Risen - Armandas1337

1st Aug 2018 21:46 - 8 years ago
Description : my first attempt at singing and recorind it over a beat, hope you like it.
Feedback is very much appreciated, because i want to know if there's even appeal to my vocals

Comments (4)

If you have time take a listen and give Armandas1337 some feedback.

Mosestone
Mosestone 4th Aug 2018 19:13 - 8 years ago
- I don't really believe that you believe in what you are delivering, that means you really gotta own it, stand behind what you are saying and making me .

I could not agree more Mafisto, that is the most honest and straight forward truth in every persons Art "believe that you own it" Well Said. :D
Mosestone
Mosestone 2nd Aug 2018 10:31 - 8 years ago
nice intro .. great beat, anyone who can rappit is a poet, what's the story ?
Mafisto
Mafisto 2nd Aug 2018 09:55 - 8 years ago
Hey man, I have tried rapping myself a few times and I get the feeling you are struggling with the same things as I am.

- I don't really believe that you believe in what you are delivering, that means you really gotta own it, stand behind what you are saying and making me believe that.
- Staying in tempo, this has to do with flow and counting bars, its not something many people have naturally. I would suggest just free styling to a metronome until you feel comfortable you can stay in beat.

Overall this is an attempt as you said and not something professionally finished, so keep working on it, take this feedback and keep trying soldier.

Nobody gets there without hard work and dedication.
Stay true, keep making music!
tsochai
tsochai 1st Aug 2018 22:56 - 8 years ago
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