Listen To The Difference Rap Song By AmirGabriel At Looperman.com

I like your flow, but you need a better mic (just something that I thought when I heard it) also, using ableton us the eq to make your vocals "fit" better in the mix. (The sound kind of flat)

Great work, and lots of good ideas!
Rico L.

i like this right here bro hmu for a collab sometime

add some variation to your flow

if you are still using ableton you can work on your vocals through that program instead of using third party stuff. just a tip to save some space on your hard drive.

you got a nice flow. how much time do you use on writing?

Agree with what has been said, you're on the right road. You can definitely boost the vocals using what you got already, Audacity. Under effects in Audacity there are two options you can try to make the vocals more up stage with the beat, 1 is to select the vocal track separately by clicking on its track detail panel to the left of the waveform for your pella track (if you loaded it separately) go to the effects tab menu at the top of audacity find the plugin called "Equalization" With that you can get them closer in sound. Currently sounds like your too apart from the level of the instrumental. Another way is find the effect plugin called "DJ EQ" which also helps as the 1st way which these two should come pre installed with that program. I've used it many times and helped me bring up my mixes to a more 'closer fitting'. Hope that's some help regarding bringing up the feel of the vocals with the instrumental. Also agree some reverb would make the sound have some nice atmosphere to make it shine or vibe along. If you do re do the vocal take try what I mentioned with it as well. Might be what you need until you get some new music toys. Cool share nonetheless. Thanks. Had me listening to your words and seeing your poetic paintings. Keep going. Peace.

I lack the hardware myself! I'm using Adobie auditions. Like the first one ever made. An I use my kids guitar hero mic on some of my recent tracks.i also use Shure sm57 mic. But depending on a sound I'm looking for vocally I'll use one or the other. Try reverb on your vocals( nice presence)

maybe you wont like it but autotune is a life safe.

Hey Amir...I agree with BONEZ, I would love to hear you put more ooomph and guts into your vocal, with more heart and intensity. You are on the right track with all of your tracks. Rap it out as if it's a life or death situation. Good job though.

i would say get hand in some better hardware then use to much on edit voice.

i dig it,but i think if you put more feelings into your flow to match the beat youll be on..!.on point with it though..maybe a better mix on the vocals too...all an all nice joint

Dope man! Keep up the awesome work! You for sure got a skill ! *thumps up*