Dude every one starts somewhere and this is a heck of alot better then what i first did on reason TRUST ME, lol.

If you need any help with anything (not saying im the best person in the world at production) but if i know it you can have it just ask dude..

Spuds :)

As Acrylic said, the drums are a little 80's R&B and the stuff youd find on the Vengence electro cd are superb and would deffinately help out.

The only thing i could probly recommend is to try and use quite a few loops in your tracks for the time being, and work on your sound designing. e.g.

pull some drum loops into your Daw, start them all off, and then over the top of them really spend a good bit of time trying to replicate the sort of sounds you hear on electro tracks. saving them as presets as you go.

Maybe do a day on leed lines, then a day on pads and strings, a day on bass's E.T.C..

That way when it comes to making you track you have a whole host of ready to go presets that all fit the style your doing.

Some people would probly recommend you do it the other way round (drums first then presets) and to be honest drums are one of the most important things in a track but both ways are fine, im just giving you the version that worked for me.

The reason im recommending this is because before you know it you will be able to master all the tools to get you well on the way to beat making heaven just think of it as the Audio version of the Karate Kid "Wax on, Wax off" :)

Hey! I think this has potential, but there are some essentials missing. A Punchier kick maybe, some hats in between, and some sidechaining on the bass to start otherwise the layout was cool and ideas Flowed well. Check out Vengeance for some good Electro Sounds. I know the right kick can be hard to find.