Marajuana Magazine Sales (Rap/Metal With Lyrics) - SkullG

15th Feb 2010 02:40 - 16 years ago
Description : I was going to make this less busy. Then I recorded the lyrics and liked the way it sounded. I'm new to this rap stuff, so please feel free to give any honest feedback if you want.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give SkullG some feedback.

DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 17th Sep 2010 01:49 - 16 years ago
Play 2 now...

I dunno why, but Staind's earlier stuff just popped into my head (mainly how he'd do that mumbling whisper thing at times). Here I'm thinkin that you could do somethin like "Ah yeeeeah" (or similar scat, like the sigh at the tail end of the piece) here and there before your breaks from singing. And now I'm thinkin of Gravity Kills and am thinkin that it might be cool if you broke away from using effects every once in a while. Anyways, that's all I got. Lates!
SkullG
SkullG replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Yes, I am recording now on my iphone voice recorder. Need to get some new equipment for better voice recording/editing. Guess it's not too early though to start experimenting with that. This one is definitely busy. I was told that before I added vocals but just went with it. Thanks again for reviewing one of my sleeping(non-featured) tracks!
CONEYISLANDRECORDS
CONEYISLANDRECORDS 15th Feb 2010 04:35 - 16 years ago
I think the metal aspect of this is straight. Gotta slipknot feel to it. I think the lyrics need a little cleared up and raised in volume. The distortion on the vox is ok for the Corey Taylor vibe mabey just decrease it a little. Cool track though! I was diggin it. Def reminded me of the way Taylor flows on the first Slipknot album. The guitar work reminded me of the knot at times as well. Will probably come back for another listen sometime. Good stuff man!
SkullG
SkullG replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
It's funny but I've always been a Slipknot fan. Too bad I don't have Taylor's voice but who does? All the lyrics were done in one take. Can't wait to get some better equipment and see if I can improve the overall sound of my music. Until then, I just work on the ideas. Thanks for the advice!
ThisIsChris
ThisIsChris 15th Feb 2010 03:00 - 16 years ago
the beat is nice... too much dist effect on your voice imo.
make it more clear and it'll rock! ;)
SkullG
SkullG replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Yeah, I turned the distortion up to 94% on that one. I also record my voice on the iphone, so the quality can't be that great. Thanks for the feedback!

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