Nice Intro. Reminded me of In living colour for some reason. lovely string bends. 1:15 nice bring it back in. cool reverse sounds ( I am assuming these are the stretched sounds). Hard snares bring us to 2:55 and a cool bassline with some jangles. 3:19 has some time stretching creeping in to the song. Starting to get lost in the song mentally. Then 5:44 is a breakdown like I have never heard from you before. Hauntingly Ambient with those stretches. I almost wish it went on a few measures more before you gave us that hard guitar. It's like you took the Turkey out of the oven, and it's perfectly done and golden brown and were all admiring it, and then you go and fist it while cursing out grandma at what a lousy bridge player she is. Just a bit shocking for a moment. Ending was just right. I liked it. Overall I like the experimentation you are doing with time stretching.
U get 4 Shitting birds 3 french Le Pens 2 turtlenecks and a part of a pear I ate in a tree. or you can have 5 golden shower cock rings....completely your choice this X-mas.
I will now slip back into my slowly devolving insanity and bid you a good day.
cruinstitutionalised for your own good!
You seem not to have liked this one quite as much as my last rocking track, Roar Stone. This was made out of leftover parts from it and is in (mostly?) the same key and same tempo. I think it's a much stronger and deeper track.
I really like the very first cymbal crash of the intro, no messing about there. I thought the string bends were somewhat subtle but you never know quite what will appeal to people (or annoy them).
My Living Colour connection is seeing some of them under a different name in a New Orleans club in 2013. I spent quite a while chatting to the girlfriend/partner of bass player Doug Wimbish, whose setup consisted of at least about 20 separate floor pedals!
"1:15 nice bring it back in"
Yes, nice emphatic stop and I'm really happy with the flow of the first few mins. It's all kind of the same idea - I just keep varying the drums and bringing in new guitar parts (eg slide) and stuff.
"cool reverse sounds"
Yeah, they really do have that feel but there's no reversing - just the extreme timestretching, with, at times, its rather interesting vowelly character.
"2:55 and a cool bassline with some jangles"
Not sure what the jangles are. Maybe from guitar? That's the first of only two appearances of bass g in this.
"3:19 has some time stretching creeping in to the song"
There are bits carefully scattered all over the place. Very female vocally around the 4 min transition section leading to the outright badassery that takes over at 4:18.
5:44 breakdown is hauntingly ambient and more like chillout dance music than metal. I totally agree that the transition back to the hard rocking guitar is not as smooth as it could/should be. That ambient breakdown only exists as a way to break up the hard rocking sections though I don't know if it has anything to do with fisting a turkey. But I appreciate your creative image. Those "vocals" in the ambient breakdown also return later atop the hard rocking guitar. Nice to also hear them in a chillout context.
"Ending was just right"
Yes, lady voices meandering away right at the end. That's a stretched slide note getting a bit discordant through its chromatic movement.
I have deep funk/ambient sections of this track that I left out and am working on as a separate remix track though it's not going very well.
Thanks for my shitting birds, Front Nationale leaders, warm clothing and half eaten fruit. I'll take them all but don't need the cock rings so you can wear all of them at the same time as you carve up the Xmas turkey, otherwise naked.
I haven't got you a present this year so will instead wish you and your Lady Cru extreme happiness and eternal health. Here's hoping they let you out of your CruInstitution at least for Xmas dinner with the wife...
Very nice song, I like the opening arpeggios with your voice delay cris-crossed. Your vocals here sound remind me a bit of Kate Bush when she phrases her words in this lower register. Honestly I would like to work with the vocals on this one and create a different musical landscape to fit these elegant vocals, maybe a bit darker in synth styles, but that's the tinkerer in me. Though I do love the breakdown at 2:17, that is really nice musically. I think it, the housey sounding synths that I think take away from the beauty of the composition. But I have to say I am completely impressed with this one. My wife walked in while I was listening to this and thought I was playing Bjork, so the professionalism of this song shines through as well.
Great Job
Cru
Hi Cru, for some reason I just saw your comments. Thank you so much for taking time and putting some thought into Forgotten. It is one of my favs and it's so good to hear you and your wife liked it! Happy New Year to you!
