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Tags : | Garage | 4.11 MB

Description : Walking in the dark
And sloshing thru every puddle on the way
I recall the day when everything went astray
I was on the street accepting my defeat!
I walked home all alone in the rain,
And all my cries, all in vainYou called me on my phone
And spoke to me only when I was alone
You called me out on a date for 3 nights straight!
Sitting under the stars, we spoke from the hearts!
We were at our best, just being you and I
We were helplessly, hopelessly falling in love!
We were just being you and I!!
We were just fine, until
I faced some problems of mine
I called out for help;
For A safe place for me and for my whelp!
You werent happy with the new place
You came home with a grim face
I always wondered why you had your helmet on
I did not realize then you were the boogieman!

Look, what I did to you was wrong
I was messed up in the head
I was only trying to look for the man who got lost
I was all over you; I was totally in to you!
I know I killed you with my talk;
But how far I would go to bring you back?
You lived in a world all alone
With broken heart and rendered opinions

As memories stain, and later pain
I wage war in silence with nothing to gain
I know, I love you but not the way I used to
No more words to scar the soul
No more fights to make you understand
No more words that will split your heart in to two
No more tears to shed, no more crying all alone.
Im over whelmed with pain and shame
I knew Im the only one to blame

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  1. VickyDan
    VickyDan on Sat 23rd Jul 2011 - 12 years ago

    I would put well, what text to my music .... but with your voice of course.
    Impressive ....

    Dan

    Camy
    Reply by Camy

    If interested i will share the lyrics with you :) You can sing yourself or someone who is a much better singer :)

    Camy :)

  2. DJSchmeeJ
    DJSchmeeJ on Sat 6th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    This is another great composition Camy! Your stuff is very reflective and deep. A lot of contrasts within the piece. You just kinda seamlessly flow in and out of good and evil!

    Camy
    Reply by Camy

    Sorry for the late reply.

    First of all, I thank you for reviewing my track. The difference between this track and other tracks is that I first wrote the lyrics and later composed the song. This song is very personal to me. The song is based on a true incident happened in my life!

    PS: I am not a native speak, and English is not my forte. If there are any errors, please forgive me. I am learning english :-)

    Thanks,
    Camy!

  3. JohnBoutilier
    JohnBoutilier on Fri 5th Nov 2010 - 13 years ago

    A very beautiful piece. The only suggestion I would make would be to fade out the end. Is that you speaking in the beginning? If so, I love your voice and would like to know if you would like to narrate somethning for me in the not too distant future.

    I lived in Ontario for a year. On major Mackenzie. Down the road from Wonderworld and pretty much across the road from Wonderland Foods.

    All The Best

    John

    Camy
    Reply by Camy

    Thank you very much for your reviews. Nice to know that were from ON too :) Please let me know how I can help :-)

    Yes, It is me who is narrating at the begining. The reason I did not fade out at the end is because I wanted to reflect the abrupt end of a true story. I first wrote the lyrics and posted here==>undaunted-souls.blogspot.com only after that, i composed the music.

    Once again, thank you very much for the reviews it means a lot to me :)

    Regards,
    Camy

  4. Nap
    Nap on Mon 4th Oct 2010 - 13 years ago

    hmmm for some reason this song relates to me. Well done

    Camy
    Reply by Camy

    I am Glad you were able to relate to the song :) You may want to visit my website for the complete lyrics. http://undaunted-souls.blogspot.com/ Once again, thank you so much for reviewing my Tracks :-)

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