Evisma

Better Than You Since 82

Middle America, United States

Joined : 1st Apr 2013 - 12 years ago

Last Online : 4th Apr 2025 - 6 months ago

Evisma comments on tracks

Evisma has posted 351 comments on other peoples tracks.

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Evisma 29th Jul 2014 04:44 - 11 years ago

on Spoke Too Soon by topvega

Some pretty lush effects going on here, man.

Playing on them skinny stings quite a bit. High tinkling is pretty nice (shrill when I do it).

You need a female soul singer. That's it, you've got the rest.

Evan

topvega replied 31st Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks Evan, I do love my Guitar Effects. :) I am just always looking for a tone that stands out a bit. The Guitar effects I use on this is the same as all my other Psychedelic flavored tracks. I would be happy with A Singer, a female soul singer would be awesome. Thanks for leaving some feedback and for taking the time to give it a listen.

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Evisma 23rd Jul 2014 04:39 - 11 years ago

on The Sting by DESTERO

Oh hell yes!!

Soft bed of tones you've created. Great guitar sound and seems rather polished. Lead guitar tone is heartbreakingly forlorn and plaintive. Love it.

Vocals are great. The delay's mix knob sounds cranked. A bit distracting. Some Ts and Ss sound a bit harsh when echoed. The feedback amount sounds good, I'd just like to hear the delayed signal to be a bit more "distant" or "corroded" compared to the initial dry vocal.

Overall, fuggin loved it. Everything I've heard from you has been spectacular. You are a new favorite of mine. It all tastes great!

Evan

DESTERO replied 23rd Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Hey Evan,
Thanks for your your suggestion and turn in to comment,
i still try over the delay at this track ,we´ll see whats happen,nice review my friend and thanks for the listen,i´ll try not to disappoint you,Cheers DRO

Evisma 21st Jul 2014 06:13 - 11 years ago

on July Third by TMDrums

Great tones and building moments.

Big fan of the palm muted guitar lines. Good tick tock sound going there.

Lets loose at 4:10 and sounds great. A few odd notes but they work.

I enjoyed it!

TMDrums replied 21st Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks dude, I appreciate the feedback!

Evisma 20th Jul 2014 05:52 - 11 years ago

on Have No Regrets by topvega

I have a complaint! I'm never able to complain about anything in your tracks, and it kinda pisses me off!

Solid riffage, tasty modulation though deep, triplets are nice touches.

Every solo part makes me quite jealous. Tones are great.

See! Nothing to pick at or anything. Loved it!

topvega replied 25th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Lol...well that's a complaint I can handle. :)
I really appreciate the positive words my friend. Always nice to hear you did something right. Now if I could only learn how to sing a write vocal melodies.
Thanks for taking the time to give it a listen and for leaving some feedback.

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Evisma 12th Jul 2014 03:35 - 11 years ago

on You Speak To My Soul by Badhuman

The bass guitar is a very special treat on this.

String holding at 1:09 is a bit tiresome after about 10 seconds, then holds for another 40.

I don't mind the high end hiss, noticed but not minded. Mostly just that held note that could have been an underlying second melody.

Likey

Badhuman replied 12th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks for listening and commenting. Yeah it is a bit tiresome after about 10 seconds. Not gonna win an Emmy with it for sure. I was channeling a 1976 Univox String Machine and once you get that sound going it's hard to stop. If I felt it was worth it I'd go back in and tighten the mix up. It is what it is. Thanks for listening.

Evisma 10th Jul 2014 02:35 - 11 years ago

on Forbidden Love by DESTERO

Very nice acoustic in the beginning. Drums come in a little soft, but the guitar makes up for it.

Vocals are a rarity here, good ones even more so. Your vocals are exceptional. A joy to push play!

1:10 drums pop back out and sound nice with the toms.

Guitar solo tone is of the sweet crunchy over-driven variety. I get awful guitar tone so I am envious.

The "Whoo"s are a pleasant touch.