I love your voice on this one. Smooth production. I could see this in a movie. The piano fade out is interesting to say the least, sort of how DJ's fade out a drum section so you can mix the next song, you have done this from a visual thought process. the fading piano allows the director to end a scene and bring in a new visual. Bravo.
Cru
Thank you very much. That's exactly what I had in mind. The staccato piano is meant to fade out on the characters growing sense of frustration as they fall into depression. It's very downbeat, but that's kinda what I do. Glad you enjoyed.
I liked the Chord progressions using the arp's in the beginning. Not a huge fan of the "Big" house build up sound, but overall it's a decent melody.
cru
This is seriously nice. Easy to get lost into listening too. It's eclectic and changing. Love that you chose silence at 1:23. Percussion syncopation is nice at the end as well. well done song and good interpretation of the diverse loops.
Steve. (And I see you snuck in your piano style at the end as well)..
This is an awesome tune. I love the brightness and the detuning is excellent. The percussion is also perfectly placed. Fav'd fer sure. Keep it up. You know I look at music in colours as well. Sort of a very mild synesthesia.
Any how carry on my good man.
Cru
Your words mean much to me, since I know that you know your way around a synth (or a studio). I'm guessing it's partly the modular brassy tone which gives the impression of brightness and detuning. I would agree. The low note priority based portamento added a good subtle vibrato sort of effect... while the FM (Both F's) and AM added brightness and interest. I can't lay claim to playing all percussion parts myself (some were carefully sequenced with MIDI), but the ride cymbals and tom/kick rolls were spontaneous non midi stuff. I get what you mean about the colors, I think I experience that condition at times. Part of why I like to use certain colors on my DIY gear. Thank you for checking out the track, and leaving your kind words! Have a good day!
Hey , nice work, sorry about the emotional pain you might be feeling at this time, I know relationships can be hard sometimes. As a producer and artist as I listen too this, I think that we could do much more to build the emotional cascade that needs to be expressed. For instance, If I had your acca-pella I would just use the piano and maybe a pad at first and build it until later in the song then using percussion and drums towards the end in an explosion of emotion, and then end it by bringing it all back down to just a piano and your voice. In that beginning section I would also add some interesting stereo delay to show the wide scape of the emotions being presented. But that's just me hearing something sweet and wanting to take it too the Nth degree.
Cru
So What I like about this.
Your death metal screams are really good..professional sounding.
What I don't like.
Your rap Vox sound is a bit under polished (just a hint of whine in the vox.
You remind me a bit of this band https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8b88US-6ts
I chose this song from their catalog as I think if you started to overlap rap lines as an overdub over your other rap lines you would create something more interesting. And we have to make the "beat" , song you are rapping over to be a bit less cliche. You have raw talent but the music you are making is aiming for the generic. I think IMHOP. that for you to break through the fog of other rappers you need to come up with something more distinct. But please don't take this as a negative. I would only critique like this for someone I truly think has a lot of talent and ability and drive to be beyond the mediocre.Do you have any raw pella stems of your voice. I think I would like to work with them to show your what I mean.
Steve
Mister Cruman-chu! How are things going, my friend? Well, I hope.
I had to look up Phrygian Scale. What with me just being the Jackson Pollak of sounds. Isplash a bunch on the canvas, an somehow it all comes out right, as if by chance. Now that I don't have a family surrounding me at all times, I'm starting to find the time to learn all the "good stuff".
It's a damn shame about Mr. Bowie. But this last album and the events surrounding it just further boosted my respect for him as an artist. Instead of going out crying in a media circus sideshow, he turned his own death into his final work of art. And that is fucking class right there.
It's never too late to learn Music Theory. Instinctively you already have the general idea you just need to know why it works.
Arpeggios are when you play the elements of a chord in a measure.
the chord C consists of C E& G So in a 4/4 measure you play the notes C E G &E you have created a simple quarter note arpeggio. And you can play a nice pad sound consisting of the notes C E & G played all at the same time and they will fit nicely with your arp's. You can change up your arps by instead of playing E play an F. this is called a suspended 4 chord. or you could play the D note instead of E and you have a Suspended 2 chord. Suspended notes need a resolution in the song so you do not usually end a phrase on a suspended chord or note. A great example of suspended chords is Eddie Van Halen playing Keys on there song Dreams. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zsXCs41DkWs
30 secs in you hear the suspended chords and the feeling of drama they create.
