IGDTrap - Get Yo Smoke Remix Prod By LunnchBoxx - LunnchBoxx

It is not bad but I could suggest making the basses more louder and more powerful

your ideas are amazing. it's well arranged also. i understand you are learning the ropes with mixing but I think you have a great start. All the best. Dan

I'm not sure how much loops you have used or how much of your own synths you have put into this but it sounds pretty good. I would make the buildup more distinctive by adding some whooshes/transitions here and there but overall I think you nailed it.

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Very nice work I like it.
Well done.
Jamid

Hi,

I checked your profile to see what type of equipment you are working with, so I understand your limitations (sometimes great tunes can be created without modern technology). I'm hearing more trap than Dubstep, though you do have a most excellent section at about 1:10 where the dubstep comes in, and you repeat at 2:44.

The weakest part of this piece imho is the prolonged rapping. Its taking up most of the oxygen and I almost stopped listening because it was so long. But this is your first track, so I'm thinking there will be changes in time to make it stronger. Chopping up the rap will help so that it hits certain parts for emphasis. Welcome to the exciting world of music production! I wish you all the best with this.

Good idea, but the general sound is too weak, evanescent. A tad ripetitive too. In a 3:50 long track, the raising mode in the beginning is too long and the kick part last too little. I guess you worked on vocals too... maybe here needs some cue-throttling frames. Make all the sounds more fatty, and, imho, try to change the 0:00-1:40 part to get into kicks earlier.