Glad to see U again after a while dear colleague , well ,I listened & liked it & know U compose yourself lyriX & I've admired U because of your lyrix before too but according to I had listened to all yourtrax(but one) if U may remember(just I've changed avatar),I should say U have thrived in every respects about gaining controle to your voice in this 2months in which U've been absent here .also seems something has been added to U in deep inside cause U sing by all your hearth this track even more than your previous traX,and those are all worthy of adoration.best wishes.___Behnam.
I love this song and you did it proud. You have a really strong voice, but you need to learn how to control it and that just comes with practice.
There's a thing called tone deaf, where your voice sounds great to you, but not to everyone else. You DON'T have that, but your voice does go flat in places, so work on those places.
Take in the criticism, listen to it or don't, but never, never let it bring you down and never, never, stop what you are doing. You have a great talent.
I agree. The issue of me going flat will improve with control which takes time.
I don't have a problem with criticism as I find that even the harshest critics bring something to learn (however minuscule).I do appreciate how I can tell through text that you wanted to give me helpful advice without offending me. :)
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I really liked that,i found myself singing along with you,but your much better than me,so i just meeowwd alot lol
As long as you enjoy what your doing,then i have no complaints,as i thought is was lovely!
I love listening to your work. You have my utmost respect as an artist.
There's a thing called tone deaf, where your voice sounds great to you, but not to everyone else. You DON'T have that, but your voice does go flat in places, so work on those places.
Take in the criticism, listen to it or don't, but never, never let it bring you down and never, never, stop what you are doing. You have a great talent.
Am I plugging a book here?!?
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I agree. The issue of me going flat will improve with control which takes time.
I don't have a problem with criticism as I find that even the harshest critics bring something to learn (however minuscule).I do appreciate how I can tell through text that you wanted to give me helpful advice without offending me. :)