Another thing you can do is to play the arpeggios straight C E G E and then for the pads play them suspended
Take four measures
Guitar part
CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE
String Pad part
CEG (hold for whole measure) then CDG then CFG then CEG again
Or if you take eight measures of:
CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE
and the pads you go.
CEG CDG CFG CEG ACEG ACDG ACFG ACEG which is now the Basis of a I VI progression of chords with the ACEG creating a minor 7th chord. (If you have a Piano it's easier to play and see what I mean) The exercise I would give to you is to constrain you to those chords but experiment with the bass root note and see what interesting combinations you can come up with. I highly suggest you pick up the book the Guitar Grimoire as it's an awesome guide to chords and hand positioning of the chords for guitarists. Every now and then I refer to my Keyboard version for resolution in conflicting sounds that I make in my music.
I hope that helps you a bit.
Also I read your reply to Static.
"My DAW sucks."
Never blame the DAW, because the talent will always shine through. An exercise I like to do sometimes is limit myself to just one keyboard and one chord and I have to do something creative with it that sounds interesting. Many song Ideas come out of inspirational exercises like this one. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162165#comments
Would be an example of that. Just a long Jam in the key of F minor using only a Microkorg and the open source DAW Ardour.
Take Care
Cru
Wow, it definitely does. You speak much truth, truth I will keep with me from now on :) Thanks for the advice and wisdom! Btw, when I say my DAW sucks - it really does. For instance, I'm trying to work with some stems someone sent me (there's only 5 stems right now) and I can only play them as-is. If I add ANY effects WHATSOEVER, it doesn't play because "Pro Tools cant get audio files fast enough." I already have the system consuming as little as it can and it STILL can't handle it. It really is frustrating. I can't WAIT for a new rig lol.
After listening to your mix and to the original single I really liked what you did with this one. Not a huge fan of all the auto tune the kid used in the original vox mix because it sounds like this kid can sing, but you made a nice dance remix to it, almost giving it a west african feel to the beat. Good work, nice guitar at the end.
Cru
Hola Brado, my remarks about pop should not be taken in a negative light, but just the opposite. You do POP very very well. Why is this POP. Because you use a chord progression that's very standard to pop songs. In your case you used a very Standard I VI V IV Progression F#minor, D#minor, C#, B and back again. Using the arpeggios on the Guitar that you made ,you ended up suspending the chords as arps that cycled through the chord structure. Similar songs" Dust in the Wind"(Kansas), Send me an Angel( Scorpions). "Time of your Life (Green Day). POP is a sound which the majority of passive music listeners enjoy and can relate to when they hear the familiar patterns even though they may be made in a myriad of different ways. It's why when we hear something that's completely new in music it's off putting at first because it doesn't fit our predicted expectations. This song fits that predicted mold and is done extremely well. If you developed it with your talented voice it would be a pop hit (with the right marketing and distribution team).
So to answer your question it's the structure of the song and not exactly the play-style that makes this POP.
Carry on!
Cru
There was no negativity :) I was honestly intrigued at your proposition because I'm just not very knowledgeable on genres. They all seem so blurred to me sometimes. Reading your post makes me want to lash myself 40 times for not paying attention in piano lessons when I was in 4th grade; the knowledge of music and chords and reading sheet music would have come in handy. Now I'm stuck just playing by ear.
What is the definition of arpreggios? I didn't know that this word could apply to live instruments as well. The more you know, aye? And I just noticed that I have a downward progression on the last three chords which was neat for random reasons. And suspended chords? I'd like more detail on this part of your follow-up review as it is very intriguing to me.
Thanks for the generous follow-up, I'd love to know more :)
After remixing it I should most likely listen to it (lol). BPM is a bit faster. Love the bass-line with it. If MAV studio is doing a David Sylvian like vocal I am all in on that, I love Japan and Rain Tree Crow.I love the essence of this song.
