Very Nice Indeed

This is nice. Lots of great elements too this one. Nice job.

Nice!

Solid work, and outstanding flow

Good workmate.

Great guitars

such a dope track.love the guitar

Really pro sounding track, nice beat and super smooth vocal line. Great stuff

nice!

You know, this is very good job, rimes, beat, melody, it's very great, that there actuali are people, that still make old-school hip-hop. Very great to know, that im not alone with old school in all of this sucky trap and new rap. Dude, you have my great respect for this work!

really great work here!

Nice rythm, nice flow, nice beat. But what I like the most are the vocals; yeah very nice vocals.

wow... impressive. Nice flow and nice track. Keep it coming!

don't know how i missed this one way back. but i dig it. the hand drums are so well suited for his vibe

Looperman classic right here. You did everything right on this one, good work.

Get Some Better Recording Equipment And Fire Whoever Mixed This.

Awesome song but maybe needs a vocal recording with better equipment. Maybe I'm wrong but there's a lot distortion and small vocal range, it messes with the voice and the rest of the track.

Cool Track.

- Billion

nice tune

I can only agree with the others here
excellent track
You can listen to it and let your mind travel around for minutes
A jewel

Max

Truly professional track.The music just so cool and i love the quality of the production, its just superb.Nice flow on rap.What I would urge you to do,if I had to change anything,I would get a female singer to just sing some melodic tunes in the hindsight,to create sort of the soothing vibe already existing.otherwise well done

dude really like the flow of the music and the smooth lyrics. In my opinion however, it could have been a little more 'uptempo' but thats just me man. ;) still great track

Great artistic work! sound quality absolutely great.Love it.The composition is top notch.Just bring a bit of clarity to vocals to sit on the mix and you set to fly to the sunnyside.well done on good work

This is dope. Reminds me of a very little known rapper named Truett

Good track nice flow man like the track complete bang!!!

Man this is one helluva track. I mean aside from the mixing issues mentioned by other users, its really powerful. The guitar is great but those spacey waterdrop Bells really add to the emotion of this track. Lyrics were great, flow for the first two verses were fire, the third and fourth felt a bit off but they were cool as well. You guys really should clean up the mix a bit and this track will be up there commercial ready.

yes, it is extremely nice but there is a serious problem with volume levels and vocal mixing on this track, the instrumental sounds heavy overproduced to me. honestly it is too much. at least when compared with other music posted here. I understand that this is where overall radio music is still heading these days but truly this affects too much the genuine simplicity of the spoken word message and the listening experience itself. I do not listen to the modern mainstream popular music that much btw, I always preffer live played and recorded instruments so this is just a very subjective opinion of mine. see that others pointed similar things below too.

Damn this one going deep! Great beat, great lyrics.. Perfect!

solid mix sir. rapping is smooth and natural. like the way you bring it all down up to 2:30 before starting in again. good work. regards. Dan

Nice job rapping ain't as easy as some may think unless you just a pure natural

Love the beat, but the lyrics are the true winner here.nice work

Very nice flow you have in the vocals. Beat is pretty sick as well. Great great track!

this is cool

very dope track. this is why music is the greatest thing on earth. the unhreard get heard, the unknown get a small moment of fame within their tribe of fellow musicians, you can move without physically touching anything.

you did a great job, kid. keep up the great work.

Great song, but I think the vocals could use a little de-essing. A little harsh on the high end. But wow, I dig those vocals. Flows nicely and has a cool groove. The backtrack is pretty dope as well.

Great work! This sounds very professionally done, and your flow has an almost eminem-like quality to it. Great work!

Rico L.

hey guys - would u mind if we used your track in our A Week In Open Mic documentary on YouTube? It's a monthly docco about comedians in London but i love finding unsigned acts and giving them a bit of exposure.

It's likely to be seen/heard by another 200 people that might not have heard you before; nothing massive i know. but still! :)

Let me know if thats ok?

wow, very nice. love the voice. fits perfectly.

Very nice variety of instruments there! Mind stimulating.

This sounds really professional. Well written lyrics, nice track and mixed down really well. Great atmosphere, cool efx and great all round vibe.
Really enjoyed listening to this piece.
FR

This is awesome. Great beat, lyrics, it all just works.

I really logged on today just to download some beats, and then came across this.

Reason number one why I love looperman.

- ArtfulOne

Tight song,love the MCS on it and i love the beat.Good work.

your rap is really convincing. and you do a lot with sounds and effects to keep the background fresh and interesting. really nice work. congrats!

Nice flow from both. I'm guessing you're the second guy? Is there a second, pitched lower, effect on your vocals? Interesting.

Then boost the high frequencies and locate the problematic ones and reduce the levels.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vo4mFsM5DZ0

some sounds are set too high thats nothing new , the track is dope! =)

It sounds really good.

One thing that I did notice that can improve your track is to fix the Es sounds. If you put some headphones on and turn it up really loud, then you will notice there are some high frequency sounds that are extremely annoying. The good news is, that it is easy to fix.

Do this:
Use a paramedic EQ and do a frequency sweep and listen for annoying high frequency sounds and KILL THEM!

If you don't know how to do a frequency sweep, then let me know and I will tell you.

The guitar thoughout this song is awesome!

amazing job bro i like it

This sounds as a wonderful song to me, really wonderful, but you should put some more attention on production. Sound is distorted cause of too high volume levels. I hope you will correct those issues and if you do I will download this because I really like the song.:)

All the best____Orlando

Overall nice track man! One thing to consider when mixing is 'dynamics' my friend. I can't fully appreciate the content of your song or lyrics because everything is so loud, it's distorting. A good indication that some thing(s) is/are too loud in your mix is the shape of the waveform in the player above. If it mostly just looks like a block with hard, straight edges then you know its too loud. The waveform should have a nice shape to it. Turn things down. You might be surprised with the clarity of everything after that. Peace.

RAMPA\\\

I agree with eyedye, check the volume but good song overall.

Nice flow man! Only thing is that you might want to check the volume levels a bit. Through most of the the song i can hear the static of it being a bit too loud. Other than that, great work!