Listen To DJ Nicolas CAT - Arabian Streets ( House ) House Song By NickCAT At Looperman.com

I have to say this is the best I've heard today so far :)

Definitely original...

Around the 1:20 marker what I was expecting was a big drop into a nice bass line and a pounding beat instead of a break. The percussion break IS nice, but I wouldn't expect to hear that until 3/4's of the way through the track.

I know this is a demo version, but I would expect a house track to be a lot longer than it currently is.

What I hear at the moment is:

- Intro/build
- Verse
- Verse
- Break
- Break/build
- Verse
- Verse/Break
- DJ Nicholas CAT - (nice touch by the way)

This has the potential to be an absolutely brilliant track. But it really really needs a big catchy bass line, so in my opinion, do some rearranging.

- Move the percussion break and save it for later in the track
- Insert in it's a place a chorus with a bass line for like 16
bars
- Roll the arabian string again
- Back into the chorus
- THEN HAVE YOUR BREAKDOWN/BUILD HERE
- Back into the chorus for a final time
- Then your outro

As it stands, what I hear is very good - but it could be brilliant. That's why I've taken the time to give my advice in this long post. It's down to you whether you take it or not. I'm not a professional but I do know a little about track structure...

I would absolutely love to hear this track when it is finished, hopefully with a chorus and a bass line

Hope this helps,

Toonz