Freedom - Luizor EIM - Luizor

16th May 2014 19:33 - 12 years ago
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Description : Here is an exclusive Original track for looperman :) hope you like it :) 100% MADE BY ME. From the instrumental, lyrics, voice and production. Hope you like it :)

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give Luizor some feedback.

theHumps
theHumps 17th May 2014 13:00 - 12 years ago
This is a catchy pop song, well done. The lyrics and vocals are excellent. The music goes perfectly with singing. I agree with others who have commented about the kick. Watch your overall compression on the final mix, I think things could find their place and stand out more with some work with that.

Overall you have a song with much potential, congrats!

Wayne
GalanticMusic
GalanticMusic 16th May 2014 20:29 - 12 years ago
Nice beat!
radioilluminati
radioilluminati 16th May 2014 20:27 - 12 years ago
Maybe Tumbleweed is right about the kick is to hard. I will also suggest you use more kicks. It sounds good to use more kicks or snares as the same time.

Just a practical question. If I manage to get the song I'm working on on the radio would you be cool about sharing 50/50 the royalties?

I'm in contact with a guy that runs a dance/house station and he has already put one of my songs on the music rotation from Sunday midnight.
Modnex
Modnex 16th May 2014 20:22 - 12 years ago
Damn man! That piano, those vocals and the mix = Main-Stream music! Why aren't you signed? This track could be a hit man! Lots of talent here! You deserve some more plays and comments. Great work and hope to see you on the billboards one day! Keep them coming!
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 16th May 2014 20:21 - 12 years ago
This is mainstream stuff Luizor...wouldn`t be out of place on commercial radio...really good job on the vocals..Others would likely tell you the opposite, but I would actually pull the kick back just a little softer to let the vocal & instruments sit more clearly in the mix...a big well done to you...you have a good one going on here...Ed
radioilluminati
radioilluminati 16th May 2014 19:56 - 12 years ago
It sounds good! I'm already working on one of your songs. The chorus sound a bit like Timberland - The Way I are.

I think, it will be a über good mainstream hit song.

I think it is too long and should be around 3 mins. More is not always better. Maybe add another kickdrum too where you play your snare, so it is kick, kick+snare.
Luizor
Luizor replied 16th May 2014 - 12 years ago
thanks :D, ill try and shorten it buy cutting off the repeated chorus hehe and ill try that about putting a kick when i play the snare :D ill make sure to make it sound better in the album version :D once again thanks a lot :D

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