Strings are nice and floaty in the 3:00 area. Some awesome acoustic work in there as well!!!!

I truly enjoyed this one. Only thing was the drum's volume at the very beginning. That's it. All I can muster. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Evan

DESTERO replied 10th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Hi Evan,
good to know that you like,i fixed the drums right away.
thank you for turning in and comment,
all the best,DRO

Evisma 9th Jul 2014 06:03 - 11 years ago

on Monster by rightking

Only issues I heard were some clipping/static sounds coming from the lead guitar solo, the low volume of the main guitar, and it sounds like something is clipping in the keys at the beginning.

Really just some clipping here and there. I really like the song. Nice mixture of different feels. I wasn't expecting Rap-Rock. Works very well!

rightking replied 9th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Thank you for listening and for your comment. I am an old "Rap-rock" kind of guy,lol. But I do have some songs in other styles I will be posting. Most are in m4a.mp3 so I am having trouble posting them. But when I figure it out I look forward to more great feedback. Thanks again

Evisma 8th Jul 2014 06:18 - 11 years ago

on Fall to Me by Cestevens1783

I can say nothing in the way of critique. I'm impressed and always look forward to a new one from you. Thank you for the song, and the download. It's going on the work playlist.

Cestevens1783 replied 9th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

That's really awesome thank you! Hope it makes your work day better ha :) take care!
-Charlene

Evisma 7th Jul 2014 03:24 - 11 years ago

on Presently Peasantry by DeadStringer

I dig the intro. Very nice guitar tone and chugging going on here.

1:14 is nice, like the orchestral!

PIANO AT 1:36!!!!!! I love when piano is worked into heavier stuff!

My only complaint would be the kick drum sound. Everything else in the track sounds recorded live,... except that.

All and all, this is some killer stuff you have here.

Outro is friggin great as well!

Evan

DeadStringer replied 12th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Haha thanks very much...really wasn't sure about this track - it was essentially an experiment on how good a tone I could get out of a £50 guitar and and old Boss GT-6, so your comment has made me a happy chappy! :)

I absolutely agree with you about the kick!!! I have a tendency to almost ignore the bass and drums after a while (typical guitarist!)...definitely a habit I need to break!

Cheers for checking it out and the feedback!

(keep your eyes peeled; I've got something darker, but equally brutal brewing...just have to remember the kick!)

DS

Evisma 29th Jun 2014 04:54 - 11 years ago

on The Other Side Of Nowhere by locatednowhere

I like this a lot. I'm into the kinda dark melodic stuff. Good tones throughout. The tom fills seems a bit too programed compared to the rest of the drums. That's my only advice. Overall loved the feel and the tones again were spot on.

Evan

locatednowhere replied 29th Jun 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks, man, i'm glad you like it and i really appreciate your advice... i'll try to fix the toms. Thanks again for your the comment =]

Evisma 23rd Jun 2014 04:20 - 11 years ago

on ECHOES THE CHAMBER OF MINE EYES by FACELESSIWONDER

If I created a god for myself to believe in, he would speak like you. Very deep and cryptic, but slipping in some very modern speech, like "LOL", that throws me for a loop.

I enjoyed this track. I love to give constructive criticism but can find no faults in your track. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Evan

FACELESSIWONDER replied 3rd Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

open art the clouds, for down pours the reign of thoughts to which splashes the minds in form of quench, refresh, fullfillment .protection from such is not necessary, for truly this is a storm for the mind to nurture, so walk as far as the eyes can feel, touch beyond the hands of time and devour to the learn of how tests awaits sanity and where sanity fails to live or dare dream, confusion is always just a step away to make for certain that lost forever, shall be the wanderers of peace wanderers of time and vagrants of understanding. as the winds of change breaths into the life of hope, there streams tears of joy for each victory gained via share of human mind connect splashed by reign of love and peace..... truly touched am eye by your deep visions and in-depth review many thanx for the time taken of listen as eye am glad you have enjoyed and ...err herrmm gone easy into lax of constructive criticism SJJ(seriously just joking)......well at least it's not LOL....heh heh .....much peace friend

Evisma 18th Jun 2014 05:02 - 11 years ago

on The Vice by Minus7

This is a pleasant find!

