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8th Feb 2015 10:43 - 10 years ago
Description : Wanted to make a different track, one that wasn't like my usual electro dance track.
This one still has dance elements just toned it back a bit.
Think its pretty good for what it it though?
Ive still got more to add like an outro, its also got some problems with the volume, needs a better bass and some more low synths and maybe a different melody in with the chorus.
But yeah, ive uploaded to get you guys' feedback, so what do you think? :)
Everything is mine no loops or anything :)

Comments (14)

If you have time take a listen and give XyIlent some feedback.

BradoSanz
BradoSanz 17th Feb 2015 21:13 - 10 years ago
I've listened to this track again and I still gotta say its AWESOME bro. Good stuff. Personally, I find that maybe the piano could use a little more sustain? Just to keep it from sounding to midi-ish. Just my two cents :P Still an excellent song.
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 17th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
hhmm.. ill give that a try. never thought of that, thanks man :D
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami 17th Feb 2015 19:58 - 10 years ago
Another brilliant track! I love the complexity you include in this track. Gentle intro, then from there it transitions into greatness. Great use of keys, which is one thing I absolutely love. I'm really digging your creative synth patterns, which goes with the electro-like drum patterns. At 1:40, that is a very creative way to transition back to the keys, then from there it takes off again. Then it ends with a gentle bang. Incredible work, my friend!

~GO
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 17th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks for the feedback :D

"Great use of keys"

Yeah, put alot of work into the melody for this one. Started off with some simple chords and evolved into a cool little melody.

"At 1:40, that is a very creative way to transition back to the keys"

Yeah, originally it just went straight to the keys after the chorus, but it didnt feel right so i added an extra bar or 2 for the pad transition.

Thanks for the listen :D
MatthewFarrow
MatthewFarrow 15th Feb 2015 15:06 - 10 years ago
Awesome! so im kinda new..., I can i use your loops in my songs i just can't redistribute the loops? Are there people who upload illegal loops that i can get penalized for using in my songs? and do you have sound cloud i can check out?
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 15th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
Hey Matthew :)
There are help sections that can answer the questions better than i can but if your looking for a quick answer,

Loops are copyright-free basically meaning you can do what you want with them. (by the way songs like this^ are not copyright-free. I have full rights to my songs.)

There will unfortunately be people who upload loops that are from other sites, dont think ive ever came across one, but im sure there are. But it would quickly get removed so i wouldn't worry about it.

yeah i have soundcloud :)

https://soundcloud.com/sean-mccuaig

p.s the help section will answer these questions better
http://www.looperman.com/help
Byleth
Byleth 11th Feb 2015 18:57 - 10 years ago
well made dear XyIlent. I always found making a track without sample harder.

So I would grats you about this.

maybe you will have to play the master to fix your volume issue.

but with my cheap earphone this sound nice I will maybe write a new comment when i will be at home due i have a very better sound system.

anyway nice one hope you have fun to making this

-Antonius in die tribulationis
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 11th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
yeah shouldnt be too hard to fix the volume issues, its just in some areas it gets a bit loud for me, sounds like its distorting
thanks man :)
appriciate the comment.
M4GIXX
M4GIXX 11th Feb 2015 17:49 - 10 years ago
You know. this is really good m8. I have one tip though, you could add a pad and bass to the piano part, so it doesn't sound as empty as it does now. good job though!
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 11th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
cheers man :), think ive done that in the updated version that i have, but if not ill add it in :D

thanks!
Livingsoulsdie
Livingsoulsdie 10th Feb 2015 00:48 - 10 years ago
Very cool track loving just about every aspect. There is just something about the piano in the intro and the beginning of the next repetition. It just sounds plain, to me it sounds like mabey the piano should be a little more wet sounding with atleast a little more reverb or something. Overall though this is very cool its very chill-like.
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 10th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
yeah i agree, needs some light synths as well i think.

thanks for the comment :)
Modnex
Modnex 9th Feb 2015 19:02 - 10 years ago
Man, this track is really great! Sometimes different isn't a bad thing and in this case it truly isn't! I love that keys. I also like the ghost synth you used in the track, it fits very well. All in all, great track here man! ]

Keep up the great work!
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 9th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
:) thanks Modnex

"Sometimes different isn't a bad"

yeah a little change is always good! :), especially when producing. I mean i didnt completely change genres or anything haha, just held it back a bit, if you know what i mean.

"I love that keys"

YEAH, im actually weirdly proud of the melody i made for this haha, it was super fun to make! :D
glad you like it too :)

"I also like the ghost synth"

Yeah, i pulled alot synths from older projects for this one, with a bit of tweaks they worked pretty well together.

Thanks for the comment :)
Glad you enjoyed.
soundhound
soundhound 9th Feb 2015 18:03 - 10 years ago
This is really good, solid flow moves like it has someplace to go...

Very good project, keep'er going...

Peace...TG.
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 9th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
thanks man :)
i was starting to fall away from this project a bit, in favour of other tracks but these comments have inspired me :D haha
Ill defiantly be updating it.

Thanks SoundHound!
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 9th Feb 2015 14:33 - 10 years ago
AHHHHHH. Thats so refreshing, that intro synth. Bro, I LOVE your stuff.
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 9th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
yyeeaahh that synth is a favourite of mine, think ive used it in a few tracks haha. It was a preset i kinda liked but after messing around with it for a bit it evolved into that^.

Glad you like my stuff man :),
been listening to all your tracks since you came on looperman and they are f#@?ing gorgeous, so im happy u like mine too :)
clindsay
clindsay 9th Feb 2015 13:46 - 10 years ago
This is nice - drums are a little hot in spots but overall good production values. Really liked the transition at 1:47 - great piano work! Holds together well - well done.
-clindsay
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 9th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
cheers :), yeah i know what you mean i dont know if its the spot your thinking of but the kick at 45 seconds in im thinking of switching with something else dont think it fits.
Thanks for the comment clindsay :)
FD821
FD821 9th Feb 2015 04:01 - 10 years ago
good job this is pretty good
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 9th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
that you :) glad you enjoyed
bigtyrone3969
bigtyrone3969 9th Feb 2015 01:41 - 10 years ago
I really dig it. Nice!!!!!!
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 9th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks :)
Gravicc
Gravicc 8th Feb 2015 17:27 - 10 years ago
Can i remix it
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 8th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
yeah sure :)
Danke
Danke 8th Feb 2015 11:11 - 10 years ago
Brilliant, bloody brilliant!

I learn the EDM music now and tracks like this are just inspiring me...can't advice anything cause I'm new in this platform but what I hear is the good mix (and master?) and the nice combination of the pads and piano...like the progressive middle part too...

Thankx for the upload, DL and fav!

Danke
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 8th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
;) Thanks danke!
Im glad your learning edm! cant wait to hear some of it.
there's nothing on the master lol, just a limiter if i remember correctly.
So glad you liked, wasnt sure if people were going to enjoy this one :)

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