 11 years ago

on Stay with me till dawn featuring Pauline Wright by RichieWinn

Richie, I always know I am in for a major treat when I see you have a new song posted. In addition to your massive talents as a musician and producer/arranger, I think what sets you apart from us mere mortals is your attention to detail.

I've got no critique here, just massive amounts of respect for what you do - and how well you do it.

And Pauline isn't too shabby either, haha.

It's great to have you drop a new track my friend, downloaded (much appreciated) to listen to and enjoy again and again. I hope all is well.

Bear

RichieWinn replied 16th Aug 2014 - 11 years ago

Hi Barry

Thank you so much for your kind words. It really is very rewarding to hear your view of my work and to pick up on aspects I take care and time on. There is a saying "It's all in the detail" and in that respect I guess I'm a subscriber!

Yes, Pauline is a massive talent with a huge heart and wonderful disposition. I am so lucky to be working with her not only in the studio but in a live band too. It doesn't get much better.

Thanks again and best regards.

Richie

ShortBusMusic 15th Aug 2014 15:57 - 11 years ago

on Motivation - Featuring Bo K by ScottFranco

Hey Scott and Franco, every time I see you guys have a new tune, I know it is going to be solid gold and this one is no exception. What a great collection of seriously talented musicians. Superb vocals, and a professional mix on top of it all.

This track is radio ready gents, it is that good. Keep up the great work. A tip of the hat to all involved. I hope all is well.

Bear

ScottFranco replied 20th Aug 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks allot, Bear. That's quite high praise coming from a fine musician as yourself. You certainly humble us and give us much encouragement.

Ciao,
Franco & Scott

ShortBusMusic 21st Jul 2014 03:44 - 11 years ago

on In Between feat Minette by brotbackautomat

This is stimply as good as it gets. I would imagine this may be what Minette had in mind when she originally worked out the vox and melody. Professional work from start to finish.

Now, you are responsible for me not being able to get this out of my head, hahaha.

Sensational work. I hope all is well.

Bear

brotbackautomat replied 21st Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

thx and sorry :-)

ShortBusMusic 13th Jul 2014 16:10 - 11 years ago

on mooon collab with Skylawker by DanGoldstein

Dan, really impressive work. It is not easy to take an existing track, then add another minute to it, and make it all sound like it was all done at the same time. Really impressive work. I love the dissonance on this one that the piano provided, and again was impressed that you were able to continue that message to the end of the piece.

Well done. A tip of the hat to both of you. I hope all is well.

Bear

DanGoldstein replied 13th Aug 2014 - 11 years ago

Bear - that was the encouragement I needed, although I felt at the time that it was still not quite there. was hoping for some feedback from the collab before committing too far. since then I smoothed things out considerably I think and would consider pressing on if collab is into it. thanks for comment very much. regards.

ShortBusMusic 12th Jul 2014 16:13 - 11 years ago

on Violent Reaction by locatednowhere

I thought since I was here I would give another tune a listen and you did not disappoint. Once again, great crunchy guitar work. Are you putting mics on your amps or playing through something like a Line 6 to get that great tone?

I am impressed for sure. Really well done, and again, a nice tight mix. Much respect.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 12th Jul 2014 16:10 - 11 years ago

on The Other Side Of Nowhere by locatednowhere

Well, this is the first time I have listened to your work (I apologize for that), but I am glad I have discovered it. Wonderful guitar work...love that big fat sound you get and that crunchy tone on the rhythm. Sounds like a Mesa Boogie Triple Rectifier. Anyway, I digress.

Outstanding effort. Now you just need vocals and you will really have something here. Mix was spot on as well. I hope all is well.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 12th Jul 2014 16:02 - 11 years ago

on The Other Side by cosmicinfluence

Well, like Static stated, your learning curve has been about as rapid and steep as it gets. This one really sounds like it has been mixed in a studio. Really crisp and all of the elements in the mix are sitting exactly where they should be. I actually think the vocals work well in this....one thing you might consider next time is doing some harmony work on the chorus to give the vox a bigger feel in those sections. That's just a bit of nit picking on my part though...this one is solid from the very start and stays that way through to the end.

Well done, really well done. It will be fun to watch you continue to progress. You are rapidly becoming one of the ace production people on this site.

Bear

cosmicinfluence replied 12th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

waw, now that is a great review. thanks a lot. yes, think I might actualy go backn and add some harmony. good suggestion. will actualy do that, I can hear what u r saying there. thanks again for the good review.
Graham.

ShortBusMusic 11th Jul 2014 22:36 - 11 years ago

on Marys Secret by jerrywaitsjr

Beautiful work Jerry. Really beautiful lyrics with a great delivery. Man your voice is so good. I thought this one was pretty special when Jeroen first added his magic, but now it has gone to a whole new level. I think the vox in the beginning is a bit back in the mix, but by the last third of the song it just seemed to blossom and was absolute perfection.

My friend, this is really something special. I am thrilled that both of you took an interest in my piano musings and took that little piece to a whole different level.

I'll stand now and give you the applause you deserve, and hit play and give it another listen. Thanks for sharing this one with all of us. I hope all is well.

Bear

ShortBusMusic 11th Jul 2014 07:54 - 11 years ago

on Miss You by Ensam

Wonderful!!! You really took her vocals and put them to great use in this atmospheric wonder. This is beautiful work Simon....nothing to critique here. This song is a sonic vehicle that allows me to lie back, relax, close my eyes, and let it take me somewhere else. It seems the time away has only sharpened your amazing skill sets.

What a spectacular return. It's great to have you back. I hope all is well with you and the family.

Bear

Ensam replied 11th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks Bear, always good to hear from you. Maybe we should get back to doing something together again sometime......

Simon

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