H O M E - DynamiteSkye

Name: H O M E
Duration: 48 s
Channel: DynamiteSkye
Description: *Please reach out to me if you're looking for a vocalist! I'm writing a song called Home. But I just want to get opinions on my rough draft. Of course I'm not an audio engineer, but I think it sounds pretty decent for a rough draft. Are the lyrics ok?

H O M E

DynamiteSkye

20th Jan 2018 22:44 - 8 years ago

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20th Jan 2018 22:44 - 8 years ago

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Description : *Please reach out to me if you're looking for a vocalist!

I'm writing a song called Home. But I just want to get opinions on my rough draft. Of course I'm not an audio engineer, but I think it sounds pretty decent for a rough draft. Are the lyrics ok?

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AnthonyAttard 10th May 2025 10:55 - 1 year ago

Good stuff here, you really have the track ready. You could easily extend it to a full song.
Best regards, Anthony

Kayos2 9th May 2025 15:13 - 1 year ago

Bump the levels up on your voice, extend track and add an extra change - generally a lovely track with some really good tones in your voice

ClickbaitCabaret 7th Sep 2022 21:58 - 4 years ago

Great vocals man.

Mykael 7th Sep 2022 08:17 - 4 years ago

I like it.... Although your vocals get lost in the bass, it's quite a good start!

LovePeace&Light,

Mykael

Lek 16th Apr 2021 12:42 - 5 years ago

Hi yeah this is a good start to the track. Not sure why it ends where it ends as it sounds like it is just about to progress and then it just finishes. I'm not mad on autotune if I'm honest so if that can be removed that'd help as well. Is this still a rough draft after 3 years??

joecramer 17th May 2020 10:45 - 6 years ago

Sounds good. Nice work so fare. But i think you stopped working on it? Almost 2 and a half years later the same demo and question ......
As Wayne said - remove the auto tune and finish the song and all is good :)

stay tuned
joe

DynamiteSkye replied 18th May 2020 - 6 years ago

haha yeah. I can't finish it, its on my old computer that junked. :(

SYLKE 15th Jan 2020 17:21 - 6 years ago

What software are you using for the recording and mixing?

HenryPascal 7th Jun 2019 10:51 - 7 years ago

Waiting for the whole song!

OcsiProx 30th Jun 2018 10:20 - 8 years ago

It sounds godd, good job!

theHumps 28th Jun 2018 20:29 - 8 years ago

I must agree with the others who have commented so far, it's pretty darn good for a rough draft. The mix is powerful and I think your vocals sound fine. Although I'm not much a fan of autotune, within the context of the music it works well.

Look forward to hearing the entire song!

Wayne

ronabo 28th Jun 2018 06:26 - 8 years ago

Yes, good lyrics and the track is decent. Stay with through the end and let us hear the final.

Ronabo

beerling1970 16th Feb 2018 21:08 - 8 years ago

Omg you need to finish this because its so bloody good :)

Steve

DynamiteSkye replied 5th Mar 2018 - 8 years ago

Thanks Steve! :)

toastedavalanche 14th Feb 2018 22:20 - 8 years ago

Hey DSkye.
Just going by what you have uploaded, it's sounding pretty slick for a demo. I don't really like commenting on other peoples lyrics but it sounds like you are feeling what you sing and that's what is important.
As Danke said, there feels like there is a drop coming.
I look forward to hearing more.

TA

DynamiteSkye replied 5th Mar 2018 - 8 years ago

Thanks so much! :) will be uploading full track soon!

Danke 21st Jan 2018 15:05 - 8 years ago

yes, it's pretty cool for the rough draft...hope it wasn't uploaded from the start of the song, cause there is a popp (or I donno in English, a little disturbing noise...:-) but later, this is cool...almost professional...great use of the autotune on the vocs (was that you?) and great breaks...hope that later comes the bumm, I mean the chorus with the peak of the song...:-)

anyway, congrats and handshake, Danke

DynamiteSkye replied 21st Jan 2018 - 8 years ago

THanks! Yes all is me. I’m still working on the chorus. The pop in the beginning is because I cut the beginning out and just showed s preview of the song.

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