johnnyproducing

Changing the chord scheme after a while is a good idea since it now gets a bit repetitive after a while

What a catchy song, definitely like it. Bit of hypnotizing melodies.
Well done ;)

May I suggest you turn up the 808's and Eq them with some more lowend in it? I think that will sound better and give it a more aggressive touch
Further nice song

There is some mixing to be done, like some things are turned up way to high and create distortion because of this and what was that at 3.11 and 0.59 with the volume turned up so high?
The concept of the song is good and it features some nice sounds so congratz with that. But it could use some variation in it after a while.
Good luck further

For now I can say you are going in the right direction, I will think of how to continue this for a bit but can't tell you just yet ;)

That was rather interesting to listen too, I always like hearing tracks that are innovative but when I read spivkurl and behnam I expected that already haha. It is not something usual and as far as it goes I like it though I wouldn't want to listen to this every day haha
But big ups to you two for creating this ;)

Surprised with this, sounds very good and your voice is beautiful. Like how you played the piano, goes very well with your vocals. The story behind it is rather sad but I hope things changed around for him/her. Thanks for sharing this with us

Great job on this, good job adding your voice in like this and the track itself, like how the electric guitar is used here, it creates a very nice ambience in the song.

Great track man, this is radio worthy in my opinion ;)
Must have taken a lot of time to create this and I like it.
Get's a fav from me

What a great display of skill, I love your vocals you are a really good singer but as far as I can hear your talent doesn't stop with your vocals you also know how to make good music itself. Never heard of you before on looperman but I will keep an eye out for songs of you next time ;)

Thanks for sharing this and hope to hear more of you in the future.

I think it was a great choice to go for the piano since this expresses the emotion so well ;) Great job on it and hope you make more like this since I would like to hear that then ;)

Nice job, like it but can get a bit repetitive after a while since the bass stays the same. Further it was enjoyable to listen to ;)

Love this track, the haunted piano tune in combination with these drums. Thanks for sharing ;)

That was freakin awesome, the main part with the reese bass totally reminds me of noisa, very cool ;)

This track sounds very nice, your vocals at first reminded me a bit of pink Floyd (I know you can easily hear the different but the feeling is similar), Further the track itself sounded really nice and I can always enjoy chill out as a genre. I can see from the comment that you went through a long process to create this and took a lot of advice in finishing this, I respect that ;)

Thanks for sharing this with us
and hope to hear more like this

Sounds interesting, don't know what you are singing but like the rock factor in this, think though that your voice could use just a bit less effects. Think this would sound better then but that's just a personal opinion ;)

Don't got much to say about it, it sounds fresh and is finished I would say, wondering who will get to doing the vocals

Pretty good TuneDef ;)
like how you did the vocal improvisation on this track ;)

The piano seems oddly familiar to me and I could swear I heard it before. However the song sounds good and I don't think I heard the other parts haha. Good job on it ;)

Was expecting something else but this is more of the techno style ;) It was an enjoyable listening experience and think we could use more of this since I don't hear this techno style a lot around here. Thanks for sharing and would love to hear more :)

Enjoyable track, pretty haunting intro and further nice structure throughout the song. Great job ;)

You do a pretty good job on your own at making tracks ;) Sounds nice how you made this. Your voice is pretty good and goes well with this track. Could see your voice in a numerous amount of styles. Thanks for sharing

Sounds good and like the main parts but feel like the song can use clearer vocals that are more like singing into it since this sounds more like a instrumental with background vocals and no main vocals into it. Nothing wrong with that though but it would be a finishing touch ;)

Gotta say those vocals are so dope just like the beat. Great job on this

Hey kyle, while ago I heard one of your tracks but you come in with one banging track ;) Love that bass you put under it and it fits perfectly into this. Love this kind of trance for not being repetitive after a while ;)