joecramer

I knew this had to be a killer work after seeing the two involved in this final product! You've both done excellent performances here!

Definitely does have a classic rock vibe to the instruments and mix. There is nothing wrong with that at all! It reminds me a bit of The Doors, on songs where Manzarek's organ was backed up by a "real" bassist.

It's interesting to read from those in "western" and "developed" nations, who think of war, and think of somewhere far away. I, on the other hand, live in this heartland bread basket, and think of it as the front lines. Sure, it may be a different war, but it is just as serious in impact to the future. I think of it a bit like the war which was being fought against the Dakota tribe in our area at the same time as our "civil" war... totally different front lines. It almost feels like the war that is remembered was simply a distraction from the atrocities. I don't think it is a coincidence that history books about this era are being thrown away by our libraries.

There are a lot of days when I wish I had a rocket launcher, in order to drop crop duster planes from the sky, or to leave the parks and forestry vehicles in smoldering piles. Then I would be forced to disappear - or be picked up in the night, never to be seen again. Life during wartime, right?

Either way, your song was thought provoking and also musically enjoyable! Very cool work from you two! Fave! Thank you for sharing!

Always when one makes a song that is close to them emotionally, the best comes out, as did in this one Joe. executed perfectly. I agree dif OS.

Steve

Good song overall. I can hear your vocals clearly though, I just wish they were louder.

I agree with the first comment, I'd say speaking a bit clearer or maybe just adding a compressor to the vocals would've made them louder. Otherwise, you can obviously tell this song comes from deep within, and has real meaning. The composition and overall atmosphere of the track is kind of dark, but its a beautiful darkness. Good work my friend.

Nice virtual accordion sounds ! It goes surprisingly well with that bluesy loop.
I really like coming across such tracks. It's completely different and offers a refreshing taste of original music.
Nice work, thanks for sharing !

dang that kick is hard af really like it. Not a huge fan of this genre usually but this is pretty cool! nice job!

hello Joe,

A little bit linear for me, i was expected for variations or breaks. In fact, the render is pleasant and i'm quite sure if you add a lead (synth or other instrument) your track will take some volume.

congrates
Bleep

I'm ready to fire up my bf4. The sounds like a final level sound track

Hi Joe not seen you around for a while.
To the English ear especially one who doesn't understand German there are two effects;
One is the language sounds very harsh.
Two it sounds fantastic to music especially modern day electronic music.
You have the perfect voice for modern music.

Guess I have missed this one for a long time Joe...it could also work as a soundtrack...quite a dramatic vibe...I enjoyed it and I always enjoy your vocal work even though I do not understand the words (and I don`t need to to hear the picture you paint musically)...you have a great vocal character for this...perhaps I have said that before but it strikes me every time as special....well done...Ed

Hello Joe
Wow Joe when did you release this one then because it seems to me that I have missed it
But hey, as usual with a warm and wonderful voice of joe it seems like you’ve just released it.
It is a great track joe I really like it.
Well done my good friend.
Jamid

This is a really cool piece, and in a style which is not well represented here on the Loop. Puts me in mind of blues rock ballads, maybe from the mid sixties or something. Seems not to be a popular sort of song now, but maybe songs such as this will change that. I always enjoyed folk a bit more than blues, but excellent ballads are common in both. This sounds like a new sort of classic to my ears, or at least it will be if you can work with Burt further on the composition. I enjoyed reading the lyrics, as I usually do, and again I thank you for the translation. I find the process of translation itself to be very interesting, considering that though processes seem a bit shifted depending on native languages. Very special song! Fave!

Do you know FRONT242? (think yes because, like us, your german :)) Your track have some similar aspects with songs from this band

nice work
Bleep

this kind of singing make me think to leonard cohen (rip, it was a genious): a low and deep voice.
On an instrumental plan, there's some blues in your rock ;) that's why i won't say it's dark, i'd rather say it's full of sadness :)

nice track
Friendly
Bleep

Thank you so very much. I will put your links up.

this does have a western feel with a pinch of dark. the deeper voice is perfect for that dark feel. when the backup choir enters at 4:07 it would sound good with mabe a slightly louder bass beat. just a flavor suggestion. Is great the way it is though. guitars are smooth. great for a guide line for me. may try anouther guitar piece. great song.

Haven't seen your tracks in a while. Really liked the western vibe in this song and i love german language in songs.

Hey hey Joe...I have never thought that the meeting mit dem teufel will be so pleasurable ! That into set the scene for me just pefectly ! Burton's guitars are just tailor made for that sort of a vibe amd your vocal delivery is always
a very special treat! You two make an extraordinary team together! Can't do anything else than send this to my 'fav'drawer...excellent!

Compliments_____Orlando

Cool, dark, brooding style of rock. Sets an ominous tone right from the beginning with southern/swamp blues style guitars. The lyrics fit the music well and tell a great story, well done Joe!

Wayne

It's great to be able to be in other works, just like you did.
A mix of artists in a single song, you built the mix well using the elements, it's a very important skill, and you made sure of that song.
The musical genre would look better in Cinema, because of the story of the message you made in the vowel.
Thank you for using my loops and helping other creators, this is very important.
Thank you for providing the song to download.

Anubis

Hee eigendlich coole Elemente drinn, aber die Mische ist etwas speziell.. Wenn du willst kannst du mir die Patterns schicken nd ich misch dir das Ding ab. Am besten ohne Effekte!^^ Kontaktier mich doch hier oder über squennix@gmail.com. Ich mach das kostenlos.

I am putting together a radio stream in memory of my son who died of cystic fibrosis and wondered if you would give me permission to use this track, and others which you have uploaded. The stream will be ad free and will not pay royalties, but it will be linked to a website on which I would be happy to give you a credit and any links you might like.

The Chorus is so Teutonic. I liked this one, you really processed Burts guitars, but it works well. I´m humming to myself Hey. Hey. Heyyyy! Teufelwerk indeed.
Cru

I really love the style and the feel of this track. Reading the lyrics, along with the repeating guitar phrases and lyrics, give the song a similar feeling to a beat poem. The music is accompanying the words, rather than the words accompanying the music. This really suited your vocal style as well. It feels like you've found your 'sound'. Great work.

TA

hi there nice song and music but i feel like your voice could be a bit higher.