The Ride - RoastBeef77

Awesome track here bro yeah deffo sounds like a musical track...

when the chorus comes in, it would sound awesome with a choir in the back. would really lift the whole track to a whooooole new level..

Some of the compression on the kick and the snare are pulling the whole volume of the track down, and creating some volume inconsistencies.
The backing vox is very well thought out but could use some reduction in volume in places to give a little more ambiance.

dude (dont mean to tell you what to do) but your really deing yourself an injustice by letting people download your work when youve got such good ideas.

I mean, the end result is a little un-refined but that will come in time.
Idea's are priceless and i want to let you know there is alot of value in your work, weather u see it yet or not.

I know ive brought up alot of points above but i Really, reeally enjoyed the track, thank you for sharing :)

Spuds

This works very well. got me humming along to it.

Pop at its best. Sounds like this belongs in a muzical of some sort.