Evisma

Evisma

Better Than You Since 82
Middle America, United States
Joined : 1st Apr 2013 - 13 years ago
Last Online : 4th Apr 2025 - 1 year ago
Evisma comments on tracks

Evisma has posted 317 comments on other peoples tracks.

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Evisma
Evisma 9th Jun 2014 02:47 - 12 years ago

on Concrete Wings demo by Killumineye
Beginning is a cross between Enya and later Gilmour era Floyd.

Is this you singing? If yes, please continue! Very unique.

Sorry for my inability to find much fault in your track. I really like it, and the name "Concrete Wings".

Please keep on keeping on!

Evan
Killumineye
Killumineye replied 6th Jul 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you Evisma much appreciated:)
Evisma
Evisma 6th Jun 2014 03:01 - 12 years ago

on Love Alchemist - In the Lab with Mr-E by PaNeGyRiZe
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Evisma
Evisma 30th May 2014 06:08 - 12 years ago

on Sweetheart Runner by TinyFinger
Some VERY nice tones here indeed!!!

This is the clarity and focused sound I try to achieve., but clutter everything up.

Vocals were a surprise. Very very nice. Fits very well.

I find not a single fault. Just awesome!

Best song I've heard on hear in a long time. Highest praise to you.

Evan
TinyFinger
TinyFinger replied 30th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Hi. I'm glad that my track likes you.
Evisma
Evisma 29th May 2014 03:47 - 12 years ago

on One Missed Call by BearAustin
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Evisma
Evisma 22nd May 2014 03:06 - 12 years ago

on Infinite Ocean by locatednowhere
The guitar tones all work very well together. Wanted this to get heavy but that's ok. Builds suspense!
Evisma
Evisma 13th May 2014 05:31 - 12 years ago

on Sunrise at the Beach by DESTERO
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Evisma
Evisma 12th May 2014 06:22 - 12 years ago

on Ancient Forest by Anubis
I rarely listen to cinematic. This was a treat. Love the percussion and the atmosphere.
Anubis
Anubis replied 13th May 2014 - 12 years ago
your words are very welcome.

Thank you for taking the time to listen to this piece.
I appreciate your comment =]

have a nice Day
Evisma
Evisma 12th May 2014 05:33 - 12 years ago

on Sweetest Sin by Mosaic
I am impressed with this one. Love the vocals. Big fan of coheed and cambria so I like the higher vocals. Well written and delivered!

Evan
Mosaic
Mosaic replied 12th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Hey Evan

Mate thanks for the review of this one, one track I still really enjoy listening to myself, never heard of the band you mentioned, but googled them, will give them a listen too later when home from work...Will head your way over next day or two to see what you have up....Again thank you Evan...Peace Mosaic....
Evisma
Evisma 5th May 2014 04:44 - 12 years ago

on Troublemaker Reloaded by DESTERO
Guitar tone is awesome and vocals are fantastic!

Favorited for sure.

Evan
DESTERO
DESTERO replied 5th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Hey , thank´s for your Comment.
DRO
Evisma
Evisma 4th May 2014 05:41 - 12 years ago

on The Mayqueen by Mrspiderhands
Sounds good!
Can't wait for the studio version!

Evan
Mrspiderhands
Mrspiderhands replied 6th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you so much!
Evisma
Evisma 3rd May 2014 06:04 - 12 years ago

on cockblocking is not a game by evilarmy83
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Evisma
Evisma 30th Apr 2014 02:07 - 12 years ago

on Synthicator by MOONLYTE
The only thing I would say rubbed me wrong was how extreme the panning was in the middle section.

2:30 on is very nice and I hear what your going for.

There may be some timing issues with the drums and leads at the end, but I must say I dig it all. Kudos to you good sir, now please get the hair out of your eyes.

Fun Fact. Pirates wore eye-patches to preserve their night vision when going below deck on a sunny day. Just move the patch to the other eye, and the one you've had covered all day is very accustomed to the dark and will be perfect for the low light environment below deck.
MOONLYTE
MOONLYTE replied 30th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
glad you liked it for the most part evisma haha

And i like my hair :)
Evisma
Evisma 28th Apr 2014 02:10 - 12 years ago

on Enchanted Land by XmafaX
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Evisma
Evisma 22nd Apr 2014 05:09 - 12 years ago

on Star Rider by zappo
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Evisma
Evisma 21st Apr 2014 02:34 - 12 years ago

on Games Without Frontiers --- (Cinematic Rock COVER) by WeaverBard
This is fantastic and deserves more exposure. A true pleasure to listen to. Thank You!

