Description : Again based on a challenge - "ORGANIC PANIC, MAKE AN ORGANIC TRACK; feel free to interpret it any way you like, from the dictionary definition, organic genres, lyrics, style, sounds...."

So I wrote a lyric based on the title, added loads of organs... and then for good measure another great spoken vocal of Kamal Imani.
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Hope you like it :)

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  1. xstokes
    xstokes on Thu 21st Dec 2023 - 4 months ago

    well done, but if youre still working this we gotta have a psychotic organ solo along with the conga. it does get feverish, a good workout. im left with the shot putting image, ha! i love the verses

  2. 2Sisters
    2Sisters on Wed 20th Dec 2023 - 4 months ago

    Both thumps up!!!!
    Kind regards, Manuela

  3. Micky
    Micky on Wed 20th Dec 2023 - 4 months ago

    Hi BaoBou, listening to it made me feel quite warm because somehow the association with the African sun came across. I like the nice bass and the use of the keyboards, and especially the congas running through the entire track. My English isn't necessarily the best, but it seems to me that you're becoming a real wordsmith.
    A nice, round track!
    Cheers,
    Micky

    BaoBou
    Reply by BaoBou

    I'm actually not very happy witn the track yet. It lacks a real chorus, so I'm going to reqork it a bit. I have some ideas.
    Thanks for stopping by and your positive comments!!

  4. pseudoble
    pseudoble on Mon 18th Dec 2023 - 4 months ago

    Really lovely work - nothing not to like about this, great lyric and vocal performance, lovely beats, nice keys and guitars and without a doubt your sound production keeps getting better and better. I dont understand why there are not a few more favs!!

  5. VicUrba
    VicUrba on Sat 16th Dec 2023 - 5 months ago

    very cool kept me intrigued the whole way through :D
    good work

  6. 2Sisters
    2Sisters on Sat 16th Dec 2023 - 5 months ago

    Hello BaoBou, I think the slight vinyl cracking at the beginning is great *smile. But even so, the song has a lot to offer. I think the division of the soundstage and the arrangement of the instruments are well done. The drive is also good and the drums are certainly not too loud. I wouldn't make my voice much louder either. In my opinion, your voice is loud enough, but it doesn't come through well enough. I think for the instruments, with the exception of bass and drums, you should use fast-reacting sidechain compression and link it to the vocals. As a result, as soon as a vocal tone begins, the instruments are turned down minimally in a flash and turned up again just as quickly when they stop. This gives your voice more throughput. With a good compressor, this down-tuning of the instruments is not audible to the human ear. This creates more dynamism without making the voice seem too loud or too dominant. Try it.
    Kind regards, Manuela

    BaoBou
    Reply by BaoBou

    Great tip! Applied it and also fixed the vocals in the first verse a bit!

  7. dimestop
    dimestop on Sat 16th Dec 2023 - 5 months ago

    great intro bro, then that funky guitar bounces in and sounds great, well wrote, like me you experiment with fx especially vocal and i am liking what im hearing everytime from you

  8. JohnSmokey
    JohnSmokey on Sat 16th Dec 2023 - 5 months ago

    I think the drums are fine, I think the vocals could use some compression, doing just that should help with the overall mix as well.

  9. Alien
    Alien on Sat 16th Dec 2023 - 5 months ago

    Awesome, unique, groovy and funky!
    Great solo at 2 min.

  10. JohnSmokey
    JohnSmokey on Sat 16th Dec 2023 - 5 months ago

    This is a groove for sure!

    BaoBou
    Reply by BaoBou

    Thanks a lot my man! It's also a bit of a rush job but there'll be updates later on.
    Question, do you feel the drums are too loud? I think they could be reduced a tad maybe.

  11. Kamalimani
    Kamalimani on Sat 16th Dec 2023 - 5 months ago

    I love your unique creativity! Thank you. Feel free to keep em coming! Happy Holy Days! Kamal IG at kamalsupreme

    Thehiphopteacher on YT

    BaoBou
    Reply by BaoBou

    Thank you my friend! And keep your acapellas coming!

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