Billion - When Im Gone - BillionaireExclusive

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great track

Yes, it is a very good piece of hip-hop music, great rapping and a beautiful musical background. The message remains of the same value as years go by ..
Best wishes, Anthony

Keep it up Homie. You have good vocals keep it at!! You will get there 100%

that piano is beautiful! Wish you were still here with us on the site man, what a great song! I hope you come back!

What a powerful message! Your song really highlights the importance of unity and self-love in these challenging times. It's a beautiful reminder that change starts within each of us. I can't wait to hear the full versionkeep spreading that positivity, and your lyrics are incredibly raw and relatable! You capture the struggles and pressures many face while highlighting the importance of resilience and self-awareness. The imagery of taking your time and pacing yourself resonates deeply, especially in a world that often feels overwhelming. I love how you blend vulnerability with strengthit's a powerful reminder that growth often comes from navigating tough times. Keep sharing your story; its inspiring!

Billionaire my boy where you been?

riff raff on the beat or what? hahaha

i dont really listen to this kind of music much so im struggling to give feedback its nice gentle sounding piano i like the beat but think the kick could use more oomf and think you shoud drop the reverb or delay on the vocals but thats just imo

Niiiiice

Like the emotional piano and lycris, well done :)

Looking forward to see the full song :D

hey man that is piece of music i love it although it not yet finished and you melody are hot !

Strong words and great ideals for a crazy world we live in. This snipplet was just a tease for the ears I'd like to hear the whole jam I like what you've done here Peace ......Archaic Dreamz

they dont knoe what ive bin true

hell yeah,we are on the same page my brother.LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR SUB AND COMMENTS ON MY VIDEOS MY HOMIE.

there you go,my video,with your awesome track brother,please check it out,make sure to SUBSCRIBE and let me know what you think about my content.LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR SUB AND COMMENTS ON MY VIDEOS.let's stay in touch.
https://youtu.be/3q9YAjkig0c

this track is going to come out lit!,it's sad how things go wrong but on the other hand its a good thing that you're putting this together for that cause keep it up bro, i like the piano and its emotional fill; yo can boost the mid freq a bit on the piano and then the vocals like brado said, has effects something like a flanger or pitch effect. it might not fit in well with the mix so its best you go back to the raw vocals and use a reverb on it and a bit of delay for balance not too much delay though....cheers brother!
how can i contribute to this song?

So my word is my bond my brother,i really love this track,pretty impressive,so i'm using it in my tomorrow's video,i'll def give you a credit in my video,i'll send you the link.Please check out my channel make sure to SUBSCRIBE and let me know what you think about my content.LOOKING FORWARD TO IT.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCd9cbGhVA-ybX5yAw_I4BIA

Good message, a little bit too much effects on the voice for me. The piano is emotive and I dig that, and particularly appreciate that you're speaking out and trying to make a difference. Keep it up.

Brado

Nice chill flow man, a lot of melody in your voice. I do think it has to much fx, just my personal liking, normally prefer natural voices.
You could seriously get somewhere, seems to me your tracks would do well with the mainstream community.

i gotcha in my mind my brother.

The highlight of the song for me was definitely the lyrics. They are very soulful, and it fits well with this beat, the second highlight being the piano. On top of making an emotional track it's mixed well too. Very pleasing to the ear. Awesome work. Where's the full track?

-Sheen

I love the beautiful piano in the intro of the song. I also love the idea behind the song and I'm glad that you're trying to spread a positive message during these violent times.

nice use of delay on the vocal, and on panning. you have a relaxed, steady delivery in your rapping. as for the lyric - sounds like you are asking for the real collab. am i even close? best regards - Dan

I would like to help out on your song .... Good message and topic

This songs has got a really good message.Hope you can make it into a full song.
The intro alone it's amazing.

Well done

Nelson

Not my jungle this but one criticism is the heart beat at the beginning ... I'd make that longer fading out and behind the piano. Sounds to abrupt just finishing like that. It's very well done very smooth and obviously way to short just being a snippet. Sounds cool though.

Wow Nice approach on the piano chilled vibes liked it cool theme

Good to hear some positive vibes Billion...I`m not really a rap fan so you will get more useful input from other listeners, but this is well done and I like the musical accompaniment...keep it going....Ed

Yo man , i did my own style of instrumental
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/177822
Try to take a look & rap on it :)
Really dope , just try to have a better quality on micro next time but it still dope

Hey B, yeah great start here and props on steppin up with something postive to offset so much of the negative being dished right now. The world needs more love and understanding and for real, senseless violence and killing will never solve anything. Its time to unite against this and music is a proven method to reach many. Hope to see you finish this bro.

Hey this is a nice track bro..loving that beat.

First off, I like your message, vibe and what you are trying to accomplish. Not your typical rap tune here, as well as the last tune you posted. Since I am assuming this is in it's early stages...the piano fade in after the "heart beat" intro is a little awkward. I feel it doesn't need to fade in at all...just come right in...don't beat around the bush. As for the vocals, you don't need all those wishy washing effects. A solid, almost dry vocal will go a long way here. I feel you may be a little ##### shy about hearing your own voice. Don't be, it's pretty good. Let it be heard and understood.

Mike

Hey man, I listened to it several times, as you asked here are my thoughts, not necessarily in the correct order of things :)

This short section of a song definitely is interesting, I hope you'll post it here when it's finished. I have to admit I did not understand all the lyrics, but I get the sentiment of it.

I love the intro, it is a really cool melody. I don't know what you planned for the rest of the song, but maybe this melody could make a return somewhere in the song, to break things up. Just an idea, as it is really nice.

I am not going wild about the drum sound, I prefer real drums or, if this is not possible, I would use drum loops made with real drums. But I realize this is not always possible, plus probably many people will say they love your drum sound :) It's really a matter of taste. Keep at it, I look forward to the completed track. TG

Sounds like you've put together a very cool theme for continued enhancement of this song! I like the ideas that you have put forth in your description and lyrics. I am in this process locally, of joining together/ bringing people together, in order to change things for the better. It is great that people are beginning to stand up for how things should be. I like this, and you should keep working on it! Keep making music!