The Shivering Line - FrenchKid18

25th Feb 2009 17:32 - 17 years ago
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Description : Wayne just added this awesome bassline which gives some more "body" to the song to me.Hope you'll enjoy.
French Kid

Comments (14)

If you have time take a listen and give FrenchKid18 some feedback.

Spivkurl
Spivkurl 9th Jul 2010 17:20 - 16 years ago
Yay, I'm so glad Wayne added bass to this awesome track! That was the one thing it was lacking! The drums on this are really cool too! This song has really come together to be a complete piece of art. I love it man! Faved for sure!
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks a lot Spivkurl!
I agree Wayne's bassline totally boosted that track!Still need to record the vocals again,sound a bit blurred
Cheers
French Kid
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 9th Jul 2010 05:15 - 16 years ago
I think the track is absolutely great, but I'd bring the lead vocals back a tad.

Great work as usual my friend.

John
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the review,I really appreciate.I'm gonna record the vocals again,sounds a bit blurry:thanks for the advice anyway
Cheers
French Kid
BrianMaiden407
BrianMaiden407 21st Jun 2010 17:13 - 16 years ago
Nice raw rock style!! catchy also!

Peace

Bm;)
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks a lot man
Cheers
French Kid
Skitsophrenik
Skitsophrenik 18th May 2010 19:45 - 16 years ago
yo..this is sooo catchey!! lol
Downloadin this m8
Peace!
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hey,
Thanks for reviewing and downloading again,I appreciate
Cheers
Gordw
Gordw 29th Mar 2010 03:00 - 16 years ago
Sounds to me, or reminds me of late 60's.....again it's great. My kind of music.
Take Care
Gord
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks a lot for reviewing again
French Kid
WARRIORDANIKA
WARRIORDANIKA 21st Mar 2010 21:59 - 16 years ago
Fun song, sounds like something on our alternative station here in Seattle!
Peace,
WARRIOR DANKIA
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks a lot for the review
Cheers
French Kid
Anomelie
Anomelie 17th Mar 2010 07:28 - 16 years ago
Nice! This sounds like something I would hear on kexp.org during the daytime variety mix. Reminiscent of Spoon. And the Beatles.
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks a lot for the nice review,Anomelie
Cheers
French Kid
aliyarose
aliyarose 2nd Jan 2010 04:08 - 16 years ago
Hey man, its meee!
I was just wondering if I could add my own vocals to this fantastic track! Its done so well!!!
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hey Aliya,
Of course,I'd love to hear your vocals on this track.I'll send the instrumental to you in the day
n0mad23
n0mad23 26th Nov 2009 02:32 - 16 years ago
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Spivkurl
Spivkurl 16th Sep 2009 18:25 - 17 years ago
I didn't hear this early on, but it sounds really good at this point! Very cool guitar work - the clean and crunchy guitars work really well together. I think the vocals are really cool, and the whole song has a great retro feel. Maybe the main weakness of this song is the bass, I can't tell if it's there or not. Really cool stuff overall though!
ChrisHall
ChrisHall 15th Sep 2009 09:14 - 17 years ago
Dude i love your rock style!! could maybe turn the vocals up slightly on this one maybe? cant hear them too well at the beggining..but it does sound great buddy :)

The vibe you give with your rock music is awesome man!! more rock songs please!! :p

Chris
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks a lot for all your reviews.Think it's very useful and heart warming to get some feedback.I'm actually remixing most of my tracks like this one.I often have a problem with recording vocals.
If you wanna listen,I got another rock track called "Lonely is the night".
Thanks again man,
French Kid
DanielGtrman
DanielGtrman 21st Mar 2009 09:40 - 17 years ago
You have a great rock style of songwriting which, for me is very listenable and addictive. the scratch on the mic effect on first listen I thought it did not work, but after a few listens it's part of the mix you expect it to be there. I think the more you write rock and other songs the more slick it will sound. Great track !
Dvibe
Dvibe 2nd Mar 2009 03:38 - 17 years ago
Nice job i liked it ..happy feel to it...Dvibe
johnnygadget
johnnygadget 27th Feb 2009 00:53 - 17 years ago
First of all how in the HELL can 13 fellow loopers listen to this song and NOT give some kinda review? well my friend I am not scared to voice my opinion! the music was a little flamenco but really cool! the vocals like you had mentioned def need some work! very muddy and confusing but other than that very structured and competent! nice job french kid!..............G.

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