nice track, just go on!

nicee

Congratulatoions for your work . Is a beutiful beat. very very good

Ahuenno

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Wow!!

nice and agressive track

love this

so good my friend

Hard ass beat

itss so nice

awesome

I like the punk rap influence in this track.

Gj nice

very aggressive..love it

Awesome track classic!

Awesome track classic!

one of the best out here!

wow nice

I agree with comment below. The chorus needs a bit of clarity to one of the two vocal parts. clear out some space in the mix for the vox and I think it improves the song x2.

Alright.. I don't judge people's talent, that's not on me.. certain styles and certain things appeal to certain groups and just because it's not me doesn't mean it's not heat. Now, on to the technical and delivery side. Your track has too much sheen.. your voice is getting lost in the amount of treble you have especially for the mood and voice your using.. your beats should not be so crispy and clear if you're going to be running the angry voice. It needs to match the grittiness. You definitely need a little extra work seating your vocals into the mix.. they feel like you're sitting in the bottom of a well shouting angrily while the beat is played to us who are on top of the well. Try layering out 3 vox runs, slightly panning and creating a stereo image, then bus the 3 to an aux and run a vox chain to harmonize and blend the 3 to create a larger more encompassing feel. As far as arrangement goes, your intro felt too long and empty. I had to double check and make sure I was listening to an actual song and not just a beat. Perhaps maybe some adlibs or even some speaking through the 30 seconds it took to get to you rapping. I lost interest after the initial intro and still had to wait to hear you. That intro is what's gonna grab folks.. make me want to keep listening to hear what happens. Overall though very decent quality, and there is potential here.. just sounds like some late nights sitting lonely in front of the boards is what you need lol.

Grunge rap I like it's different.

Nice one

GOOD FLOWS

Nice!!!

great lyrics

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Smooth like purble cush

Smooth like purble cush

did you make the beat?

Dig The Overall Track Good Job.

Dope record. I love the real coming through.
I bet you could kill an alternative rock rap type beat.
Excellent job.
T2

I like your style, bro. Keep it up!

ok beat

im gay

Nice job.

I like the beat a lot!

nice job!

thanks for sharing

Okay I just listened to the song I'm really into hoororcore music contact me at evanbaker2015@gmail.com

Idk yet

Niceeeeee

i like the intro but personally i think the drumline needs work

This is very unique..Luv that Beat...hip hop and then you throw that rock scream yell what eva you call it type stuff in lol...but I like and I like different..work on your flow a bit more and your golden...just keep doing you stay true to yourself, a lot of people don't do that....Good job Bro!!

Jody

This is badass!

I like this, good vibe, a little more could be done but nice overall, keep it up!

This is a kind of rap music i realy can enjoy.
Sounds and samples are well choosen.
Vocals sounds freaky good and powerfull.

Well done

stay tuned
joe

boom, love to do a remix, you're inspirational and we've got stuff in common.. Killer drums mate.

Visher

Nice work!

Nice job with this track.

tnx for track

oh its very nice i like it

Very nice ! :D

i like your voice. its different than any other rappers

Hats were Fantastic...

I realy like the parts where the female voices are in. They sound so cool "world music" like and with all the other sounds around it is a very special kind of rap music. Don't get me wrong, i like the compleete track, but this special parts have something that sounds realy fresh to me. Hard core etnic industrial rap music!

Good work

stay tuned
joe

good track the beat sounds perfect for your vocals just gotta work on your delivery a little bit but your flow is pretty dope man! overall good s***

Nice delivery. Not a lot of people have that.

How can people listen to this the voice hurts my ears like a truck, what the hell.

Love your style.. !!

