Radon - Inklewinkle2

nice! the chords progressions are crazy! that Massive drop interrupted the whole flow for me it sounds like that it`s a whole different track, but it`s cool Klass style :) and the waveform is weak sounds good but weak!
anyway keep up the good work! Cheers! :)

drop is so awesome...

Really great track you got here. You got a great future ahead! Only 14 and already making club bangers? Can only imagine what your music will sound like ten years from now.

Keep up the great work!

Dude! Lemme make a dirty drop for this plz! Haha. Got a great build up for a dirty drop at like 3 min in. U Did a good job on this tho. the synths r a little plain. But it all comes down to ur style. If ur happy with it then f*** every1 else. Its imposible to find a single song/artist that everyone likes.

Considering your age, You created an awesome track.
Well done. Keep it up!!!!!

I think it sounds very nice but becomes a bit repetitive after a while, I see there has been given some other advise already so needless to post it twice. Thanks for sharing this ;)

well...if you are 14 (which I dont believe) I`m sure you have a great future ahead of you...I am always reluctant to offer advice on a genre that I have little experience with so I tend to just consider wheather or not I enjoyed listening....found this one a bit too repetative (but I understand that is the nature of a lot of dance genres) although you certainly did keep it rolling with the instrument changes, arps and beat drops...not sure how accurate the wav. graphic is here on the Loop & while it looks like you have it limited down to everything at the same volume I thought the dynamics were fine (synths seem to be quite forgiving that way and I`m just listening pc my pc speakers) and the mix sounded nice and clean....I`m sure you will get a lot more useful feedback that I am able to provide....keep on...and all the best...Ed

Hi. My first thought after "This is really good" was "Is this guy really only 14?".

If so, I suspect you've either already been doing this for a few years and/or are a musician who's been playing for a while. I don't know what I would have been like if I'd had synthesizers and audio software aged 14 but I imagine not as good as this.

There's a lot of musicality and variety in this track. You remind me a little of myself in the way that you keep doing new things and introducing new elements. My tracks have more variety because of the different acoustic instruments, sounds and drumkits that are constantly being introduced. But you've managed to create a lot of variety with only a few synths.

Well done and I shall give a more specific, detailed review (plus some suggestions) another time - probably tomorrow.

A clean sawtooth, good vibes, nice arrangement. Needless to say, a good one!

hi! I enjoyed this, well done for the electro genre and even more surprising given your age. You have a good ear for volume levels and I was really impressed by the different elements you tucked into this, to avoid the repetition. Excited to hear more of your work!

This is very good :) i think the intro is allright Great job.

Brilliant work, start to finish with just 2 or 3 minor misses and maybe a bass line would help, but a really fantastic effort, well done.
Best wishes and lets have more,
Mark/Larry!

Nice take from start to finish!

Orlando

Awesome work!