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Description : I was inspired by beat from Protege so I had to put some poetry behind it thanks homie

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  1. Effluence
    Effluence on Thu 15th Jul 2010 - 13 years ago

    Hi nice vocals, couldn't hear them that well but. Keepo doing your thing I didn't forget you bro lol!

    TheWritersPoet41
    Reply by TheWritersPoet41

    Fo sure it's going to get rerecorded but thanks I know you haven't forgot about me sis lol

  2. DJFredrick
    DJFredrick on Wed 2nd Jun 2010 - 13 years ago

    luv it. Nice theme throughout it. I totally dig the autotune on the vocs but I would have liked a delay/reverb on them.
    Overall very nice track!

    cheers

  3. After_The_End
    After_The_End on Thu 6th May 2010 - 13 years ago

    great chilled out atmosphere, minimal but enough there, good stuff

  4. BigReeg
    BigReeg on Mon 12th Apr 2010 - 14 years ago

    hot track bro. you already know about the vocals, other then that hot ish. check me out and let me know what you think. peace.

    TheWritersPoet41
    Reply by TheWritersPoet41

    Thanks Bro but I'm going to redo the track cause it's going on my album

  5. douf
    douf on Fri 5th Mar 2010 - 14 years ago

    bad effect over vocals and the music is too loud for them to be heard easily, other than that great lyrics keep it up

  6. ChaseManhattan
    ChaseManhattan on Tue 9th Feb 2010 - 14 years ago

    the vocals are a little low but you made the beat perfect like it

    TheWritersPoet41
    Reply by TheWritersPoet41

    Thanks yeah I'm trying to work my vocals on certain beats, but I will work it. Thanks for the feed back

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