Evan
Evisma
Evisma 16th Apr 2014 02:46 - 12 years ago

on Patterns In The Clouds by MWRatridge
Your vocals always reminds me of Drive-By Truckers.

This was a good song, I liked all parts, I wish there was more of a variety in the way the verses were sung. I pretty much had heard each verse after the first one, they don't differ much besides lyrics. Kinda got old.

That's my beef with a lot of blues though, too, so it may just be me. 20 seconds of a blues song and you've heard all the parts, minus an 8 bar guitar solo.
MWRatridge
MWRatridge replied 16th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
evisma,
ty for your honesty.
mark.
Evisma
Evisma 9th Apr 2014 05:01 - 12 years ago

on Way Beyond Wrong by StaticNomad
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Evisma
Evisma 8th Apr 2014 03:56 - 12 years ago

on Dying Guitar by bigred1622
Very nice tone here. Sounds good. FFDP-esque
Evisma
Evisma 3rd Apr 2014 04:05 - 12 years ago

on Popular Song EMPTINESS Music Track Music By Nilooy by NiloyMorshed
The guitar at 3:06 should have come in at 0:34. Everything else was not interesting, just the main riff setting up, then the guitar, the rest was just filler. Song doesn't start till the guitar kicks in.
Evisma
Evisma 3rd Apr 2014 03:58 - 12 years ago

on Felicity Garden by CharlieG
Very nice to hear stuff like this here. Reminds me a bit of my stuff.

Bass was nice to here a bit out front.

Overall good writing, could go a few more places but the way you have it is fine.

Evan
CharlieG
CharlieG replied 3rd Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks Evan. I like your music too. I am first and foremost a guitarist but I just purchased a Fender VI bass guitar, so of course I wanted to give it some air in this composition. I'll post another "bass forward" track today called "Take The High Road". Check it out and give me some feedback. Your opinion matters.
Evisma
Evisma 31st Mar 2014 02:52 - 12 years ago

on Your Every Day by Cestevens1783
A very hopeful sounding track. Sounds like what Blue October has done with a few of their songs. Very delicate.

I believe you need some Crossfades to get rid of some pops, but other than that, it's a very sentimental sound that is very pleasing to the ears.

Take care.

Evan
Cestevens1783
Cestevens1783 replied 12th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks much! Glad you liked it.
Evisma
Evisma 31st Mar 2014 02:37 - 12 years ago

on Sleep by topvega
Simple yet effective. You always do great "driving backroads" music. Good for road trips.

All elements sound fitting together, nice jam going on.

Always a pleasant trip.

Evan
topvega
topvega replied 2nd Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
Thanks, I appreciate the kind words Evan. I also appreciate you taking the time to give it a listen and leaving a comment with some feedback.

tv
Evisma
Evisma 27th Mar 2014 03:59 - 12 years ago

on Under the Fogbow by Tatiacha
Yes, quiet. More volume please. Very nice playing, I also like the percussive stuff in the middle.

Take care.
Evisma
Evisma 26th Mar 2014 04:20 - 12 years ago

on Conscious by MOONLYTE
Creepy indeed, the description mentioning "the little girl parts" doesn't help.

Mr. EYEDYE, I like the idea of where you were going, just know that stuff will be picked apart and judged, for good or bad. Examine everything you write and do before you dangle it out there.

I believe JJWeekz was very tactful and helpful and her advice should be seriously considered.

Keep at it and you WILL get better. Take care.

Evan
MOONLYTE
MOONLYTE replied 26th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
I take advice and criticism to heart, good or bad, because it all lets me see what i can do to be better, and what im doing right. I thank you for your feedback :)
Evisma
Evisma 24th Mar 2014 04:43 - 12 years ago

on Paralyzed by kriebel17
Instantly sounds radio friendly, a dog-eared blueprint.

I hear what you're going for with the vocals, but I think they need a more aggressive voice.

Auto-tune. Damn.

I think your writing of the lyrics and phrasing is good, you just need someone else doing them. Again, what you wrote was very fitting and well done. The music was pretty good too.

Evan
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 24th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thanks for the input, i'll take the radio friendly thing as a compliment, and the auto tune is only towards the end , like i said in my other reply it was meant for the build up in the little rap part at the end because every rap song you hear anymore is auto tuned and i want my stuff to be mainstream so i'll follow that.
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