Here It Goes- - DaveThorne555

You are right, I was thinking of using the repeat as a chorus and adding a new intro and in-betweens, kind of like 'rising nuclear sun' or 'I'm fine really'. This was just an experimental track I made and ultimately somebody wanted me to use it to remix their song. And I had to adjust it for better or worse to neutralize the tambourines in the background of his track. Not that it worked too well, but it sounded more interesting than the original. Looks like it will be a while before the new version gets uploaded. I'll probably do it in LMMS just to test-drive the software. Listening to your work you are definitely a long lost golden relic of the 90s will definitely follow some of your work in future. Danke's and Tumbleweed's works are already starting to shape my style and take it in new directions. Anyways, thanks for pointing that out. I'm lucky to such good feedback here, this is definitely a community full of quality musicians who too can be mentors with a few amateurs like me in between. lol.

Thanks Cru, looking at your and Silverman's comments, I've gotta feeling I'll have to start from scratch and take a new approach like I did with rising nuclear sun. The original version rising nuclear sun was in development hell for months and extending north of 6 minutes long. Will look into LMMS and Audacity a bit more to see if I can add more effects. This is the first time I used both Garageband V6 and V10 together and apologies if the sound is worse than previous due to messing with the equalizers, mp3 bitrate and compressors. Will change the text. I know it looks like the work of an amateur but versions change in quality as new suggestions are applied and new attempts are made. I've been in this game almost two years now. Once again thanks for the suggestions and constructive advice. -Dave

Thank you.

Good idea. Used it. Thanks Ed.

Ok, thanks ed, I'm following your suggestion. Will update the track with improvements in the weeks to come, kinda busy with my other life right now but here goes nothing, lol...