Tags : | Acoustic | 2.93 MB

Description : This is a new song I wrote for my future wife, Beverly. I added the drums as a secondary thing. Originally, it was just me and my Cort Acoustic. It's all one take so it isn't the greatest but I figured I'd post it and see what people think. :D

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  1. SilentBeat
    SilentBeat on Wed 9th Nov 2011 - 8 years ago

    Downloads not allowed? Hidden track, forever out of reach. But dammit... It's all I have left.

  2. JohnBoutilier
    JohnBoutilier on Wed 23rd Feb 2011 - 8 years ago

    I can't believe I haven't heard this piece before now. Great lyrics and vocals on a sweet, spartan backing track.

    Love it

    Faved

    John

  3. SilentBeat
    SilentBeat on Wed 5th Jan 2011 - 8 years ago

    Pretty lame of myself to have created an account for the sole purpose of reviewing this track. I have no lyrical, instrumental - let's face it, absolutely no musical talent what-so-ever to share here on Looperman. Just wanted to give credit where credit was due. I am quite literally on the edge of my seat awaiting what's to come in the future. Don't you EVER give up on your talent. It clearly loves you. And damn, do we love it. But there's not a thing in this world that I love more than you.

  4. Dennel
    Dennel on Sun 18th Oct 2009 - 10 years ago

    This is the second track I have reveiwed today wherein an artist has written a song for their beloved. Very, very nice; I like the drums sync'd or not. Great writing and vocals & guitar playing also. Btw, did ya get the girl in the end son?? Lol, I'm sure you did, great job peace... D

  5. AnomalyJ
    AnomalyJ on Sat 7th Mar 2009 - 10 years ago

    i love it!
    even if i didn't say anything else that would be enough.
    But wanted you to know i really love your voice, it's so calming and warm, it has depth and feeling and darkness mixed with sadness. i'm glad you found someone to help release that inside of you.
    The melody is really good and the lyrics also complement the whole track. You did an excellent job with this. take care, and never give up finding ways to express youself.
    sincerely,
    Anomaly

  6. ToxicVoltage
    ToxicVoltage on Sun 1st Mar 2009 - 10 years ago

    I know your fiance would adore this song

    Reminds me of Steven Curtis Chapman for some odd reason

    x-_Bri_-x

    anchor
    Reply by anchor

    I used to listen to him back in my religious days. I've always been a metal head with an open mind. Thank you for the kind review. :)

  7. JensTonic
    JensTonic on Sat 28th Feb 2009 - 10 years ago

    things turn out good when you have good inspiration..like your future wife. This song is great. excellent composition and playing. yeah your vocals are a little quiet, but your guitar sounds awesome. when you play it for her, she must really feel loved.

    anchor
    Reply by anchor

    Thank you for the review. I agree completely with your comment on inspiration. This song was never even mixed or mastered. It's just my ode to someone who made me feel alive. The point of the song was to say that; while no one can make you forget about the bad things that happen to you in life there's someone who cares enough to give you a place to sleep(hence the name) and rest without worry. Thanks to everyone who reviewed.

  8. BigJoWezy
    BigJoWezy on Sat 28th Feb 2009 - 10 years ago

    i like the chill mood Peace God bless

  9. DjSomnium
    DjSomnium on Thu 26th Feb 2009 - 10 years ago

    classic chord progression, great acoustic sound, must be a nice guitar. great vocals as well, and the drums are perfect! wow if i was your future wife, i would be impressed for sure! nice work, keep it up! -Lorin xD

  10. lofthouse
    lofthouse on Mon 23rd Feb 2009 - 10 years ago

    ..TAKES ME TO A BEAUTIFUL PLACE!GR8 ART TO BOOT!LOVIN' IT!

  11. Mokeone
    Mokeone on Sun 22nd Feb 2009 - 10 years ago

    Glad to see you still come around. This sound reflects a new maturity, growth and emotion I hadn't heard before or maybe you're just in love. ;-) Anyway, I like it. I agree with JohnnyG and I was thinking of adding a high thin string arraingment flowing behind it all. Good luck to you both.
    Favd
    Moke

    anchor
    Reply by anchor

    Moke, I've missed the way you think, bro! I've got a video of me actually writing and recording the song while she's in the next room, oblivious to what I'm doing. If people like the song, I might post the accoustic track and see what people could add to the composition. As for keyboards or string sections; you know I'll have to holler at you Moke. Thanks for taking the time to remind me why I used to come to this site.

  12. TW1TCH970
    TW1TCH970 on Sun 22nd Feb 2009 - 10 years ago

    great job man this is a really great song no doubt i dont even know wat to say but itz great

  13. johnnygadget
    johnnygadget on Sat 21st Feb 2009 - 10 years ago

    cool job ! but to me, seeing that you put the drums in secondary it made the song seem a little rushed and slightly out of time? killer jam very cool but just a hair out of sync! i would try throwing the drums in first then singing over the top last in the mix to let the beat roll you into it lyrically, other than that this was a very cool thing! nice job! anchor.

    Gadget

    anchor
    Reply by anchor

    LOL. Yeah. That's what I was saying, Johnny. I recorded differently than any song I've wrote. I just thought it was pretty decent considering the circumstances. The video I made to test it sounds better (just me and guitar). Thanks for the honest review, man. I missed my looperman.com reviews. *sniff* *sniff* You guys are great! :D

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