Mate thanks for the review of this one, one track I still really enjoy listening to myself, never heard of the band you mentioned, but googled them, will give them a listen too later when home from work...Will head your way over next day or two to see what you have up....Again thank you Evan...Peace Mosaic....
The only thing I would say rubbed me wrong was how extreme the panning was in the middle section.
2:30 on is very nice and I hear what your going for.
There may be some timing issues with the drums and leads at the end, but I must say I dig it all. Kudos to you good sir, now please get the hair out of your eyes.
Fun Fact. Pirates wore eye-patches to preserve their night vision when going below deck on a sunny day. Just move the patch to the other eye, and the one you've had covered all day is very accustomed to the dark and will be perfect for the low light environment below deck.
Your vocals always reminds me of Drive-By Truckers.
This was a good song, I liked all parts, I wish there was more of a variety in the way the verses were sung. I pretty much had heard each verse after the first one, they don't differ much besides lyrics. Kinda got old.
That's my beef with a lot of blues though, too, so it may just be me. 20 seconds of a blues song and you've heard all the parts, minus an 8 bar guitar solo.
The guitar at 3:06 should have come in at 0:34. Everything else was not interesting, just the main riff setting up, then the guitar, the rest was just filler. Song doesn't start till the guitar kicks in.
Thanks Evan. I like your music too. I am first and foremost a guitarist but I just purchased a Fender VI bass guitar, so of course I wanted to give it some air in this composition. I'll post another "bass forward" track today called "Take The High Road". Check it out and give me some feedback. Your opinion matters.
Creepy indeed, the description mentioning "the little girl parts" doesn't help.
Mr. EYEDYE, I like the idea of where you were going, just know that stuff will be picked apart and judged, for good or bad. Examine everything you write and do before you dangle it out there.
I believe JJWeekz was very tactful and helpful and her advice should be seriously considered.
I take advice and criticism to heart, good or bad, because it all lets me see what i can do to be better, and what im doing right. I thank you for your feedback :)
Instantly sounds radio friendly, a dog-eared blueprint.
I hear what you're going for with the vocals, but I think they need a more aggressive voice.
Auto-tune. Damn.
I think your writing of the lyrics and phrasing is good, you just need someone else doing them. Again, what you wrote was very fitting and well done. The music was pretty good too.
thanks for the input, i'll take the radio friendly thing as a compliment, and the auto tune is only towards the end , like i said in my other reply it was meant for the build up in the little rap part at the end because every rap song you hear anymore is auto tuned and i want my stuff to be mainstream so i'll follow that.
on Concrete Wings demo by Killumineye
Is this you singing? If yes, please continue! Very unique.
Sorry for my inability to find much fault in your track. I really like it, and the name "Concrete Wings".
Please keep on keeping on!
Evan
on Love Alchemist - In the Lab with Mr-E by PaNeGyRiZe
on Sweetheart Runner by TinyFinger
This is the clarity and focused sound I try to achieve., but clutter everything up.
Vocals were a surprise. Very very nice. Fits very well.
I find not a single fault. Just awesome!
Best song I've heard on hear in a long time. Highest praise to you.
Evan
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on Ancient Forest by Anubis
Thank you for taking the time to listen to this piece.
I appreciate your comment =]
have a nice Day
on Sweetest Sin by Mosaic
Evan
Mate thanks for the review of this one, one track I still really enjoy listening to myself, never heard of the band you mentioned, but googled them, will give them a listen too later when home from work...Will head your way over next day or two to see what you have up....Again thank you Evan...Peace Mosaic....
on Troublemaker Reloaded by DESTERO
Favorited for sure.
Evan
DRO
on The Mayqueen by Mrspiderhands
Can't wait for the studio version!
Evan
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on Synthicator by MOONLYTE
2:30 on is very nice and I hear what your going for.
There may be some timing issues with the drums and leads at the end, but I must say I dig it all. Kudos to you good sir, now please get the hair out of your eyes.
Fun Fact. Pirates wore eye-patches to preserve their night vision when going below deck on a sunny day. Just move the patch to the other eye, and the one you've had covered all day is very accustomed to the dark and will be perfect for the low light environment below deck.
And i like my hair :)
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Evan
on Patterns In The Clouds by MWRatridge
This was a good song, I liked all parts, I wish there was more of a variety in the way the verses were sung. I pretty much had heard each verse after the first one, they don't differ much besides lyrics. Kinda got old.
That's my beef with a lot of blues though, too, so it may just be me. 20 seconds of a blues song and you've heard all the parts, minus an 8 bar guitar solo.
ty for your honesty.
mark.
on Way Beyond Wrong by StaticNomad
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on Felicity Garden by CharlieG
Bass was nice to here a bit out front.
Overall good writing, could go a few more places but the way you have it is fine.
Evan
on Your Every Day by Cestevens1783
I believe you need some Crossfades to get rid of some pops, but other than that, it's a very sentimental sound that is very pleasing to the ears.
Take care.
Evan
on Sleep by topvega
All elements sound fitting together, nice jam going on.
Always a pleasant trip.
Evan
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on Under the Fogbow by Tatiacha
Take care.
on Conscious by MOONLYTE
Mr. EYEDYE, I like the idea of where you were going, just know that stuff will be picked apart and judged, for good or bad. Examine everything you write and do before you dangle it out there.
I believe JJWeekz was very tactful and helpful and her advice should be seriously considered.
Keep at it and you WILL get better. Take care.
Evan
on Paralyzed by kriebel17
I hear what you're going for with the vocals, but I think they need a more aggressive voice.
Auto-tune. Damn.
I think your writing of the lyrics and phrasing is good, you just need someone else doing them. Again, what you wrote was very fitting and well done. The music was pretty good too.
Evan