Tags : | House | 6.40 MB | Colab Request

Description : Inspired by DEADMAU5? Not really unless you count the name. Definitely has it's roots in modern British alternative music. Genre is: alternative progressive house. Built with positivity in mind so apologies if you see any melancholy. Constructive feedback along with harsh criticism and trolling welcome. Enjoy! UPDATE: White noise courtesy of exfain added. Improvements suggested by Tumbleweed added, new drummer track added. A slightly older version was used to remix Dylan Young's: America. This track can make many songs sound lively.

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  1. silverman
    silverman on Thu 17th Mar 2016 - 3 years ago

    Don't put yourself down mate that's what we're here for!
    No seriously I'm just an old fart who has a hobby and I post my stuff. Sometimes I get great feedback sometimes not.
    I listened to it all the way through .... always a good sign and it sounds just fine to me. One criticism from me is .... needs a little more variety chucking in there.

    DaveThorne555
    Reply by DaveThorne555

    You are right, I was thinking of using the repeat as a chorus and adding a new intro and in-betweens, kind of like 'rising nuclear sun' or 'I'm fine really'. This was just an experimental track I made and ultimately somebody wanted me to use it to remix their song. And I had to adjust it for better or worse to neutralize the tambourines in the background of his track. Not that it worked too well, but it sounded more interesting than the original. Looks like it will be a while before the new version gets uploaded. I'll probably do it in LMMS just to test-drive the software. Listening to your work you are definitely a long lost golden relic of the 90s will definitely follow some of your work in future. Danke's and Tumbleweed's works are already starting to shape my style and take it in new directions. Anyways, thanks for pointing that out. I'm lucky to such good feedback here, this is definitely a community full of quality musicians who too can be mentors with a few amateurs like me in between. lol.

  2. crucethus
    crucethus on Thu 17th Mar 2016 - 3 years ago

    So Dave, Welcome to music making. My advice to you is to be more assertive in your descriptive area when presenting this to the public. people feed off of the confidence and will more than likely listen. You could say. I'm new to this and I just made a fun tune that I like I was looking for your feedback from some of the experienced members to let me know what I can more with it.
    As for the song, it has some nice chord changes and completely reminds me of this tune.
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XvbkMpssrjU
    I put on the extended version so you hear how Giorgio Moroder builds this tune in the studio from an arrangers point of view.
    Keep making tunes, keep practicing and you will get better and better. This one has a lot of promise.
    Cru

    DaveThorne555
    Reply by DaveThorne555

    Thanks Cru, looking at your and Silverman's comments, I've gotta feeling I'll have to start from scratch and take a new approach like I did with rising nuclear sun. The original version rising nuclear sun was in development hell for months and extending north of 6 minutes long. Will look into LMMS and Audacity a bit more to see if I can add more effects. This is the first time I used both Garageband V6 and V10 together and apologies if the sound is worse than previous due to messing with the equalizers, mp3 bitrate and compressors. Will change the text. I know it looks like the work of an amateur but versions change in quality as new suggestions are applied and new attempts are made. I've been in this game almost two years now. Once again thanks for the suggestions and constructive advice. -Dave

  3. djpixxy
    djpixxy on Mon 8th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    First and foremost it was a great idea to upload this, and secondly the beat is nice and well .. prog-type

    DaveThorne555
    Reply by DaveThorne555

    Thank you.

  4. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Sun 7th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    Hey Dave...now you`ve got a title for your track ...."Here Goes Nothing"...haha....but I like the tune better than the title & those comments were just my off-the-top thoughts on how to bump it up a bit....keep on...Ed

    DaveThorne555
    Reply by DaveThorne555

    Good idea. Used it. Thanks Ed.

  5. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Sun 7th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    definitely upbeat Dave...something we could use more of in this mid Winter...nicely done, although I think you could bump it up even more with some low bass ( or some sub-bass hits)....you should mark your tunes as "Featured"...I think you would get some good feedback...Ed

    DaveThorne555
    Reply by DaveThorne555

    Ok, thanks ed, I'm following your suggestion. Will update the track with improvements in the weeks to come, kinda busy with my other life right now but here goes nothing, lol...

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