Parts remind me of Hurt, and I'm a fan. Nice mixing of the two early guitar lines. Vocals have the vibrato much like 36 Crazyfists, also a fan.

No complaints, just very happy to have found this searching for new rock tracks to listen to on here. Friggin sweet!

Evan

Minus7 replied 4th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

IM glad folks on here are ok with the tracks ive put up. Thank you for the kind words.

Evisma 16th Jun 2014 06:05 - 11 years ago

on Maybe I Know by Cestevens1783

I always look forward to your tracks. Great voice and you never disappoint. Seems to be one of your better vocal deliveries. Yes, is could be louder, but it's fine where it's at. Pretty impressive for just loops.

Evan

Cestevens1783 replied 17th Jun 2014 - 11 years ago

Its awesome what a new laptop and mic can do ha. I am pleased as far as the vocal quality for sure, and thank you!! :)
-Charlene

Evisma 11th Jun 2014 05:28 - 11 years ago

on Possessed by DESTERO

Holy shit! I'm going to hell just for listening.

Super heavy, don't guess you invest much into "less is more". Here, more is more, and me likey!

There may be some kind of bass guitar eqing that can be done at parts to minimize some mud. Intro was a bit sludgy.

This is a pretty sweet track, and MetalEd's stuff works well.

Evan

DESTERO replied 11th Jun 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks Evan,
"less is more" is relative, it is sometimes useful and sometimes not, maybe it is to much at start up (sludgy)
i´ll check this out,thanks for review:)
have a nice day,DRO

Evisma 10th Jun 2014 02:45 - 11 years ago

on Postcards From The Son by threedaychainmovie

I really like the concept you have here. A bit of a Star Wars meets Major Tom.

Two small issues I think could make this track a bit better. The vocals are a bit pitchy, but far from bad, and the hi-hat doing steady eighth notes. I feel it should be quarter notes at some points. Using more than one hi-hat sound would also help break it up some.

I'm relatively new to drum programming, but I think this could help some. There are others on here that can give you MUCH better constructive feedback. Set your track to "Featured", comment on another's track, and your track will get much more notice.

Take care.

Evan

threedaychainmovie replied 10th Jun 2014 - 11 years ago

Hey thanks for the advise. I'm not entirely new to the process but I do get a bit lazy when it comes to drums. I'll change it up and you can have another go at it :)

As for pitchy vocals.... I'm partial to the weirdness that comes out when I'm singing. I wouldn't know what to do if I sounded more professional :)

Evisma 9th Jun 2014 03:22 - 11 years ago

on Play That Funky Music by Tacatta

I cannot critique, only show unashamed worship.

This track has made my night. It was the auto-wah.

Evisma 9th Jun 2014 03:12 - 11 years ago

on No Reason by Tacatta

Oh, man. I really like this. Sound quality is not the best, but the writing is just friggin great!

Very strong vocals! I've never seen you here before, I now must search out your backlog!

Man!!! LOVING THIS TRACK!!!!

Guitar tones are great, especially the lead line that comes in at the end.
FAVORITED!

Evan

Evisma 9th Jun 2014 02:59 - 11 years ago

on While The Night Lasts by xpekt

You got some nice dissonance in the beginning.

Pretty solid eighth note plucking in the verse parts.

3:06 is a nice change-up. Can hear a vocalist doing some great stuff from there on.

Overall a solid track and is ready for vocals. Awesome job!

Evan

xpekt replied 9th Jun 2014 - 11 years ago

Hi evisma!!!

Thanks for stopping by and give this track a try :)

It's always good to have someone who understands the theoretical side of music!!!

Stay safe...

XpekT.

