When The Universe Collapsed And Flattened TheEarth - Akagabriel

27th Aug 2018 19:05 - 8 years ago
Description : A very light first attempt - any feedback is appreciated.

Comments (5)

If you have time take a listen and give akagabriel some feedback.

MahanMahan
MahanMahan 15th Sep 2018 03:38 - 7 years ago
Dude, this is amazing! You really got talent. what key signature is that? The drum beat is addicting.

Wow... I almost wanna ask you if I can download it and mess with it, but I shall resist...!
Sunbeats
Sunbeats 1st Sep 2018 01:04 - 8 years ago
Sounds like off beat but not really. I like it.
DjLeeMFW
DjLeeMFW 1st Sep 2018 00:28 - 8 years ago
excellent first attempt. Just keep experimenting with different sounds, and build your songs in parts, a beginning, a middle and and end. I know my first was no where near as good!!
Gixxie
Gixxie 29th Aug 2018 23:06 - 8 years ago
Very good man!! i love it.. you are a natural.. man.. great job! you can go so many directions with this..

Work some more on your compositions and mixing and try to divide the track into sections.. like chorus, verse etc..
Art0fficial
Art0fficial 27th Aug 2018 23:09 - 8 years ago
Very good first attempt. Starts out good, the secondary sample seems a little out of place, maybe try something else. Mix and master is perfect.
akagabriel
akagabriel replied 28th Aug 2018 - 8 years ago
Great! Thanks man! I constantly make slightly changes, the little flaws are the most annoying, I will reconsider the secondary sample part as well. Peace!

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