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Description : It's a track I Made for my wife.
I Know I'm not a great singer :)
I'd like your help about the mixing. How can I improve myself ?
Thx

PS: I don't know if it's really an electro track !!

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  1. HenryPascal
    HenryPascal on Wed 13th Mar 2019 - 5 years ago

    Je ne peux que retirer mon chapeau et m'incliner devant la grandeur de cette composition. Mme si je ne comprends pas le franais (pour crire, j'utilise le traducteur google), j'aime beaucoup la manire dont vous dfinissez la voix. Vous tes un homme chanceux d'avoir une femme qui vous aide vous exprimer en musique, et une chanson qui lui est ddie est le moins que vous puissiez faire pour la remercier. Malheureusement, je n'ai pas cette chance.

    C'est vraiment dommage que vous n'ayez pas autoris le download, je l'aurais cout trs volontiers dans ma voiture, l'instar de Pa Kouba.

    (s'il vous plat, coutez ma dernire chanson, "Nothing Left feat. Stepa K", vous pouvez download aprs avoir comment, si vous l'aimez :) merci beaucoup, continuez sur cette voie!

  2. GregVincey
    GregVincey on Thu 5th Apr 2018 - 6 years ago

    Bro, this some 80s, vinyl days vapor wave type music, and in french. This's epic man

    Nous2
    Reply by Nous2

    Thx man !! appreciate it

  3. EricMilligan
    EricMilligan on Thu 5th Apr 2018 - 6 years ago

    Bonjour, Nous2! Very nice track! I think your vocal was actually quite good. So, I would encourage you to do more. I especially liked the fact that the lyrics were in French. French, like Italian and Spanish, is a very musical language. Much better than English I think. More emphasis on vowel sounds.

    I think that your wife would be very pleased with this song for her. It is a very special gift.

    Anyway, if I were working on the mix for this track I'd experiment with a few things. I'd try tightening up the bass using a compressor and EQ. I think the mid-low frequencies are a bit too prominent in the mix and makes it sound a bit "muddy". It sounds "full", but it would be worth some effort to see how it sounds if each instrument/voice in the track is placed in its own area of the frequency spectrum. Personally, I liked how the vocal sounded and I'd bring up its level in the mix a little bit - at least in some sections.

    I liked the vocoder that you introduced at the end of the track, but I thought that the synth sound with the filter sweep competed with it too much. I would experiment with either dropping the filter sweep treatment, or reducing its intensity, or at least reducing the level of that instrument in the mix. I think the vocoder part was really interesting and should be the focus of attention for the listener.

    My last comment is definitely subjective and you probably won't agree. Again, if I were mixing the track I think I would try dropping some of the new elements you introduce as the track progresses. I thought that simplifying the arrangement a little bit might make it more impactful. You have lots of variety as the track progresses, but I'm not sure that they all contribute to a cohesive experience. I could be entirely wrong about this and it might be more a question of the level they have in the mix rather than eliminating some of them entirely. But, I would definitely experiment. Each new element in the track needs to have a purpose and should somehow tie in with the fundamental essence of the track.

    All that being said, it is entirely possible that having experimented with all those things I mentioned, I'd leave the track unaltered because it just sounds really good the way it is right now, keeps my interest from beginning to end, and conveys the emotion effectively. After all, that's really the true purpose of any piece of music. N'est pas?

    Nous2
    Reply by Nous2

    Hello !! I read with attention your comment and firstavle i thank you for the time you take to give your view.
    I'll try what you tell me about the bass, the vocoder and the filter sweep.

    If it's not too much to ask you, could I ask you for advice by email ?
    Mine :
    thx alot Eric !!

    Musically
    K

  4. stubobs
    stubobs on Tue 3rd Apr 2018 - 6 years ago

    You have little to worry about with the mixing. You have balanced the vocals and the backing track well. Just do the same with everything you do and you will have no problems. Your voice is fine and suited to a variety of genres. You both sound 'pretty good together. Interesting track, enjoyed listening. Thanks for uploading.

    Nous2
    Reply by Nous2

    Thank you a lot Stubobs !! I'd like to listen what you do ;)
    See you!

  5. Zivonmusic
    Zivonmusic on Sat 31st Mar 2018 - 6 years ago

    I love emotional love dedication peices. The feel of this track is amazing!

    You have a lovely voice in my opinion! :)

    -Zivon

    Nous2
    Reply by Nous2

    Thank You Zivon

  6. BLEEP
    BLEEP on Fri 30th Mar 2018 - 6 years ago

    Petit ajout! je me disais bien que quelque chose dans ce morceau me faisait penser un autre titre! et l ca y est, ca a match en le r coutant: il y a un petit quelque chose de kavinsky (nightcall)

    encore bravo c'est un super boulot en terme de compo

    bleep

    Nous2
    Reply by Nous2

    Je vais couter a ...

  7. BLEEP
    BLEEP on Fri 30th Mar 2018 - 6 years ago

    le morceau est franchement interessant, nle beat est superbe notamment par contre il y a de serieux dsquilibres sonores sur les diffrentes pistes. Aprs ca c'est juste du rglage mais bon, c'est pas la partie que je maitrise le mieux moi mme!!! A la limite, l'oreille tu peux dj pas mal compenser et si par magie tu connais un ing du son, l tu auras un mixage tip top!
    en tous les cas, j'aime beaucoup ce petit son! bravo

    Bleep

    Nous2
    Reply by Nous2

    Merci Bleep pour ton commentaire. Quand tu dis dsquilibre tu veux dire quoi? Je sais que les voix, je galre vraiment !
    J'aurai aim m'y connaitre mais je trouve a tellement compliqu le mix !!
    Merci encore ;)

    A bientot

  8. silverman
    silverman on Fri 30th Mar 2018 - 6 years ago

    You have a high pitched voice that has great quality.
    I reckon you could do a lot with that on most genres.
    Reminds me of something in my past the whole thing but I can't put my finger on it.
    Good stuff though.

    Nous2
    Reply by Nous2

    Thank you silverman

  9. tekreck
    tekreck on Fri 30th Mar 2018 - 6 years ago

    ur a great singer

    Nous2
    Reply by Nous2

    Thx Tekreck but it's not true !! ;)

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