Peace out.
Cru
So glad you took the time and participated in the contest first and foremost! This track was fun to do and seeing others enjoy, and even remix this, is always uplifting. The vocals will be a great addition, for whoever that does it.
Penga, I am really liking this remix and your creativity. Your Command of synths as percussive instruments is really really good. My only negative is the fact you need to bring on the true percussion elements to give us that percussive orgasm we need musically. But... and a really exclamative but I am impressed so far my friend.
Cru
Thanks Cru!! This is some awesome feedback man :) I appreciate it.
But I do indeed have percussive elements within this track! Before the drops there's a little percussive solo that carries on throughout the first half of the drop. Granted, more percussion probably should have been used, but oh well haha
I really do appreciate you taking the time to give me feedback :)
WoW, it's just been one after the other this evening that has been great. The first minute intro is outstanding . the mix is incredible. great work. Fav'd
and loved for the emotion in this one.
Cru
To be honest one of the most professional and complete mix on looperman that I have ever heard in the Trance category. Nothing but applause on this end.
Cru
Holy C# major which is overall..a nice pop tune. (that we have heard before)...many times and many, many, many times. But it never gets old using the chord changes you have used. I think if you slow the tempo down just a bit you will get the emotional twinge you would expect from this song, but a little bit better. And then you can add your lyrics (inspirational would fit nicely) and you could conquer the POP world, if that's your intention.
Cru
haha cru :P What classifies this as pop? I'm just curious, not looking for an argument or anything :3 I mean, it's just acoustic and piano and hopefully some orchestral strings...Is it the play-style that makes it pop?
Zep like in it's intro and then the synth bass gives us something else. Drums are a banging. Yeah I hear the resonator but this has a purpose. Like an Anger approach of "LISTEN TO ME I"VE GOT SOMETHING TO SAY" but then you gently cradle us into the tune. It's a pure Dichotomy in it's execution. Fun to listen too.. Upset the wife so I know were on to something here. So what is the message here..4:50 you get all apocalyptic with your of sounds. And I love the Ending as well And you reign in your draft of destruction for some wildly achromatic sounds of synths and cool guitars. I feel this is a more or less contrived tune as it is a balls out emotional release. Would I be correct in that synopsis. It's f**cking Brilliant. And I love it.And I love the Ending as well with the ambient sounds is glorious in it's execution you should be proud.
Cru.
It has been quite a while since your Crumagnificence has graced the comments section of one of my tracks. So Crudos to you for stopping by.
"the synth bass gives us something else"
Yes, exactly. I'm not totally sure it fits but it is interesting and unusual and that's exactly what I pretty much demand from myself in every track I make. How many stoner rock bands would incorporate dance/dancey synth elements in one of their tracks? I can only think of one and they're a brilliant, obscure Dutch band called Astrosoniq. Check this shit out:
Anyway, that synth bass arp is used quite a bit in this track, most prominently at 2:14 plus some distortion etc. 6:14-6:47 it also adds something a bit different as it backs up the lead distorted resonator playing.
Drums are indeed a bangin' most of the time though 5:10 for a while they seem more laidback and funky. I thought that might be your fave section, with the triplet, clean guitar on top.
Always nice to upset your wife with some banging riffage. But you can calm her down with one of my chillout tracks if she can't take the intensity of these riffs of glory.
"4:50 you get all apocalyptic with your of sounds."
Yes, a little apocalyptic, with that huge sound. What you're hearing there is slide guitar parts 800% slower, which often adds a vocal-like quality to the sound. A bit incongruous having deep ambient in this banging track but I like to think it gives some unusual character.
No, the ambient end doesn't feature any synth - that's all guitar, even that 7:47 female sort of voice. That's just timestretched slide. Weird end result, eh? I'm half considering extending that ambient ending by 30 or so seconds as it seems too short and I could happily listen to it for much longer. It will be Promenade's favourite section and favourite sound in the track.
In terms of instrument playing, this wasn't really "balls out emotional release" but much more of a contrived sampling and processing job. Most of the guitar parts are clean (undistorted) resonator parts played whilst making other tracks, so not really rocking out at all. I just recycled these leftover parts and totally changed their vibe by adding dirty, yet smooth distortion.
