Description : This song is all about SJW and his talent. I just added my verse.

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  1. crucethus
    crucethus on Mon 12th Sep 2022 - 4 months ago

    Very Nice Indeed

  2. andre778
    andre778 on Tue 29th Jun 2021 - 1 year ago

    This is nice. Lots of great elements too this one. Nice job.

  3. RuslanG
    RuslanG on Tue 5th Jan 2021 - 2 years ago


  4. thechockehold
    thechockehold on Fri 24th Jan 2020 - 3 years ago

    Solid work, and outstanding flow

  5. DijamMusic
    DijamMusic on Fri 1st Nov 2019 - 3 years ago

    Good workmate.

  6. thechockehold
    thechockehold on Fri 1st Nov 2019 - 3 years ago

    Great guitars

  7. JoeyBonezSD1
    JoeyBonezSD1 on Fri 7th Jun 2019 - 3 years ago

    such a dope the guitar

  8. Jkingz
    Jkingz on Sat 27th Oct 2018 - 4 years ago

    Really pro sounding track, nice beat and super smooth vocal line. Great stuff

  9. mikey1x12
    mikey1x12 on Tue 28th Aug 2018 - 4 years ago


  10. SnakeHed
    SnakeHed on Fri 23rd Mar 2018 - 4 years ago

    You know, this is very good job, rimes, beat, melody, it's very great, that there actuali are people, that still make old-school hip-hop. Very great to know, that im not alone with old school in all of this sucky trap and new rap. Dude, you have my great respect for this work!

  11. Ben1972
    Ben1972 on Sun 18th Jun 2017 - 5 years ago

    really great work here!

  12. DIICA
    DIICA on Mon 15th May 2017 - 5 years ago

    Nice rythm, nice flow, nice beat. But what I like the most are the vocals; yeah very nice vocals.

  13. ronabo
    ronabo on Tue 25th Apr 2017 - 5 years ago

    wow... impressive. Nice flow and nice track. Keep it coming!

  14. flonut7
    flonut7 on Mon 1st Aug 2016 - 6 years ago

    don't know how i missed this one way back. but i dig it. the hand drums are so well suited for his vibe

  15. KnightHeir
    KnightHeir on Sun 24th Jul 2016 - 6 years ago

    Looperman classic right here. You did everything right on this one, good work.

  16. BillionaireExclusive
    BillionaireExclusive on Fri 22nd Jul 2016 - 6 years ago

    Get Some Better Recording Equipment And Fire Whoever Mixed This.

  17. Darknives
    Darknives on Fri 22nd Jul 2016 - 6 years ago

    Awesome song but maybe needs a vocal recording with better equipment. Maybe I'm wrong but there's a lot distortion and small vocal range, it messes with the voice and the rest of the track.

  18. BillionaireExclusive
    BillionaireExclusive on Sat 16th Jul 2016 - 6 years ago

    Cool Track.

    - Billion

  19. marc1981
    marc1981 on Fri 15th Jul 2016 - 6 years ago

    nice tune

  20. MaxBonsi
    MaxBonsi on Sun 24th Apr 2016 - 6 years ago

    I can only agree with the others here
    excellent track
    You can listen to it and let your mind travel around for minutes
    A jewel


  21. lechina
    lechina on Mon 29th Feb 2016 - 6 years ago

    Truly professional track.The music just so cool and i love the quality of the production, its just superb.Nice flow on rap.What I would urge you to do,if I had to change anything,I would get a female singer to just sing some melodic tunes in the hindsight,to create sort of the soothing vibe already existing.otherwise well done

  22. DJMoD
    DJMoD on Mon 29th Feb 2016 - 6 years ago

    dude really like the flow of the music and the smooth lyrics. In my opinion however, it could have been a little more 'uptempo' but thats just me man. ;) still great track

  23. lechina
    lechina on Tue 9th Feb 2016 - 6 years ago

    Great artistic work! sound quality absolutely great.Love it.The composition is top notch.Just bring a bit of clarity to vocals to sit on the mix and you set to fly to the sunnyside.well done on good work

  24. NatoriousBeatz
    NatoriousBeatz on Sat 23rd Jan 2016 - 7 years ago

    This is dope. Reminds me of a very little known rapper named Truett

  25. TayaliJeffrey
    TayaliJeffrey on Wed 4th Nov 2015 - 7 years ago

    Good track nice flow man like the track complete bang!!!

