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16th Mar 2016 02:44 - 8 years ago
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Description : My first track! I think it sounds really good, especially the drops.

Credits for loops:
Evuz, emkm999, Epidemix, Mudchute, djbuzz92, frogdude34, SikNoiz, Glebs, thegibZy, and Skeiz. Wow, that's a lot more than I thought.

Comments (9)

If you have time take a listen and give acesmith some feedback.

BillionaireExclusive
BillionaireExclusive 24th Jul 2016 02:07 - 7 years ago
The intro with that bass line is amazing. As I progressed through the song I noticed the noticed just disappeared. Might be the mixing, unless you intentionally dropped. The build ups are absolutely amazing. The FX Sounds you used are pretty cool, and creative. It was a good idea adding that rap into it, wasn't expecting something like that in a dubstep track. All I can recommend is fixing the bass because it's almost completely gone throughout the song. Great Production nevertheless! Check out my tracks, and leave some feedback when you get the chance.

- Billion
acesmith
acesmith replied 9th Aug 2016 - 7 years ago
Yeah, I originally dropped it because I didn't think it was necessary past the intro. Multiple people have told me I'm wrong. I'm going to put it back in when I finish the tweaks.

I remixed this for my new EP, you should check it out.
mudhoen
mudhoen 21st Mar 2016 22:19 - 8 years ago
Lower the reverb that you probably have on it. If you dont then fatten your base by a compressor or transient shaper(for instance)
mudhoen
mudhoen 21st Mar 2016 20:19 - 8 years ago
Welcome to the world of music production! :-). A very well produced and mixed first track. Some real good effects and growls you put in. Love the part starting around 1:50. The drums sound a little hollow in comparison to the snare but that could be easily fixed. Nevertheless a great first try! respect!
acesmith
acesmith replied 21st Mar 2016 - 8 years ago
Thanks for the feedback! I always love critique, and thank you for your own.

Any ideas on how to remedy this "hollowness"?
ReonN
ReonN 21st Mar 2016 13:55 - 8 years ago
(Sorry for late reply)
Ambiance:
Try adding dark pads at your track.

"Booming" Effect:
Add some more reverb on the snares. Also, It will be more cool if you use more harder snares.
acesmith
acesmith replied 21st Mar 2016 - 8 years ago
All right, I'll make sure to take your effect into consideration.
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 20th Mar 2016 22:12 - 8 years ago
Thoroughly impressed that this is your first track! You're better than most at doing this stuff. Looking forward to your future works :)

And don't worry, I think I take the cake for most loops used in a song: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/168513

:)

All the best,

Brado
acesmith
acesmith replied 21st Mar 2016 - 8 years ago
Wow, that's a ton. Thanks for the feedback and I wish you well also!
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 20th Mar 2016 22:10 - 8 years ago
The intro to this song is extremely powerful, but is a little more than a minor letdown at the start because the bass seems to disappear when the drums make their full entrance. Overall though, a powerful song that with a few tweaks could end up being a killer track.

Brado
acesmith
acesmith replied 21st Mar 2016 - 8 years ago
Uh... yeah... what a weird illusion, right? *sweats nervously*
Observe
Observe 20th Mar 2016 03:17 - 8 years ago
Also, don't forget to compress the sub bass as well. Many forget to do that and the bass ends up overpowering everything else.
Observe
Observe 20th Mar 2016 03:15 - 8 years ago
Great meat on the bones of this track. Two things I would add is turn those drums up and EQ them and add a sub base under your wobbles. Great top bass but really does need a sub to do it justice.
acesmith
acesmith replied 20th Mar 2016 - 8 years ago
I do have subbass -_-

Guess I just need to turn it up.
ReonN
ReonN 17th Mar 2016 14:26 - 8 years ago
Are you trying to do the modern talking drop? If so then you did a good job pulling it off first time. My only note is that the first part of the track where the drums started loses the overall hype of the track, meaning add more ambiance and booming effect to the listeners so that they can feel the drop coming to them.

I hope you understand what I'm saying and btw, a good first track you've made. Still has room for improvement and hoping for more of your tracks soon. :)

-ReonN
acesmith
acesmith replied 20th Mar 2016 - 8 years ago
What's a talking drop? LOL. I probably know what you're saying and just don't know the name for it, but just in case.

Do you have any tips on how to add "ambience" or "booming"?

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