See 6:15 as that killer distorted lead is just the gentle triplet playing from the previous section plus distortion, turning it into something wildly different.
"So what is the message here"
As always - nothing at all! It's just me having fun and trying to layer things up in interesting ways that I hope no one else has done before.
See you around, Mr Cru Dawg, and thanks for the thoughts.
I love Lisa Stansfield, I feel that you took her style (80's retro 70's and mixed it like this song belonged in the seventies. Cool idea Richie, Cool Listen.
Cru
Thank you ever so much for your kind comments. It's particularly rewarding to hear comments on the way the track was arranged and mixed. Really appreciate that very much.
What I liked about this was the usage of synths as percussion like instruments, the reverse synth reminded me of Peter Gabriel's usage in his song "Shock The Monkey". Very Creative and good work.
Cru
Ahh Ed and I are Canadian and I thought you were referring to that dog & pony Show which we just had october 28th up here in the Great White North. So I was being sarcastic related to that election...silly me.
Cru
Man , I have been away for a long time . Didn't see this reply. I'll be glad when the whole election thing is done. Have a belated Happy holidays. Peace.. PDMuzak
I enjoyed listening to this as a chill tune with some hip hop intentions. I could easily hear a guitar solo (Tumbleweed style) or a saxophone over the top of this one. good work.
Cru
on Chasm by StaticNomad
U get 4 Shitting birds 3 french Le Pens 2 turtlenecks and a part of a pear I ate in a tree. or you can have 5 golden shower cock rings....completely your choice this X-mas.
I will now slip back into my slowly devolving insanity and bid you a good day.
cruinstitutionalised for your own good!
You seem not to have liked this one quite as much as my last rocking track, Roar Stone. This was made out of leftover parts from it and is in (mostly?) the same key and same tempo. I think it's a much stronger and deeper track.
I really like the very first cymbal crash of the intro, no messing about there. I thought the string bends were somewhat subtle but you never know quite what will appeal to people (or annoy them).
My Living Colour connection is seeing some of them under a different name in a New Orleans club in 2013. I spent quite a while chatting to the girlfriend/partner of bass player Doug Wimbish, whose setup consisted of at least about 20 separate floor pedals!
"1:15 nice bring it back in"
Yes, nice emphatic stop and I'm really happy with the flow of the first few mins. It's all kind of the same idea - I just keep varying the drums and bringing in new guitar parts (eg slide) and stuff.
"cool reverse sounds"
Yeah, they really do have that feel but there's no reversing - just the extreme timestretching, with, at times, its rather interesting vowelly character.
"2:55 and a cool bassline with some jangles"
Not sure what the jangles are. Maybe from guitar? That's the first of only two appearances of bass g in this.
"3:19 has some time stretching creeping in to the song"
There are bits carefully scattered all over the place. Very female vocally around the 4 min transition section leading to the outright badassery that takes over at 4:18.
5:44 breakdown is hauntingly ambient and more like chillout dance music than metal. I totally agree that the transition back to the hard rocking guitar is not as smooth as it could/should be. That ambient breakdown only exists as a way to break up the hard rocking sections though I don't know if it has anything to do with fisting a turkey. But I appreciate your creative image. Those "vocals" in the ambient breakdown also return later atop the hard rocking guitar. Nice to also hear them in a chillout context.
"Ending was just right"
Yes, lady voices meandering away right at the end. That's a stretched slide note getting a bit discordant through its chromatic movement.
I have deep funk/ambient sections of this track that I left out and am working on as a separate remix track though it's not going very well.
Thanks for my shitting birds, Front Nationale leaders, warm clothing and half eaten fruit. I'll take them all but don't need the cock rings so you can wear all of them at the same time as you carve up the Xmas turkey, otherwise naked.
I haven't got you a present this year so will instead wish you and your Lady Cru extreme happiness and eternal health. Here's hoping they let you out of your CruInstitution at least for Xmas dinner with the wife...
on Forgotten by WARRIORDANIKA
Great Job
Cru
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Cru
Cheers
TA
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on Cookies For Dinner by SeriouslyJoking
Steve. (And I see you snuck in your piano style at the end as well)..
