A First - Livingsoulsdie

21st Jun 2014 07:25 - 12 years ago
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Description : This is my first practice track ever I know I need a lot of practice and the track can use tweaking any and all constructive criticism will be appreciated :) Hopefully you all enjoy it.

The loops I used for this track are from Danke.
looperman-l-0671112-0065731-danke-raining
looperman-l-0671112-0071806-danke-trance-arp
looperman-l-0671112-0072471-danke-trance-gate

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give Livingsoulsdie some feedback.

AZZYKO
AZZYKO 22nd Jun 2014 19:01 - 12 years ago
This is very good if this is your first attempt. I agree that kick should be harder, but other parts sounds nice.
Livingsoulsdie
Livingsoulsdie replied 23rd Jun 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks. Yeah I just got into this stuff i really dont know anything about recording lol im trying my best because I would like to do more with it. I get lost in it you know I can just sit here for hours.
FreeRadical
FreeRadical 21st Jun 2014 17:09 - 12 years ago
Well this is sounding pretty good so far. For a first track it's excellent. I notice though that the kick drum is drowned out a little by the bass but the melodies and arpegios are all good. I think you just need a punchier kick drum and this would be a blinder.
I enjoyed listening to this.
FR
Livingsoulsdie
Livingsoulsdie replied 22nd Jun 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks man I appreciate the comment. I agree the kick is drowned out pretty bad by the bass. I obviously didn't notice as I was listening to it . Thanks for the comment :)
GramoChopin
GramoChopin 21st Jun 2014 16:12 - 12 years ago
So i guess you must be saying this is one your first house tracks? Or first track ever? Even so, this is actually pretty good work for a "first practice track." It's little inconsistent and some of the arrangement shows it's your first time. However, I do like the vibe of this very much. It has potential, if you would expand on the guitar like melody it would sound even better. Just come back to it over time, that's what I do with some of my tracks now. Keep it up bro. peace

Gramo/Neo
Livingsoulsdie
Livingsoulsdie replied 22nd Jun 2014 - 12 years ago
Yea its hard to add much on this as the ableton program i have only allows my 8 track which is pretty crappy. I know i'm a noob but thanks for the comments I will try to fine tune everything.

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