I kinda like how it starts out as a straightforward funky track, then runs off into different genres. It like the glitchy vocals are travelling through different soundscapes. It's disorienting, but fun as well.
Also, the title is amazing :D
Thanks! I'm glad you think it works. Sometimes I think I'm nuts for trying to fit these different sounds together. As for the title, in the first part of vocals I keep hearing 'You said lets eat, there's pudding for you...'
You did a great job with the chord progressions.The whole track has a euphoric sense of joy. The transitions are also on point. They keep the track moving along nicely. I'm pretty sure this will be in my head for the next hour or so.
This is a really powerful piece you've given us. The strings glide in slowly; making us feel solemn, yet serene. The low-end piano hits preempt the build up nicely. Everything is not too saccharine; there is heartache here as well. The following progression drives the point home. Life precedes death and we are now faced with the ever-after...
This is really good man! Very addictive. Loving the modulated vocals and the bass. You give a classic 8-bit soundtrack a beautifully modern update. TOP SCORE!
Wow. This track is impressive. Sounds insane the first time you listen to it, but it's complexity shines on repeated listens. I especially love your vocal performance. Like the composition it shifts and slides around (through it's pitch and through panning). It's quite easy to believe that the narrator is lost again, because everything keeps changing, even himself. Obviously that is just my interpretation. But it's cool that the track made me engage with it.
Thank you my friend! "Sounds insane the first time you listen to it, but it's complexity shines on repeated listens." This part of your comment made me think deeper on how people interact with me in my "everyday" life. As if only those who have interacted with me regularly in the past can understand how I react to things. Possibly this is part of my recent legal issue. The vocals took a bit of practice, and with the tempo of them it was difficult to give the song a good length. There was definitely a bunch of different influences to the vocal/lyrical aspect. Getting "lost again" was a primarily external issue, and is a very positive aspect of the idea. It was celebratory, in a way, as I have been charged with three crimes in the past four years, and have avoided trial or real punishment in all cases. I always appreciate hearing other people's interpretations, especially in my lyrical work... this is part of what is so valuable about the looperman community! I'm happy that you listened and enjoyed! Thank you!
Loving the imagery of the vocals and the mournful crawl of the tin guitar in the background. Can't wait to hear what it sounds like when you've finished the mix. I predict goosebumps.
This just kind of happened hahaha I was playing with my newest toy before work and thought hey that would make a good loop. Recorded, uploaded it. Then said hey that would sound cool looped with some slide lead played over it. Then I said Hey I have those cool spoken word pellas... :D I'm going to make a video too. When I get dug out from this 3 feet of snow. Mournful crawl desribes it perfectly! Just look what us stupid humans are doing to the earth and don't even care. I don't have pics yet of the guitar yet but it,s made with one of those 64 oz Danish butter cookies tins, the large tin. Love the sound! Thanks TA
Wonderfully clean production. Everything glistens as it rides across that smooth bassline. It's practically begging for a country/pop vocal track. The only thing I can think of to suggest, is that you consider maybe stripping things back at certain points. Like have a refrain with just the bassline, or lightly brushed chords on an acoustic. Just a thought. Still sounds amazing anyway.
I agree with everything you said in this post. Sorry for replying so late haha. Life has me busy. It will all change if I can get some vocals on here (eventually :P)
Great track man. Everything flows nicely and the vox are on point. The pads and the lead parts colour the track in a way that grabs the listener. Can't really think of any negatives. It's pretty damn good.
Great composition. You really captured the essence of the art sonically. You can almost see the water rippling as pieces of ice slide down into the depths.
Been so busy lately I haven't done much music. I had Martin Luther King day off and came across Dan's art composition which I usually participate in. Winter is the theme this time so I had to blow the dust of my cbg and play a little something :p I love the way those guitars can tell a tale all on their own! Thanks TA I trying to do one for a pic from the dust bowl era, not for any competition, just for fun. Pictures have a way of inspiring audio tales.
This is pretty cool. The vocals are very bubblegum pop, but the drums and backing melodies suitably darken the song. The extro is a little odd. But I don't dislike it. Mixes things up a bit. Overall I enjoyed it. Good work man.
Congratulations on winning the contest! Even without the vocals this is a treat for the ears. Really well composed and executed. Can't wait to hear what you guys come up with :)
Liking the Rock N Rolla quote in the intro. Great movie. The music production is really on point. From the horn stabs to the sweet piano line on the outro, the track holds the listeners attention. It is never dull. You're voice has a great presence within the track, it punctuates your message in all the right ways. Great stuff.
Hey man, first and foremost, that is a great movie. I really resonated to this particular scene, and I discovered Lou Reed because of this movie, so kudos to you for knowing where it came from. Secondly, thank you for listening and I appreciate your feedback and I mean that from the depths of my soul. Peace & Blessings.
Such a beautiful, minimalist approach. The music is light and delicate, like the snowflake. Really gives one a feeling of peace and goodwill. Fantastic
Hi Orlando.
I've been listening to this track every now and again and can never figure out what to write. This is such a beautiful piece, it never fails to make me cry. I played it to a couple of my friends and it blew them away. I'm not gonna write much more because I'm blubbering again!
Many times I have the same problems when I dig a certain piece of music very much and I remain speechless, but that's a very special compliment!:) Thanks alot for your kind thoughts and for sharing this with your friends!
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Also, the title is amazing :D
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Loving your sound. It's somewhere between Kyuss and Soundgarden; a good place to be :)
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This is a really powerful piece you've given us. The strings glide in slowly; making us feel solemn, yet serene. The low-end piano hits preempt the build up nicely. Everything is not too saccharine; there is heartache here as well. The following progression drives the point home. Life precedes death and we are now faced with the ever-after...
You earned yourself a couple of tears and a fave.
Thanks.
TA
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I am glad you liked it.
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I've been listening to this track every now and again and can never figure out what to write. This is such a beautiful piece, it never fails to make me cry. I played it to a couple of my friends and it blew them away. I'm not gonna write much more because I'm blubbering again!
Fantastic work man.
TA
Many times I have the same problems when I dig a certain piece of music very much and I remain speechless, but that's a very special compliment!:) Thanks alot for your kind thoughts and for sharing this with your friends!
With much appreciation______Orlando