  26. OmarMuk
    OmarMuk on Sun 27th Sep 2015 - 7 years ago

    Man this is one helluva track. I mean aside from the mixing issues mentioned by other users, its really powerful. The guitar is great but those spacey waterdrop Bells really add to the emotion of this track. Lyrics were great, flow for the first two verses were fire, the third and fourth felt a bit off but they were cool as well. You guys really should clean up the mix a bit and this track will be up there commercial ready.

    Reply by facasgrimm

    I appreciate your words and your time. Thank you.

  27. promenade2239
    promenade2239 on Sat 26th Sep 2015 - 7 years ago

    yes, it is extremely nice but there is a serious problem with volume levels and vocal mixing on this track, the instrumental sounds heavy overproduced to me. honestly it is too much. at least when compared with other music posted here. I understand that this is where overall radio music is still heading these days but truly this affects too much the genuine simplicity of the spoken word message and the listening experience itself. I do not listen to the modern mainstream popular music that much btw, I always preffer live played and recorded instruments so this is just a very subjective opinion of mine. see that others pointed similar things below too.

    Reply by facasgrimm

    Thank you for your listen and constructive criticism. SJW put up this track with his verses and the space at the end for collab. I just tried to do my best to not fuck it up. I had a shitty mic at the time and realize it doesnt sound so good. Again thank you.

  28. NitramBeatS
    NitramBeatS on Fri 7th Aug 2015 - 7 years ago

    Damn this one going deep! Great beat, great lyrics.. Perfect!

  29. DanGoldstein
    DanGoldstein on Fri 7th Aug 2015 - 7 years ago

    solid mix sir. rapping is smooth and natural. like the way you bring it all down up to 2:30 before starting in again. good work. regards. Dan

  30. Ernestking78
    Ernestking78 on Wed 5th Aug 2015 - 7 years ago

    Nice job rapping ain't as easy as some may think unless you just a pure natural

  31. BeatMaker4real
    BeatMaker4real on Sat 11th Jul 2015 - 7 years ago

    Love the beat, but the lyrics are the true winner here.nice work

  32. mudhoen
    mudhoen on Fri 10th Jul 2015 - 7 years ago

    Very nice flow you have in the vocals. Beat is pretty sick as well. Great great track!

  33. lowmusik
    lowmusik on Fri 1st May 2015 - 7 years ago

    this is cool

  34. wordybum
    wordybum on Wed 8th Apr 2015 - 7 years ago

    very dope track. this is why music is the greatest thing on earth. the unhreard get heard, the unknown get a small moment of fame within their tribe of fellow musicians, you can move without physically touching anything.

    you did a great job, kid. keep up the great work.

  35. BradoSanz
    BradoSanz on Wed 8th Apr 2015 - 7 years ago

    Great song, but I think the vocals could use a little de-essing. A little harsh on the high end. But wow, I dig those vocals. Flows nicely and has a cool groove. The backtrack is pretty dope as well.

  36. 15ludwicke
    15ludwicke on Fri 27th Mar 2015 - 7 years ago

    Great work! This sounds very professionally done, and your flow has an almost eminem-like quality to it. Great work!

    Rico L.

  37. ade1980
    ade1980 on Sat 7th Feb 2015 - 7 years ago

    hey guys - would u mind if we used your track in our A Week In Open Mic documentary on YouTube? It's a monthly docco about comedians in London but i love finding unsigned acts and giving them a bit of exposure.

    It's likely to be seen/heard by another 200 people that might not have heard you before; nothing massive i know. but still! :)

    Let me know if thats ok?

    Reply by facasgrimm

    Wow man thank you for the honor. I can only speak for myself but that would be awesome. SJW should be contacted as well. I will try to message him but you should be able to find him here on looperman as well. Emial me at fracasgrimm480 at yahoo for further correspondence. Thank you again and RESPECT!

  38. franzone
    franzone on Thu 5th Feb 2015 - 7 years ago

    wow, very nice. love the voice. fits perfectly.

  39. Venuslove
    Venuslove on Fri 2nd Jan 2015 - 8 years ago

    Very nice variety of instruments there! Mind stimulating.