Take care and enjoy the summer.
Cheers!
on Roots and Branches by Spivkurl
Any how carry on my good man.
Cru
on The 5th Element by malikmanley
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on Its My Time by MOONLYTE
Your death metal screams are really good..professional sounding.
What I don't like.
Your rap Vox sound is a bit under polished (just a hint of whine in the vox.
You remind me a bit of this band
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8b88US-6ts
I chose this song from their catalog as I think if you started to overlap rap lines as an overdub over your other rap lines you would create something more interesting. And we have to make the "beat" , song you are rapping over to be a bit less cliche. You have raw talent but the music you are making is aiming for the generic. I think IMHOP. that for you to break through the fog of other rappers you need to come up with something more distinct. But please don't take this as a negative. I would only critique like this for someone I truly think has a lot of talent and ability and drive to be beyond the mediocre.Do you have any raw pella stems of your voice. I think I would like to work with them to show your what I mean.
Steve
on Yours Within -ft NanuNanu by ValveDriver
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kszLwBaC4Sw
Crudoremifasolatido
I had to look up Phrygian Scale. What with me just being the Jackson Pollak of sounds. Isplash a bunch on the canvas, an somehow it all comes out right, as if by chance. Now that I don't have a family surrounding me at all times, I'm starting to find the time to learn all the "good stuff".
It's a damn shame about Mr. Bowie. But this last album and the events surrounding it just further boosted my respect for him as an artist. Instead of going out crying in a media circus sideshow, he turned his own death into his final work of art. And that is fucking class right there.
Take care, mi amigo.
Slöé.
on Just Let It Go - Instrumental - Vocal Ready by BradoSanz
It's never too late to learn Music Theory. Instinctively you already have the general idea you just need to know why it works.
Arpeggios are when you play the elements of a chord in a measure.
the chord C consists of C E& G So in a 4/4 measure you play the notes C E G &E you have created a simple quarter note arpeggio. And you can play a nice pad sound consisting of the notes C E & G played all at the same time and they will fit nicely with your arp's. You can change up your arps by instead of playing E play an F. this is called a suspended 4 chord. or you could play the D note instead of E and you have a Suspended 2 chord. Suspended notes need a resolution in the song so you do not usually end a phrase on a suspended chord or note. A great example of suspended chords is Eddie Van Halen playing Keys on there song Dreams.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zsXCs41DkWs
30 secs in you hear the suspended chords and the feeling of drama they create.
Another thing you can do is to play the arpeggios straight C E G E and then for the pads play them suspended
Take four measures
Guitar part
CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE
String Pad part
CEG (hold for whole measure) then CDG then CFG then CEG again
Or if you take eight measures of:
CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE CEGE
and the pads you go.
CEG CDG CFG CEG ACEG ACDG ACFG ACEG which is now the Basis of a I VI progression of chords with the ACEG creating a minor 7th chord. (If you have a Piano it's easier to play and see what I mean) The exercise I would give to you is to constrain you to those chords but experiment with the bass root note and see what interesting combinations you can come up with. I highly suggest you pick up the book the Guitar Grimoire as it's an awesome guide to chords and hand positioning of the chords for guitarists. Every now and then I refer to my Keyboard version for resolution in conflicting sounds that I make in my music.
I hope that helps you a bit.
Also I read your reply to Static.
"My DAW sucks."
Never blame the DAW, because the talent will always shine through. An exercise I like to do sometimes is limit myself to just one keyboard and one chord and I have to do something creative with it that sounds interesting. Many song Ideas come out of inspirational exercises like this one.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/162165#comments
Would be an example of that. Just a long Jam in the key of F minor using only a Microkorg and the open source DAW Ardour.
Take Care
Cru
Brado
on Un Dernier Sourire feat Alexy Large by slnicholas4710
Cru
on Just Let It Go - Instrumental - Vocal Ready by BradoSanz
So to answer your question it's the structure of the song and not exactly the play-style that makes this POP.
