Tags : | Weird | 3.00 MB

Description : ** please tell me if it is not the right genre **

A really mysterious track.

A touch of sadness and hope...
Just imagine a ghost and a girl, talking and playing together.
Then the ghost kills the young lady.... and this is the end...

3:40, calm, mysterious, sad, hope, death, a kind of happiness... one track : The Ghost and the Girl.

I need some feedback...

oh and! type 1 if it's ok, and 2 if you want a second part.

Enjoy!

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  1. Fayz
    Fayz on Fri 21st May 2010 - 12 years ago

    i thought it was an alright track, you definently had the mood in it but it didn't really go anywhere, i mean i understand that the idea was dark and creepy but at some point i think there should be a build up to a greater piece or a spot in the track that has something a little different than what you hear and make that one piece really special to the track make it stand out, also for something like this since its all instrumental i would probably cut the time down a little bit id say after about 2:30 it gets a little tedious. granted im not the greatest musician or mixer but theres always something inside my head that goes off when something is good but could be done so much better and this track really gave me that feeling. i only tell you all this stuff because i want you to reach that point of greatness and this track could really go there it was so on the verge of amazing. i hope i have gave you some constructive criticism with the key work being constructive. and with that all aside i just want to let you know that i did enjoy the track and that it really just brought out that mood and you know what? i say you should make another one like it but id really like to see some thinking out side of the box.

    Jowe
    Reply by Jowe

    thanks you Fayz for taking a moment for this review... I took time for me to understand very well because I,m french and i wanted to understand very well before posting a reply.

    I,ll be careful about your constructive advices :D
    I,ll try :P

  2. DanielGtrman
    DanielGtrman on Sat 3rd Apr 2010 - 12 years ago

    This track of yours is definately "weird". The whole idea gives me the creeps......musically this is a tremendous track with lots of busy phrases and melodies that tell the...er...weird story. Reminds me of Mike Oldfield in that sense and Could easily have gone in Cinematic. You have a great way of bringing across your theme in your music and articulating your thoughts and imagination. The subject material is not my thing but your music definately is so maybe for your next composition perhaps you could choose a more pleasant title like "The Elf and the Fairy"...ok...maybe not. Great track nontheless.

    Jowe
    Reply by Jowe

    LOL thank you Daniel :P

    Maybe the next song will look like a fairy tale :P... I'll try :P

  3. Nosleeves
    Nosleeves on Sun 28th Feb 2010 - 12 years ago

    hey jowe really creepy and nice track i guess u can put this in the werid genre but its still interesting,i tough about the story with the girl and ghost and it made the track musc more real to me with that beatiful paino playing.

    u did a good job with this.

    PEACE LOVE AND TECHNOFOREVER

    PS if u want to hear somthing creepy check out my track unite with the sorrow.

    Jowe
    Reply by Jowe

    thank you :)

    :P

    should I do a 2d part?

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