Hey this is a fun song to hear! I'm digging it very much! I can see what people were saying about the sitar... I guess I'm assuming it's a loop, otherwise you could vary the velocity between the different notes to give a more live feeling. A little verb or delay could help to like FR said. Anyway, love the trap elements very much! Was very pleasing to hear this track! Fave!
I love the variety of styles that you have going on in this track and I like how your switched things up a bit with those styles with this track. Nice work!
RPS, Hello.
This is a good track. It's got some good energy and moves along nicely. I'm not going to say anything about the intro, because it's already been covered. BUT...I will mention the outro. It's pretty abrupt, my friend. With the way this track moves so nicely along, it's kind of like it fell from a cliff when we least expected it. Like you didn't know where to go with it, so you just killed it off. Personally, I would double the length of the section between 2:23 and the end, where it drops into another section like 1:22-1:36 with the sitar layered over the top of that, and continue from there. But, that's just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth.
Other than that, a nice mix of genres and a pretty good groove you got!
Take care.
V.
Hi. I'm a sucker for so many Eastern/Asidan/Indian sounds and so is clindsay.
I agree with FreRad that we sort of have to get through the intro for it to get good and really get going. I think that intro sitar part is too programmed and thus lacking a bit of natural feel eg a bit of swing. Some reverb might help but I don' think that's the main problem.
I've used programmed sitar in loads of tracks (but not my award-winning Way Beyond Wrong track) and you do have to be careful with how you use it.
0:52 is when it really kicks in and the best part is probably the slightly left panned string-like part. And there is that trap-like orchestral sort of hit. Is that what it's called?
2:07 bass is cool. Return to main theme at 2:22 is simply and nicely done.
Nice - I really liked the coda 2:24 on and the verse :53 to 1:20. Needs a little more power up front but nice vibe. I'd love to hear it with voices.
-clindsay
Potentially the makings of a great track, the two reviews so far are pretty on the mark, but not too difficult to fix and if you do sort the intro and outro it would be great to see the track a little longer because when it is going its a fab track. Neat work.
I think the intro could use a little something but once it gets going it's a good track. Like the way it breaks down into a house bass and then that old school hardcore sound comes in. But i think the other reviewer is right, if you put a bit of reverb on the sitar or a short delay it would make the intro better.
On the whole it's a good track but sort that intro out and make it a GREAT track.
FR
Description : Spacey and Dancey and Synthwavey and Dreamy
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Description : UPDATED 01/03/2023 better volume level
hi guys this is my comeback song, never let them haters beat you.
as you know ive not been around much having gained a successful job and giving that all my attention. ive some catching up to do
this is to CreativeStudios great track The Ride, see what ive done :)). its 5 mins plus. thanks for letting me loose on it Jan.
Description : messed around on my piano, came up with a good idea, and put it in fl studio. I think it turned out pretty great. It would be awsome to get some vocals to this. if you do, feel free to change up the title or whatever. tempo is at 105 if ya need to know. review it and enjoy.
Description : Prod. by Louie Jun and Marbs Music. Diamond Star is the singer. It's on YouTube and SoundCloud. Check out my social media @diamondstarsy.
Description : My original vocal composition with an array of fantastic looperman samples.
Credits;
Production and Mix - 2nick8
Lyrics and Vocals - 2nick8
Music from Looperman Samples
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sushilbawa-pluck-punchy-90
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sushilbawa-synth-stroke-90
hnstracks-piano-chords-oh-well-90-bpm
fanto8bc-liuru-piano-synth
willaman-xxxtentacion-drama-drums #2
krolbeats-lo-fi-drum-loop
angelwtf14-grand-808-slide
mamagbeats-80s-future-synth-90-bpm
yourboyhs-lovely-pads-90-bpm
krolbeats-synth-percussion-loop
josephfunk-fresh-and-clean-electric-keys-90
djole94hns-smooth-bass-for-beats
alabafruit-simple-hip-hop-drums-90-bpm
thenerve-chill-trap-90bpm
dannyhonestly-peezo-pixies
designedimpression-bass-loop-hip-rap-bass-guitar-90
Description : This one has been sitting on my computer for a bit now but didn't really like it. My friends say it can use some vocals and I think that is what this one needs. If there is anyone who wants to put some vocals on this, send me an email at .magic41151@yahoo.com. or post below. Thanks for tuning in and have a great day!
Description : Something different from me!
Emotional song about Balkan.
I worked on it with many pauses for a long period but i think its ready now!
Love and peace!
Description : Based on excellent track by BradoSanz (nothing compares instrumental). I've added an intro, many sliced up vocals, audio effects, and some electric guitar. Includes loops: Holly's Within your soul, and 40A's Unstoppable.
namaste
Cheers,
Scott
.good job
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So I'll just say I....LIKE IT.... :-)
This is a good track. It's got some good energy and moves along nicely. I'm not going to say anything about the intro, because it's already been covered. BUT...I will mention the outro. It's pretty abrupt, my friend. With the way this track moves so nicely along, it's kind of like it fell from a cliff when we least expected it. Like you didn't know where to go with it, so you just killed it off. Personally, I would double the length of the section between 2:23 and the end, where it drops into another section like 1:22-1:36 with the sitar layered over the top of that, and continue from there. But, that's just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth.
Other than that, a nice mix of genres and a pretty good groove you got!
Take care.
V.
Congrats____Orlando
I agree with FreRad that we sort of have to get through the intro for it to get good and really get going. I think that intro sitar part is too programmed and thus lacking a bit of natural feel eg a bit of swing. Some reverb might help but I don' think that's the main problem.
I've used programmed sitar in loads of tracks (but not my award-winning Way Beyond Wrong track) and you do have to be careful with how you use it.
0:52 is when it really kicks in and the best part is probably the slightly left panned string-like part. And there is that trap-like orchestral sort of hit. Is that what it's called?
2:07 bass is cool. Return to main theme at 2:22 is simply and nicely done.
Well done but keep going with this one.
-clindsay
Potentially the makings of a great track, the two reviews so far are pretty on the mark, but not too difficult to fix and if you do sort the intro and outro it would be great to see the track a little longer because when it is going its a fab track. Neat work.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
On the whole it's a good track but sort that intro out and make it a GREAT track.
FR