Description : my first attempt at singing and recorind it over a beat, hope you like it.
Feedback is very much appreciated, because i want to know if there's even appeal to my vocals

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  1. Mosestone
    Mosestone on Sat 4th Aug 2018 - 5 years ago

    - I don't really believe that you believe in what you are delivering, that means you really gotta own it, stand behind what you are saying and making me .

    I could not agree more Mafisto, that is the most honest and straight forward truth in every persons Art "believe that you own it" Well Said. :D

  2. Mosestone
    Mosestone on Thu 2nd Aug 2018 - 5 years ago

    nice intro .. great beat, anyone who can rappit is a poet, what's the story ?

  3. Mafisto
    Mafisto on Thu 2nd Aug 2018 - 5 years ago

    Hey man, I have tried rapping myself a few times and I get the feeling you are struggling with the same things as I am.

    - I don't really believe that you believe in what you are delivering, that means you really gotta own it, stand behind what you are saying and making me believe that.
    - Staying in tempo, this has to do with flow and counting bars, its not something many people have naturally. I would suggest just free styling to a metronome until you feel comfortable you can stay in beat.

    Overall this is an attempt as you said and not something professionally finished, so keep working on it, take this feedback and keep trying soldier.

    Nobody gets there without hard work and dedication.
    Stay true, keep making music!

  4. tsochai
    tsochai on Wed 1st Aug 2018 - 5 years ago

    much respect to you, however i do gotta ask, are you switching languages in the verse?
    some reason i have an issue understanding majority of what you said.
    that being said, i would also say work on your delivery, you seem just a bit off every now and then in this song, also maybe work on your posture; as in your distance from the mic, be cautious of that, i have a lot of trouble staying in the same spot.
    mixing would definitely need work, and thats coming from me - i can't mix for shit.

    but yea i mean everything else you got it on lock man, its a nice track. just trying to help you out
    definitely would like to hear more!
    cheers to you armandas,
    -CAP

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