So What I like about this.
Your death metal screams are really good..professional sounding.
What I don't like.
Your rap Vox sound is a bit under polished (just a hint of whine in the vox.
You remind me a bit of this band
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8b88US-6ts
I chose this song from their catalog as I think if you started to overlap rap lines as an overdub over your other rap lines you would create something more interesting. And we have to make the "beat" , song you are rapping over to be a bit less cliche. You have raw talent but the music you are making is aiming for the generic. I think IMHOP. that for you to break through the fog of other rappers you need to come up with something more distinct. But please don't take this as a negative. I would only critique like this for someone I truly think has a lot of talent and ability and drive to be beyond the mediocre.Do you have any raw pella stems of your voice. I think I would like to work with them to show your what I mean.
Steve

good boy

Dam love the mix hella trill the beat is too nice

Nice man, keep it up!

NICE SONG

aaaaaay!!!! this is ill-the beat man geesh

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Heyyy I really like this. I like the emotion in this track, the controlled anger. Monotone rapping always kills it for me but this is anything but. I especially like the soft choir with the hard vocals. There also some really cool effects and transition effects.
The mix could use a little improvement on the mid to high end. Flow is solid. But this track now put you in my radar especially with that unique style of yours. I gotta keep a look out forr stuff you put out there. You style reminds me of Hollywood Undead if you've heard them.

Excellent work here.

Epic music dude keep doing this :3.

nice vibe, love it!

great :)

Oh heck yeah E! That is what I like, I would have gone the same road haha, Very nice job with this song. Really cool vocally what you did and how you did it, Sounds like a cool match, Ive been playing it over and over. Like your lil break down groove ha, that was sweet work. Enjoying how you used my loops too, and how you added to it. As it is I approve, keep up the lively music. Gonna go far kid. Thanks for sharing with us, Peace.

Sorry, screams i mean, not cryings. :)

Very Good Job!! Unbelievable Voice! The cryings sounds phantastic! But one thing, is that the right genre? ^^ Perhaps "Underground" or "Hardrap" but thats not important, 10 of 10 points!

Greetz

Excellent EYEDYE,the lyrics are great,i take it you dont watch Xfactor then?hah.Backing vocal towards the end adds to tension.

very cool backing music EYEDYE...love that bass ...lots of big power in those drums and the piano-string bits sound good...I have never been into rap but you do it well and the accompaniment is really top notch..creative stuff....Ed

Nice, Well made bro.!!

Fantastic...
great rapping , great fellows, great beat
hats off...

This nice it's different,check me out when you get some time let me know what you think

Nice work dude, mix sounds a little hot, but then again mine are usually too muddy &/or not bright enough.. granted I listened to it on a phone speaker, in a bathroom

There is definitely elements of this that I like, vocals are pretty cool and good use of loops etc. Nice!

Rap is not my favorite genre but the dark tone to it with the piano and strings loops gives me a good moment.In fact, very good moment!

this is a great thing for a songwriter to know how to produce/compose music.

This make you very "polyvalent"!

The effect on voice is great too I found its sounds like the devil :P

The only thing I do dislike is at 0:48 min I found there are missing the same fx for the voice as for 0:45 min

I can't believe I will fav my first rap track :P

Great work from a great artist is always welcome into my favorite playlist.

Peace and Handshakes from Byleth or ant4505(if you remember me) !

Somehow I like it!!! :-)

Your specch is very divisive...for me it's o.k. cause there are plenty of good tricks with it...those 'nearly metal' then those 'chorus' parts are both very interesting ones...music is absolute brilliant, you made very good garnish for those super loops...
Overall, this track is I think that the good example for the 'love or hate' system...:-)
I love it, handshake, Danke

This is really interesting! I love the instrumentation you have used, along with your vocals. Your use of the loops are consistent throughout the whole track, and your rap flow is pretty decent. If you just tighten up the timing with each syllable, you'll be smooth. With your different tones and vocal tenseness (I guess that's the term), you add a personality to your words, as opposed to using a single, monotonous sound. The yells with the special effect with it, was genius. Sounds like anger filled with an alien feature, y'know? I really liked the creativity and use of all of your elements. Cheers! Thanks for sharing! Faved!

~GO