The Difference - AmirGabriel

15th Mar 2015 16:17 - 11 years ago
Description : Another collaboration between Exfudux and I, give me some feedback, and while your at it go check out some more of his instrumentals, they're grade A

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If you have time take a listen and give AmirGabriel some feedback.

15ludwicke
15ludwicke 25th Mar 2015 03:16 - 11 years ago
I like your flow, but you need a better mic (just something that I thought when I heard it) also, using ableton us the eq to make your vocals "fit" better in the mix. (The sound kind of flat)

Great work, and lots of good ideas!
Rico L.
Antisocialj
Antisocialj 20th Mar 2015 20:41 - 11 years ago
i like this right here bro hmu for a collab sometime
AmirGabriel
AmirGabriel replied 25th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
I will definitely do that
Darklighter
Darklighter 20th Mar 2015 00:41 - 11 years ago
add some variation to your flow
BlaqhstarrMusic
BlaqhstarrMusic 20th Mar 2015 00:19 - 11 years ago
if you are still using ableton you can work on your vocals through that program instead of using third party stuff. just a tip to save some space on your hard drive.
centralsdev
centralsdev 19th Mar 2015 23:31 - 11 years ago
you got a nice flow. how much time do you use on writing?
AmirGabriel
AmirGabriel replied 25th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
I spend a decent amount of time with my writing I guess lol a lot of this stuff I actually wrote like last year then I went back and proof read it and added in bits and pieces. I also write on the bus sometimes since I have a long bus ride to school (of course I often doze off)
DesignedImpression
DesignedImpression 19th Mar 2015 10:09 - 11 years ago
Agree with what has been said, you're on the right road. You can definitely boost the vocals using what you got already, Audacity. Under effects in Audacity there are two options you can try to make the vocals more up stage with the beat, 1 is to select the vocal track separately by clicking on its track detail panel to the left of the waveform for your pella track (if you loaded it separately) go to the effects tab menu at the top of audacity find the plugin called "Equalization" With that you can get them closer in sound. Currently sounds like your too apart from the level of the instrumental. Another way is find the effect plugin called "DJ EQ" which also helps as the 1st way which these two should come pre installed with that program. I've used it many times and helped me bring up my mixes to a more 'closer fitting'. Hope that's some help regarding bringing up the feel of the vocals with the instrumental. Also agree some reverb would make the sound have some nice atmosphere to make it shine or vibe along. If you do re do the vocal take try what I mentioned with it as well. Might be what you need until you get some new music toys. Cool share nonetheless. Thanks. Had me listening to your words and seeing your poetic paintings. Keep going. Peace.
JoeyBonezSD1
JoeyBonezSD1 16th Mar 2015 12:22 - 11 years ago
I lack the hardware myself! I'm using Adobie auditions. Like the first one ever made. An I use my kids guitar hero mic on some of my recent tracks.i also use Shure sm57 mic. But depending on a sound I'm looking for vocally I'll use one or the other. Try reverb on your vocals( nice presence)
AmirGabriel
AmirGabriel replied 17th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Lol I've been working with the trial version of Ableton for the instrumentals and loops, but with Audacity for the vocals and recordings. I'm using my sister's cheap karaoke mic that came with one of her wii games haha
centralsdev
centralsdev 16th Mar 2015 04:56 - 11 years ago
maybe you wont like it but autotune is a life safe.
AmirGabriel
AmirGabriel replied 16th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Okey dokey, I might as well give it a shot.
Skinnyboyslim
Skinnyboyslim 15th Mar 2015 21:37 - 11 years ago
Hey Amir...I agree with BONEZ, I would love to hear you put more ooomph and guts into your vocal, with more heart and intensity. You are on the right track with all of your tracks. Rap it out as if it's a life or death situation. Good job though.
AmirGabriel
AmirGabriel replied 16th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
I hear what your saying, lol I'll try to redo this with a little more flare with, I'm planning to go over all my tracks using all the feedback I've been receiving. And I'm hoping to send you a preview of our collab by tuesday
centralsdev
centralsdev 15th Mar 2015 21:11 - 11 years ago
i would say get hand in some better hardware then use to much on edit voice.
AmirGabriel
AmirGabriel replied 16th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Yeah I know I can afford any good hardware at the moment guess its time I start saving up to support my craft haha, but how do you think I should go about editing the vocals?
JoeyBonezSD1
JoeyBonezSD1 15th Mar 2015 20:06 - 11 years ago
i dig it,but i think if you put more feelings into your flow to match the beat youll be on..!.on point with it though..maybe a better mix on the vocals too...all an all nice joint
AmirGabriel
AmirGabriel replied 16th Mar 2015 - 11 years ago
Alrighty I'll give it another go with a little more heart and soul, do you think a little reverb could do the vocals some good?
Exfudux
Exfudux 15th Mar 2015 19:09 - 11 years ago
Dope man! Keep up the awesome work! You for sure got a skill ! *thumps up*

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