Tags : | Pop | 7.22 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : This is a track I was working on at the end of the year but I lost the main files when my computer crashed ( I now back up!!) the unfinished and un-mastered MP3 version has been laying about for the last 6 months, so whilst having a spring clean I thought I would inflict it on my fellow looperpeople for your comments!! It certainly isn't one of my better efforts, see what you think. Thanks.

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  1. Mosaic
    Mosaic on Tue 16th Sep 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hey Mark

    Mate you never disappoint, another very enjoyable listening piece from you once more, track to me seems to be a blend of a couple of genre's, pop dance trance electronic, whatever genre, extremely refreshing listen, great use of the vocals, going out on a limb here, would say this is one of my all time fav's by you so far...MASSIVE FAV...Peace n Respect Mark...Mosaic...

  2. deciBel
    deciBel on Thu 29th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hi Mark & yessss this is U for me ...
    U with this special elegantly usage of synth , suitable
    ,proper & impressive usage of Vocals , that unique self style of U about surprizing usage of latin instruments which I've really liked & totallY a package that makes me remember I'm listening to someone who has worked in music more & longer than me ...many thnx my friend for sharing your innovation.all the best.___B

  3. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Thu 29th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hi Mark..

    My apologise for commenting so late but somehow I overlooked your new upload (it happens^^). This is perfectly fine piece of music no matter if you or anybody else are not counting it among your best. Generally I find it very pleasing and it reminds me on the soundworld of one of the UB 40's earlier albums titled "Signing off"... I really liked that album, so why not to like your song as well.:)^^

    Good job again, my friend...keep them coming...

    Orlando

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Orlando,

    No worries, I too am trying to do juggle so many things and dropping most of them!! It is always refreshing to hear your comments and its flattering to have this track compared to UB 4O!! I did think this was going to be a great track when I first embarked on making it but sort of lost my way..and then the WAV files!! but it really pleases me that you like it and once again I respect your always honest opinion. I am working on new stuff, but time seems to conspire!!
    Thanks again Orlando and take care my friend.

    My best wishes as always,

    Mark

  4. topvega
    topvega on Thu 29th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Rough but interesting....not sure how "pop" it is. I have lost some master tracks and know your pain.

    tv

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    A big thanks for stopping by and listening, and I know what you mean...and I couldn't decide what Genre to put it under so decided pop was nearest.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  5. domr30
    domr30 on Tue 27th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    tres belle realisation domr

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Merci domr

  6. crucethus
    crucethus on Mon 26th May 2014 - 5 years ago

    I agree with Behnam's synopsis, but it has potential to be something bigger, I can hear it, it just needs some tweaking. Maybe some live synths. I like the delayed vocals. It needs some more varied percussion, and maybe slow the tempo down just a squeak. Maybe a guitar solo. I would have to think about this one my friend.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Steve,

    It did start off as being a favourite track which I thought had potential, but I got a bit disillusioned when I lost the WAV files, maybe I should have gone back to the drawing board, but in one way I am glad I uploaded it because the feedback I am getting is constructive and confirms what I thought. Great to hear from you as always.

    Very best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  7. deciBel
    deciBel on Fri 23rd May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Hi Mark/Larry
    this is coll the way U've mixed various sound & voice & instrruments , but to be honest,respectfully I've heared more thoughtfull traX from U & althouth this is good , but not one of your bests in my opinion ...
    hope U ain't mind this amateur's commenT .U know I've greatest respects for your obvious musical tallent & skills my friend.
    best wishes.___Behnam

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Behnam,

    thank you my friend, I really was at a loss with this track, whwn I started mixing it I thought it was sounding good but there was too much going on and was going remix and edit various segments but I lost the WAV files and only the original MP3 take was left. So you are absolutely right with your comments, and I value them so very much, in hindsight I think I should have left this track in the file known as unfinished!.
    Thanks again for taking time to listen, but above all for your honest comments.

    Take care Behnam and will be in touch soon.

    Very best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  8. Billydragon1
    Billydragon1 on Fri 23rd May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Thanks for reminding me to backup my files, again!
    The sounds brings back lots of memories for me.

    Hey Mark have you thought of mixing Magix and Ejay sounds together, I'm in the process of doing it and have already done 2 songs, it works!

    Thanks for your inspirations! - Billy.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi Billy,

    Glad you heeded the reminder ( wish I had chosen a better song though!!)
    no I hadn't thought of mixing the two together, but thanks for that Billy, going to give it a try.

    Speak soon and very best wishes,

    Mark

  9. FreeRadical
    FreeRadical on Fri 23rd May 2014 - 5 years ago

    Yeah it sucks when you lose your tunes. I think i'm on lap top number 4 now and half the tunes on my profile are unrecoverable.
    Liking the acid house injection in this track. It's pretty good when it gets going but it's not as good as the last one i played of yours.
    Still a pleasant listen though.
    FR

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi FR,

    I tended to save tracks randomly as MP3's but never backed up the WAV files. This track was one I was going to work on a lot more, lost the main files and there it lay as an MP3, finished but not finished, so I know where you are coming from...and maybe I should have left it alone gathering dust!! Thanks anyway for your much appreciated comments.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  10. glados666
    glados666 on Fri 23rd May 2014 - 5 years ago

    What a sad backstory this has... good track though!

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,
    Thanks for listening, and for liking in general.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

  11. RealProblemShuckers
    RealProblemShuckers on Fri 23rd May 2014 - 5 years ago

    I quite like this. It has a sort of surreal and nostalgic touch to it- but it gets a bit repetitive after a while.

    larrywiggles1
    Reply by larrywiggles1

    Hi,

    Thanks for listening, and yes I agree, it was one area I would change, but didn't just want to cut it shorter, I was hoping to re-arrange the last minute. Thanks for liking in general though.

    Best wishes,

    Mark/Larry!

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