You Are One Pathetic Loser - Rorshach2021

1st Sep 2007 06:27 - 19 years ago
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Description : my first track. It's a cross between house and trance and you may recognise a riff taken from and old school tune called rave in the jungle. any feedback would be greatly appreciated. cheers

Comments (19)

If you have time take a listen and give Rorshach2021 some feedback.

ToxicVoltage
ToxicVoltage 2nd Jun 2009 19:57 - 17 years ago
The cross between the 2 genres is awesome
house and trance sound so similar, the only difference
is the tempo, and house has a lot more piano bassed melodies
and etc. But putting these genres together makes this track glow

Im lovin the siren used and the vocals
:)
and it still has a trance feel to it
well done
:)
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 25th Jul 2008 21:35 - 18 years ago
The drumlines for other stuff to kick in. Ok, got some synths now and I'm tryin to figure out what movie the Jim Carey sample is from... Hmm, wait, is it from Dumb'n'Dumber? Haha, yeah, I think that's it.

"Are you gonna eat that?"
"Yeah, well no, yeah, I uh, I crossed my mind.
Seabass's character spits up a Loogie on burger.
Que audio sample used in song.

Didn't ever hear the song you made mention of in the desc, but am I right in guessing it's by Scooter? It kinda has their style of sound to it.

Good stuff for yer first go man. If you were to redo this I'm thinkin it could use more synths. Later on!
SLAPJOHNSON
SLAPJOHNSON 19th Mar 2008 03:33 - 18 years ago
Great track Geordie! Oh my god! What's going on with the toon! Hopefully not the dreaded relegation battle, cheers Slap...
SpAzz
SpAzz 22nd Feb 2008 18:57 - 18 years ago
Like it dude.. nice job on it. if you want you ca nbring out a hard saw type synth to really bring in some power... try it you never know...

SpAzz
butthole
butthole 31st Jan 2008 02:53 - 18 years ago
sweeet
fiery
fiery 31st Dec 2007 10:57 - 18 years ago
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SaintAvithe
SaintAvithe 26th Dec 2007 19:19 - 18 years ago
sample at the start fits perfect, sick. nice production, good choon.
supaloopz
supaloopz 25th Dec 2007 07:34 - 18 years ago
sick track. i like the beat and also the use of vocals. nice job!
ChaseManhattan
ChaseManhattan 17th Dec 2007 20:58 - 18 years ago
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PaulSawyer
PaulSawyer 23rd Nov 2007 08:37 - 18 years ago
good evolution of the track... not a techno fan but you made it interesting with good sampling and an "arc" to the song.
freshmaster
freshmaster 11th Nov 2007 04:08 - 18 years ago
even tho i love hip hop, it caught ma ears, ilove it, make more and more
MAINTUNEZ
MAINTUNEZ 19th Oct 2007 03:27 - 18 years ago
another great track from the newcastle man!
Styleezy
Styleezy 2nd Oct 2007 01:58 - 19 years ago
thought it was a little repetitive at the start until 2mins when the first synths came in, but then 3mins saw different synths come in - these are far better. also consider tinkering with the loops to make them more original, oh and work on a definate ending rather than just a cut - only my opinion tho. Good - keep going
Gsusfrk
Gsusfrk 11th Sep 2007 07:12 - 19 years ago
bassRavinLoopatic is right, sounds like a dance track, but still good, you should have hard pounding bass kick (maybe a little distortion in them) and the hi hates are a little weak (if you've got any better sounding hard hi hats) that would make it sound great :) great work china :)
MrRobot
MrRobot 9th Sep 2007 15:13 - 19 years ago
nice beats and cool synth sound
I like it too
Mokeone
Mokeone 8th Sep 2007 04:38 - 19 years ago
Great workout tune. Love the tempo, not too fast, not too slow. Keep up the good work.
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 7th Sep 2007 16:11 - 19 years ago
I think its excellent. Nice work.

John59
BassRavinloonatic
BassRavinloonatic 7th Sep 2007 04:47 - 19 years ago
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Remedy_for_sleep
Remedy_for_sleep 4th Sep 2007 14:19 - 19 years ago
I like it, its catchy and it was well put together. Make more k, :)

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