You Cant Get Far - Cestevens1783

Beautiful. I played around with it a bit but the voice and single guitar are just too perfect the way they are.Cheers

GREAT vocal work here Charlene!!!
Loved it.

beautiful just beautiful as always! nice work again! thanks for sharing! cheers! :)

Very nice track, lots of feel in your voice and I like that clean sound very
Natural, you don't have to hide behind anything...It's that Rich...

Solid piece of work Young Lady....

Peace...TG.

Wow...Really nice! Beautiful voice. Wayne's guitar loop is fine, also.

I think I will send this to Franco and see if he wants to take it further. Would you happen to have a separate vocal track?

Cheers,
Scott

Really great performance on the singing, the vocal layering is sweet and I dig the lyrics! I love singer songwriter stuff, a guitar and singer is so honest and exposing to a degree. Great job, glad I could contribute in a small way to this wonderful track.

faved and dl'd, thanks for sharing!

Wayne

Great track again! Fav'd. Since your voice itself fits perfectly into your tracks, it needs no changing at all. As for constructive criticism, as ValVedriVer said, maybe a bit of reverb would go in nicely here. Top track though, really good.

Kind regards,

Steve

Man, that voice! Gets me every time even though I'm expecting it now that I've heard your work. Your voice has so much emotion in every note. You have a real talent with melody, contrast and timing in the way you write melodies and sing them. I'm no vocal expert but I know what sounds good to my ears :)

I'm a fan and I faved!
RW

Real nice track !!! Luv the soft tone to your voice... Good work !! would luv to collab with you some day.

Jody

You have the rare ability to make the same loop interesting for four minutes.

Always love the voice and your layering is great.

And yes, Beardyman is awesome.

Evan

Great feel... sweet voice... Authentic. Would be fun to produce you.

Mark

You'll get a lot of love for this one and probably a good few collaborations. That's because it's really good and your voice sounds the best I've heard it sound.

Simple, effective guitar chords and the vocal sentiment is good.

My crazy idea won't happen but it's what I'd try to do if I were going to download and work on it.

So, it would be extremely obvious to just add some rock drums, strings, bass etc and you'd have a commercial sort of potentially hit pop song. But it would sound like a whole load of others.

So, as you're just singing over the same loop, I'd make the different verses different genres. So, the obvious pop/rock drums, then drum 'n' bass, then dub/reggae and so on.

That would really be interesting and set it apart from various other songs I've heard that sound similar. So, you and the guitar stay the same but everything/nearly everything else changes every minute or so.

I shouldn't think anyone will actually do it but I can hear in my head how it would work.

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Beardyman treat. This one's 20 minutes of excellent, unplanned fun:

Comedy Lounge - Beardyman on BBC Radio 1

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SUKJA4UAruw

Any time I see that you've added your vocals to anything, I have to listen. Generally, two or three times. As per usual, you don't disappoint with this one.

I think with the nature of the song, and the lyrical content, a little heavier reverb on the vocals would be good. It would give that distance to your voice that the lyrics describe. That hollowness, if you will. But, that's just my opinion. Either way, it's a good solid track as it is. Thank you for sharing. It really is our treat.

Take care.
V.