Carry on!
Cru
There was no negativity :) I was honestly intrigued at your proposition because I'm just not very knowledgeable on genres. They all seem so blurred to me sometimes. Reading your post makes me want to lash myself 40 times for not paying attention in piano lessons when I was in 4th grade; the knowledge of music and chords and reading sheet music would have come in handy. Now I'm stuck just playing by ear.
What is the definition of arpreggios? I didn't know that this word could apply to live instruments as well. The more you know, aye? And I just noticed that I have a downward progression on the last three chords which was neat for random reasons. And suspended chords? I'd like more detail on this part of your follow-up review as it is very intriguing to me.
Thanks for the generous follow-up, I'd love to know more :)
Brado
on The Darkness ft SkwishFish by GoldenOokami
Peace out.
Cru
~GO
on Glaciers Ft Jodie Cannon -Penga Tropfuture Remix- by Penga
Cru
But I do indeed have percussive elements within this track! Before the drops there's a little percussive solo that carries on throughout the first half of the drop. Granted, more percussion probably should have been used, but oh well haha
I really do appreciate you taking the time to give me feedback :)
on The Hope by Enzotic
and loved for the emotion in this one.
Cru
on Shine Your Light by novaspace
Cru
on Just Let It Go - Instrumental - Vocal Ready by BradoSanz
Cru
on Roar Stone by StaticNomad
Cru.
It has been quite a while since your Crumagnificence has graced the comments section of one of my tracks. So Crudos to you for stopping by.
"the synth bass gives us something else"
Yes, exactly. I'm not totally sure it fits but it is interesting and unusual and that's exactly what I pretty much demand from myself in every track I make. How many stoner rock bands would incorporate dance/dancey synth elements in one of their tracks? I can only think of one and they're a brilliant, obscure Dutch band called Astrosoniq. Check this shit out:
Astrosoniq - Quadrant(2009)[Full Album]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BlMDF4zasH4
Anyway, that synth bass arp is used quite a bit in this track, most prominently at 2:14 plus some distortion etc. 6:14-6:47 it also adds something a bit different as it backs up the lead distorted resonator playing.
Drums are indeed a bangin' most of the time though 5:10 for a while they seem more laidback and funky. I thought that might be your fave section, with the triplet, clean guitar on top.
Always nice to upset your wife with some banging riffage. But you can calm her down with one of my chillout tracks if she can't take the intensity of these riffs of glory.
"4:50 you get all apocalyptic with your of sounds."
Yes, a little apocalyptic, with that huge sound. What you're hearing there is slide guitar parts 800% slower, which often adds a vocal-like quality to the sound. A bit incongruous having deep ambient in this banging track but I like to think it gives some unusual character.
No, the ambient end doesn't feature any synth - that's all guitar, even that 7:47 female sort of voice. That's just timestretched slide. Weird end result, eh? I'm half considering extending that ambient ending by 30 or so seconds as it seems too short and I could happily listen to it for much longer. It will be Promenade's favourite section and favourite sound in the track.
In terms of instrument playing, this wasn't really "balls out emotional release" but much more of a contrived sampling and processing job. Most of the guitar parts are clean (undistorted) resonator parts played whilst making other tracks, so not really rocking out at all. I just recycled these leftover parts and totally changed their vibe by adding dirty, yet smooth distortion.
See 6:15 as that killer distorted lead is just the gentle triplet playing from the previous section plus distortion, turning it into something wildly different.
"So what is the message here"
As always - nothing at all! It's just me having fun and trying to layer things up in interesting ways that I hope no one else has done before.
See you around, Mr Cru Dawg, and thanks for the thoughts.
on All Woman featuring Lisa Worth by RichieWinn
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Thank you ever so much for your kind comments. It's particularly rewarding to hear comments on the way the track was arranged and mixed. Really appreciate that very much.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Best
Richie
on Benghazi by Penga
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Stay tuned. Another track should be coming to Looperman soon ^.^
on Election Sigh Call FT Tumbleweed by PDMuzak
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on Blue Sky Instrumental by NitramBeatS
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on Election Sigh Call FT Tumbleweed by PDMuzak