Tags : | Rock | 6.27 MB | Has Lyrics | Featured

Description : Thank you Kargalar for letting me sing to this wonderful piece. Hopefully you enjoy!

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  1. aelmen
    aelmen on Fri 24th Jun 2016 - 3 years ago

    Hi!

    I think the vocals works fine but I also think it needs some effects like reverb and a compression tool to take this song to the next level. I'm telling you this because I really think this one has got a good potential and I've been playing this song twice now, so I really like it.

    /Anders

  2. theHumps
    theHumps on Fri 24th Jun 2016 - 3 years ago

    Just a couple suggestions. The vocals seem a little loud compared to the music. I would lower them a bit and add a little reverb to make them sit better in the mix.

    Cheers!

    Wayne

  3. Kargalar
    Kargalar on Wed 25th Feb 2015 - 4 years ago

    Hey ! i like it very much !
    Your style blends perfectly with the song and brings new life to it.
    Love the melody in the pre-chorus.
    Give me your mail, i guess i have an acoustic version of this tune in my pc, i'll send it to you.
    Thanks for making this and taking the time :)

    mathivus
    Reply by mathivus

    Thank you.

    is my email.

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Enough pretending that this is my show
For you are the master controlling my strings
As the curtain falls, you force me to bow
But I can see the lies you feed to these things

The pendulum continues to swing, letting the time pass by
My mind is confused and it says I want to be free

Farewell old friend this is my life I decided to take
No longer will I be contained within you

So you got the battle, but I won the war
With the sword piercing through your chest
You plea to me, I want to be out of this torture
But you had your fun and it is time for me to rise

The show is slowly coming to an end, as the audience grows tense
Wondering if this is what they expected it to be

Farewell old friend this is my life I decided to take
No longer will I be contained within you

No longer will I be contained within you (Repeat)

Farewell old friend this is my life I decided to take
No longer will I be contained within you

Within you

 


 

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