Dreaming Suicide - FaridHumanoid

first part is great. the rest is kind of eh.

Hey - no problem. If you have a look at my comment history, I almost always give a decent analysis of a track, with exact time references and I try to make suggestions for how I think it can be improved (occasionally I don't have any suggestions). I only comment on tracks I either really like or think are good but could be better.

I love music very deeply so it's easy for me to write out some thoughts on a piece of music. And I could easily make my comments longer. I don't understand what the point is of people giving one sentence reviews/comments such as "I like it" or "This is really good". That's not helpful or interesting, though maybe it makes the person who made the track feel a little bit better.

Anyway, I thought your track was good but perhaps has too many different sections in it. Maybe you could split it in two and then extend those sections into their own tracks. I don't know really know - I'm just making suggestions based on my feelings. You may completely disagree! Good luck with whatever you decide to do.

PSYCHO :D Love It!

Some classic evil riffs here. I guess you must be in a low, dropped tuning (I always play in drop D but it's DADF#AD - my blues slide tuning) and maybe it's a 7 string guitar.

The little ambient breaks are strange but give the track a certain character.

1:43 I wasn't so keen on that tom break. Thought they should have been playing double time. Maybe get some double bass drum in there too.

2:55 I think you can make that guitar more powerful - EQ, stereo widening - things like that.

3:24 the lead part that comes in is strange. Quite ambient, maybe it's a guitar. Sounds a little like a piano but it's probably not. Also weird synth stuff in there.

Oh, I just noticed this is all loops. It's definitely a collection of ideas, doesn't really have any obvious structure.

Last section, starting 4:31 is probably my favourite. Quite dreamy with that main sad guitar part. Good soundtrack music. I'd probably rather have that last section taken out and turned into a whole piece on its own.

I also like the very final sample on 5:53.

Aw yeeeeaaaahhh !!! Whenever I hear such guitar riffs, I turn into a hysterical head nodding heavy metal fan !! haha
Woooh ... ! In-cre-di-ble track, with that lull that keeps the tension to its maximum level .
Thx a lot for this,
Cheers :D

Oh hell yes!!!! This is what Looperman has been lacking. I've been looking for the heavy stuff on here, then I saw that you are a friend of Behnam and Tonality. You are now a friend of mine. I love what you do. The changes are refreshing, though not very consistent in volume, energy and clarity. The ending it just great. Thank you for this.

Evan

Sounds good man!

I like :D you should add some dreamy sounding vocals to it, very well put together :D I really like the dark ending, bang then silence :D very nice.