Evisma 9th Jun 2014 02:47 - 11 years ago

on Concrete Wings demo by Killumineye

Beginning is a cross between Enya and later Gilmour era Floyd.

Is this you singing? If yes, please continue! Very unique.

Sorry for my inability to find much fault in your track. I really like it, and the name "Concrete Wings".

Please keep on keeping on!

Evan

Killumineye replied 6th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago

Thank you Evisma much appreciated:)

Evisma 6th Jun 2014 04:57 - 11 years ago

on Sex Faces - beat by loopfreak-rest is me by PaNeGyRiZe

Oh man, why do gotta keep crackin me up. This is just great. I have become an instant fan as well. All the elements are great, would like to hear the music a bit more in the mix, but this is great.

Evan

Evisma 6th Jun 2014 03:01 - 11 years ago

on Love Alchemist - In the Lab with Mr-E by PaNeGyRiZe

Oh hell, I must admit I love this track. Not a fan of hiphop or rap of any kind, but you entered this for the contest and I had to listen. Love it. Cracked my shit up. One Evan to another, very nice!

Evan

PaNeGyRiZe replied 6th Jun 2014 - 11 years ago

Thanks man! Yea i should change the Genre to something else, because even i think it doesnt sound like rap/hip hop or anything like that, its its own genre i guess. Much appreciate the feedback, ive never been able to get my songs heard til i seen this post for the song competition, i was like o shit! i would love to oneday make a living off something in the music/producing field, as of now i have very limited, and cheap ass stuff. a $2.50 microphone ordered on ebay, it looks like a mic a chinese guy would be screaming into from a command center when godzillas attacking lool, little black skinny bendable neck with black ball on end, surprisingly, its NOT BAD, when you do some vocal cleanup with editing, i just made that Ghetto Cowboy track i uploaded yesterday with it, but lol, ii hope to get a Better mic like i had before here soon and a new pro tools mbox, my last ones were stolen as well as a laptop while i was at work one day. Dont see or run into many Evans, and im glad i met one thats a musician, thats badass lol, keep in touch bro, ill be listening to yo work and looking for your newest as well.
Peace out,
Evan D (Mr. E)

Evisma 30th May 2014 06:08 - 11 years ago

on Sweetheart Runner by TinyFinger

Some VERY nice tones here indeed!!!

This is the clarity and focused sound I try to achieve., but clutter everything up.

Vocals were a surprise. Very very nice. Fits very well.

I find not a single fault. Just awesome!

Best song I've heard on hear in a long time. Highest praise to you.

Evan

TinyFinger replied 30th May 2014 - 11 years ago

Hi. I'm glad that my track likes you.

Evisma 29th May 2014 03:47 - 11 years ago

on One Missed Call by BearAustin

Now, here's some fuckin music! You do a much better job than I do with getting a whole song feel into your stuff. Vocals are still better than anything I've done. Kudos to your testicular fortitude. I've added you to the "Respect" List.

Evan

Evisma 29th May 2014 02:05 - 11 years ago

on Shit Sandwich by topvega

I hear Clutch in a lot of your stuff. Always solid guitar and basses with your tracks. You need a singer to help break up the repetition in places but I'm sure you know this.

Overall, another solid one from the screamin demon.

Evan

topvega replied 30th May 2014 - 11 years ago

Guilty as charged... :) I am a huge Clutch fan. Been for years now. Them and Queens of the Stone Age have been my two biggest influences. Last couple months I have gotten heavy into WolfMother/Andrew Stockdale and Rival Sons. Rival Sons especially. What a great band. Thanks for taking the time to listen and leave a comment. It is appreciated big time. I agree with the vocals. I hear lots of good vocals in my head but have been unable to execute them in a real world environment. :D

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Evisma 22nd May 2014 03:06 - 11 years ago

on Infinite Ocean by locatednowhere

The guitar tones all work very well together. Wanted this to get heavy but that's ok. Builds suspense!

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