Description : The beat is not mine.. its DJ Jazzy Jeff.. His beats are the bomb... the first guy on this track is my buddy and I am the second guy on it... I would love some feedback.. good or bad... its all constructive... I hope you all like it..

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  1. Skinnyboyslim
    Skinnyboyslim on Sat 21st Mar 2015 - 9 years ago

    KrayzieB pumpin it out!! Yeeeaaaah Kid, sounds good. Bumpin, groovy, poppin, beats are beatin, etc. Great job. Your friend has a good voice, he's just missin somethin. Maybe he's just not fittin in the groove pocket the way you do. Your vox are slammin boy!!! Well done!

  2. joecramer
    joecramer on Wed 18th Mar 2015 - 9 years ago

    Yo man, not bad at all but the mix isnt that good :)

    I like the second part much more but it is cause the mix sounds much better on that. The sound of part 1 (i just mean the vocals) is realy not good but i like the way of preforming.
    You should do that whole thing again (and again and again) solong that the voice sounds much more clear and without this pops and things that are around. It sounds a little like you recorded it whith loud music on and not with some headphones .... but overall i like the idea behind what i can hear.

    stay tuned
    joe

    KrayzieB
    Reply by KrayzieB

    whats up joecramer. thanks bro... the second guy on the track is me.. the first is my buddy.. I recorded his first while he was there he was particular about his shit... and thas what he wanted.... the second one was done once (recording I mean) and that's it... plus I do not have any good quality recording equip... I got a 20 year old laptop some shit programs and a Dollarama mic. I actually have to listen to the instrumental on my MP3 player separate from the computer and then mix the vocals.. which takes forever... so really I think its ok with what I got to work with naw mean... id love to get some better equipment or work with someone who does.. like collab over the internet.. record my vox and send it out and get it back with some work done on it...

  3. wise11
    wise11 on Wed 18th Mar 2015 - 9 years ago

    Great stuff man ! Just do some mixing on vocals and its going to be just fine :) Otherwise its dope !

    KrayzieB
    Reply by KrayzieB

    wats poppin wise11 thanks for the feedback... ive had that track and other beats forever and jus been nervous to post shit... ive been on looperman for a while now tho jus didn't think it was good... didn't expect positive let alone any feedback really.. yea the mixing is not great at all.. but as I told joecramer (above) im working with a 20 year old laptop and a dollar store mic. the instrumental is played separate on my mp3 player then I take forever to mix vox innit... that's all that ive heard about the track tho is the mixing but for what im working with I think its decent... id like to do collabs tho.. like record my vox separate and send it to someone here and have them mix it in professionally and send it back.. I write stuff everyday... anyways thanks again.. you two jus made my fuckin month!! lol

    peace

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