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19th Nov 2010 04:10 - 14 years ago
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Description : down tempo acoustic song i have just done hope you like it

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If you have time take a listen and give kerry some feedback.

ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 4th Dec 2010 15:56 - 14 years ago
First, my compliments to the guitar player (is that you?). It is first class acoustic work for sure.

As far as the vocals go, I think they are bordering on clipping in a few spots, and it is probably due to the mic you are using, the recording level it is set at, and possibly the distance you are from the mic. You may have the recording level a bit too high. This can cause issues when you want to put more natural volume or emphasis into your vocal work (dynamics). If you lower the recording level just a bit, and move back away from the mic a little, it will allow you to sing with a bit more force.

One thing to remember, most people have a tendency to sing a little flat when they sing softly. By opening up and using your diaphragm, you will able to stay on pitch throughout.

You have a nice, warm quality to your voice. The only thing keeping you from being a superstar is your equipment and how you use it. Keep singing and working on it.

Please don't take this as criticism. I really enjoyed this and am off to listen to another of yours. Thanks for posting.
Gordw
Gordw 28th Nov 2010 02:04 - 14 years ago
Love acoustic, feeling the lyrics you wrote. You have very nice vocals. Keep writing and playing. Take Care
Gord
inspire_nung
inspire_nung 19th Nov 2010 15:30 - 14 years ago
I would not say that good. But they are emotionally attached to me.
Noise Sound, it looks well suited to this song but a bit too much.
Guitars sound is very good. I can feel your perception of all notes.
You play guitar very well. Your voice is very suitable for this style. It gives the sense of the traditional 80-90's rock music feel is not roughly, like today.

try to record a new singing by take better microphone that can support your voice and compressed in a room with silence. Mix everything together again by putting a little FX to it, is would be more perfect. (that just my opinion)

Sorry my bad English
Inspire_Nung

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ALIVIDLIFE: 0158799-0017887 (Our Voices Never Touched Guitar Riff),
CENTRIST: 0079105-0003788 (Acoustic Guitar Picking 1),
INNSTRUMENTALZ: 0265235-0019477 (Piano Loop 1),
TZA1800: 0239374-0052187 (Woodwind and Mallet Percussion Melody),
ICZAR13: 0190625-0012289 (Acoustic GTar loop),
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