johnnyproducing

Awesome colab you made with leo, hope you guys will do more colabs in the future since this sounds so good. I can say you improved a lot though from the point where I listened first to you. Thanks for sharing this with us ;)

The electronics sound nice in here and create a real good energy. It is indeed like a boss haha
Good work on this

Sikstyle1 this is really good work.
Everything is nicely mixed and calm with crisp sounds.
Further your singing sounds very nice like this accompanied by this beat. Hope to hear more like this
And congratulations that you came in touch with road runner records ;)

Awesome vocals you put in there Waper ;) Further it ha indeed a bit of old school feel to it but it sounds very nice and I enjoyed every bit in it. Thanks for sharing this with us and keep on going like this

Lovely synths ;) The drum sounds nice with the panned percussion around it. I would suggest some more bass though in the drop (low end bass) Further nice wobbles and growls that are used ;)
Thanks for sharing this with us and it sounds great

Nice, sounds so groovy. Like how that harp plays in the intro (if it is a harp) and the piano sounds fun ;)
Nicely done larry ;)
thanks for sharing this with us

Interesting composition you came up with, suggest you turn down the volume a bit on the last part since it went all distorted but I liked the track in general ;)

The track sounds really good, it's just so chilled out and peaceful. Excellent work SikStyle1 and hope you upload more like this chillout track.

This sounds very good especially when you start of with a new DAW and this is your first song with it. I would enjoy a stronger melody though with piano or something but this is more of the chill out that is just really slow and relaxing. Like how you panned the sounds ;)
Well done and good luck with further projects, am interested in hearing more ;)

Love the sounds you used in this, sort of raw sound that you put in the main parts with the distortion and I like how it sounds. Great job on this ;)
Thanks for sharing
greetings john

Sounds pretty good, goodluck finishing this one ;)
And will hear it when it's finished I guess ;p

Great work, long time ago I heard one of your songs but you manage to put your heart into your songs and I can hear that (all three of you though haha)
Thanks for sharing this
greetings john ;)

Hey I think this sounds great but suggest you turn up the master a bit, very soft in volume now. Further it could use some bass in the mainpart after the intro but I like what you made.

Greetings john

Wowa love this man, this sounds really sik ^^
The 808's banging trap style and with great vocals, having a nice rhythm and good vibe.

Thanks for sharing this and keep them coming like this
greetings john ;)

Hearing some awesome sounds in here, not really a fan of the voice though but I agree with you that it fits with the track. Further great job on the drums and the overall sound ;)

Greetings john

Je pense c'est trop bien ;) Merci pour le music.

Greetings john ;)

Very nice job ;) Like how the electric guitar is played and then there is the second rough electric guitar which kicks in and sounds great. First song I listen to of yours I think but I like your style so far (although this is from various artists together)

Thanks for sharing
greetings john

Nicely done, but I suggest you turn the master down a bit and the kick up to create a little more of low end hard bass. The master so it doesn't overpowers too much haha
Another way of making your kick come through more clear is editing the synth so the low end on 200 hz and below gets cut out, this will leave room for the kick more. But that's just a hint ;)

Further I like the song it's really good and you managed to fit the vocals really well ;)

Greetings john

I like it, but indeed there is something missing and I think vocals can fill in that gap, hope you find someone that is willing to give you some vocals for this track. Further very nicely done modnex ;)

Thanks for sharing
greetings john

Fantastic track, just what I needed right now ;)
Sweet guitar in here combined with the sweeping strings, piano and percussion make up for a really good track. Thanks for sharing this with us Orlando ;)

Greetings john

Behnam, It's great seeing all these comments and seeing how people are inspired by your song. Like I have said before it's very noble of you to write a song for the children that have to work. You went crazy on the guitar in this one, love it ;) But you know what I thought about this track already haha
You have my respect my friend ;)

Thanks for sharing this with all of us
greetings john ;)

Smooth transitions I like it. Bit experimental which is good ;)
Further it's surprisingly relaxing to me haha.

Thanks for sharing this and keep on making songs like this

The sounds are really good, and I really love the drums. Great job on it Larry ;) Has sort of liquid feeling to it.
Quality work, thanks for sharing ;)

I already told you once that your voice sounds really good ;) This is a really good cover you made, Thanks for sharing.

Greetings John ;)

I think it sounds very nice but becomes a bit repetitive after a while, I see there has been given some other advise already so needless to post it twice. Thanks for sharing this ;)