  40. FreeRadical
    FreeRadical on Fri 2nd Jan 2015 - 8 years ago

    This sounds really professional. Well written lyrics, nice track and mixed down really well. Great atmosphere, cool efx and great all round vibe.
    Really enjoyed listening to this piece.

  41. ArtfulOne
    ArtfulOne on Mon 29th Dec 2014 - 8 years ago

    This is awesome. Great beat, lyrics, it all just works.

    I really logged on today just to download some beats, and then came across this.

    Reason number one why I love looperman.

    - ArtfulOne

  42. benjizo
    benjizo on Fri 26th Dec 2014 - 8 years ago

    Tight song,love the MCS on it and i love the beat.Good work.

  43. DanGoldstein
    DanGoldstein on Thu 25th Dec 2014 - 8 years ago

    your rap is really convincing. and you do a lot with sounds and effects to keep the background fresh and interesting. really nice work. congrats!

  44. VicaMOOR
    VicaMOOR on Thu 25th Dec 2014 - 8 years ago

    Nice flow from both. I'm guessing you're the second guy? Is there a second, pitched lower, effect on your vocals? Interesting.

    Reply by facasgrimm

    Yeah I usually have a duplicate vocal with a lower pitch to add depth. I thank you for listening and commenting.

  45. radioilluminati
    radioilluminati on Sat 6th Dec 2014 - 8 years ago

    Then boost the high frequencies and locate the problematic ones and reduce the levels.

  46. Lithman
    Lithman on Fri 5th Dec 2014 - 8 years ago

    some sounds are set too high thats nothing new , the track is dope! =)

  47. radioilluminati
    radioilluminati on Tue 2nd Dec 2014 - 8 years ago

    It sounds really good.

    One thing that I did notice that can improve your track is to fix the Es sounds. If you put some headphones on and turn it up really loud, then you will notice there are some high frequency sounds that are extremely annoying. The good news is, that it is easy to fix.

    Do this:
    Use a paramedic EQ and do a frequency sweep and listen for annoying high frequency sounds and KILL THEM!

    If you don't know how to do a frequency sweep, then let me know and I will tell you.

    Reply by facasgrimm

    Thank you for listening. As far as the sounds all I did was record on the track that already had SJW on it. My equipment is not very good, headset mic and Audacity as my recording app. I would like to make it sound better of course so yes please tell me how to do what you said. Than you!

  48. Eighteen
    Eighteen on Mon 24th Nov 2014 - 8 years ago

    The guitar thoughout this song is awesome!

  49. samern
    samern on Mon 24th Nov 2014 - 8 years ago

    amazing job bro i like it

  50. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Sun 16th Nov 2014 - 8 years ago

    This sounds as a wonderful song to me, really wonderful, but you should put some more attention on production. Sound is distorted cause of too high volume levels. I hope you will correct those issues and if you do I will download this because I really like the song.:)

    All the best____Orlando

  51. RampatheSwift
    RampatheSwift on Wed 22nd Oct 2014 - 8 years ago

    Overall nice track man! One thing to consider when mixing is 'dynamics' my friend. I can't fully appreciate the content of your song or lyrics because everything is so loud, it's distorting. A good indication that some thing(s) is/are too loud in your mix is the shape of the waveform in the player above. If it mostly just looks like a block with hard, straight edges then you know its too loud. The waveform should have a nice shape to it. Turn things down. You might be surprised with the clarity of everything after that. Peace.


    Reply by facasgrimm

    Thank you for your tips. I appreciate all forms of feedback My recording is my biggest hurdle. Just do not have the right equipment. I will try to implement your suggestion however. Thank you!

  52. RealProblemShuckers
    RealProblemShuckers on Tue 21st Oct 2014 - 8 years ago

    I agree with eyedye, check the volume but good song overall.

    Reply by facasgrimm

    Thank you for listening. Please give SJW a s/o on the original w/o/ me. Thanks!

  53. Emolyte
    Emolyte on Tue 21st Oct 2014 - 8 years ago

    Nice flow man! Only thing is that you might want to check the volume levels a bit. Through most of the the song i can hear the static of it being a bit too loud. Other than that, great work!

    Reply by facasgrimm

    Thank you for listening. I hope you look up SJW and the version w/o me to see if it is better. Thanks again.

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