Description : I have lots of songs written and would like help with beats,levels,etc. Here is an example of one I did. All songs were recorded with garageband and a usb mic. I have a lot of other songs less finished than this and I am looking for some collaborations on them. Thanks
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Yeah it seems you really just need to tighten up your production and mixing on this. Are you using EQ and compression on the tracks and or the master mix? It has plenty of room to grow as in get wider. I like to EQ each track and get rid of any bad frequencies roll of the extreme lows with a High Pass Filter. jmo.
Not sure what I expected, but it is a lot better than I thought it was going to be - I think any issues you have are more production related. Conceptually, this is a winner.
I think you should probably revisit the mix and widen things out a bunch. Don't be afraid to get a large stereo field....maybe warm the vocals up a bit. The clipping issues can be resolved in a new mix. It also might help to move some of the instruments in the mix, maybe pan your rhythm guitar to the right, lead guitar to the left. Drums and bass to the middle (think about how a band is set up, then line up the instruments just like that in your mix). You could triple your vocals and then pan one left, one right and one down the middle. Add subtle fx to the vox....a different type of fx on each vocal track until you get a big fat sound.
It has a ton of potential and reminds me of Eminem in spots. Well done. I hope all is well.
Only issues I heard were some clipping/static sounds coming from the lead guitar solo, the low volume of the main guitar, and it sounds like something is clipping in the keys at the beginning.
Really just some clipping here and there. I really like the song. Nice mixture of different feels. I wasn't expecting Rap-Rock. Works very well!
Thank you for listening and for your comment. I am an old "Rap-rock" kind of guy,lol. But I do have some songs in other styles I will be posting. Most are in m4a.mp3 so I am having trouble posting them. But when I figure it out I look forward to more great feedback. Thanks again
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I think you should probably revisit the mix and widen things out a bunch. Don't be afraid to get a large stereo field....maybe warm the vocals up a bit. The clipping issues can be resolved in a new mix. It also might help to move some of the instruments in the mix, maybe pan your rhythm guitar to the right, lead guitar to the left. Drums and bass to the middle (think about how a band is set up, then line up the instruments just like that in your mix). You could triple your vocals and then pan one left, one right and one down the middle. Add subtle fx to the vox....a different type of fx on each vocal track until you get a big fat sound.
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Really just some clipping here and there. I really like the song. Nice mixture of different feels. I wasn't expecting Rap-Rock. Works very well!