Listen To The Nerve Heavy Metal Song By Octonimus At Looperman.com

1st Feb 2013 19:54 - 13 years ago
Description : My latest collab from here. It is/was called, NaiN-1.. by, mariuszkip. I did not partake in any instrument or anything else on this song, only the writing/lyrics/vocals due to the great collab request. So, I ripped, "The Nerve."

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give Octonimus some feedback.

BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 18th Nov 2017 23:10 - 8 years ago
Love the guitar work on this track..yeap.slap them vocals in the middle and it's a wrap..cool track.
Octonimus
Octonimus replied 21st Nov 2017 - 8 years ago
I agree, absolutely. In fact Im going to eq and master all these songs "again" because the person I hired to do it did such a horrible job. Just havent had the time lately..

Thanks for the comment..
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 16th Nov 2017 01:58 - 8 years ago
Very good , it sounding great.
Octonimus
Octonimus replied 16th Nov 2017 - 8 years ago
Thanks jamid,

I never got these songs exactly how I wanted to hear it on load speakers, for I am certainly lacking expertise in the mix down of everything. Thanks for the comment..

Lesson 1.. Never mix your stuff on headphones. It will sound nothing like you wanted once it hits the big speakers..
Evisma
Evisma 13th Oct 2015 03:57 - 10 years ago
I see now that you didn't do the music. I guess you can't pan the guitars. Sorry, I should have paid more attention. Vocals eq and panning would help, and disregard the guitar feedback.
Octonimus
Octonimus replied 13th Oct 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks for the suggestions. But, ya, there isnt much I can do with a downloaded instrumental. I will try to put a smoother eq sound on this one though as soon as I find the correct tool. With regards...
Evisma
Evisma 13th Oct 2015 03:53 - 10 years ago
A lot of nice guitar here! I like that a lot.

The issue seems to be the vocal's mix,eq and pan. Vocals sound like there is a lot of low end in there that is distracting and muddying things up. The vocals sound more spread out than the guitars, which sounds kinda bad. Vocals themselves are good, just overwhelming the guitars/everything in a bad way.

I'd say to try to take some of the vocal's low end out, and boost the bass guitar to compensate. Spread the guitars more and keep the vocal's more centered. The two don't sound properly connected.

Now, that said, I really like the writing of the guitars and lyrics. Not so much into the message, but it sounds like you have a bit of experience writing. That's big.

I love the heavy shit, and your distortion sounds pretty chunky and good. I'm jealous.

I hope you appreciate constructive criticism. Only wanting to help.

Take care.

Evan
AmethystToTurquoise
AmethystToTurquoise 21st May 2013 19:00 - 12 years ago
motorhead years coming back to me
yes it is a good production as far as metal goes
well done Octonimus
Octonimus
Octonimus replied 13th Oct 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks
XmafaX
XmafaX 1st Feb 2013 23:08 - 13 years ago
Very good track!
Octonimus
Octonimus replied 3rd Feb 2013 - 13 years ago
Thanks.. Happened to be the right sound for my mood at the time which put it together.. Working on best eq setting, currently...with regards..

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