Tags : | Rap | 4.68 MB | Adult Content

Description : A brand new Rap song that'll be put on my second album "Facing The Liars." Special Thanks to Designedimpression for his piano and violin loops.

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  1. zacos17
    zacos17 on Sun 30th Jun 2019 - 2 weeks ago

    wow nice

  2. tearoy
    tearoy on Mon 13th May 2019 - 2 months ago

    I agree with comment below. The chorus needs a bit of clarity to one of the two vocal parts. clear out some space in the mix for the vox and I think it improves the song x2.

  3. unstableonthetrack
    unstableonthetrack on Wed 8th May 2019 - 2 months ago

    Alright.. I don't judge people's talent, that's not on me.. certain styles and certain things appeal to certain groups and just because it's not me doesn't mean it's not heat. Now, on to the technical and delivery side. Your track has too much sheen.. your voice is getting lost in the amount of treble you have especially for the mood and voice your using.. your beats should not be so crispy and clear if you're going to be running the angry voice. It needs to match the grittiness. You definitely need a little extra work seating your vocals into the mix.. they feel like you're sitting in the bottom of a well shouting angrily while the beat is played to us who are on top of the well. Try layering out 3 vox runs, slightly panning and creating a stereo image, then bus the 3 to an aux and run a vox chain to harmonize and blend the 3 to create a larger more encompassing feel. As far as arrangement goes, your intro felt too long and empty. I had to double check and make sure I was listening to an actual song and not just a beat. Perhaps maybe some adlibs or even some speaking through the 30 seconds it took to get to you rapping. I lost interest after the initial intro and still had to wait to hear you. That intro is what's gonna grab folks.. make me want to keep listening to hear what happens. Overall though very decent quality, and there is potential here.. just sounds like some late nights sitting lonely in front of the boards is what you need lol.

  4. Ernestking78
    Ernestking78 on Sat 16th Mar 2019 - 4 months ago

    Grunge rap I like it's different.

  5. Kunju6007
    Kunju6007 on Sun 24th Jun 2018 - 1 year ago

    Nice one

  6. mage4life568
    mage4life568 on Sun 17th Jun 2018 - 1 year ago

    GOOD FLOWS

  7. EXrider
    EXrider on Wed 30th May 2018 - 1 year ago

    Nice!!!

  8. harrisonrg777
    harrisonrg777 on Wed 9th May 2018 - 1 year ago

    great lyrics

  9. contexxmedia
    contexxmedia on Tue 1st May 2018 - 1 year ago

    existe um link para ouvir suas músicas?

  10. kdhollywood
    kdhollywood on Tue 20th Feb 2018 - 1 year ago

    Smooth like purble cush

  11. kdhollywood
    kdhollywood on Tue 20th Feb 2018 - 1 year ago

    Smooth like purble cush

  12. odc420
    odc420 on Sun 12th Nov 2017 - 1 year ago

    did you make the beat?

  13. SHPInc
    SHPInc on Wed 11th Oct 2017 - 1 year ago

    Dig The Overall Track Good Job.

  14. TRE24
    TRE24 on Wed 21st Jun 2017 - 2 years ago

    Dope record. I love the real coming through.
    I bet you could kill an alternative rock rap type beat.
    Excellent job.
    T2

  15. Kazikli
    Kazikli on Tue 30th May 2017 - 2 years ago

    I like your style, bro. Keep it up!

  16. yakkmatt
    yakkmatt on Mon 17th Apr 2017 - 2 years ago

    ok beat

  17. theskizerd
    theskizerd on Tue 28th Mar 2017 - 2 years ago

    im gay

  18. mamali
    mamali on Sun 5th Mar 2017 - 2 years ago

    Nice job.

  19. cej97
    cej97 on Mon 30th Jan 2017 - 2 years ago

    I like the beat a lot!

  20. sidneyjose
    sidneyjose on Tue 20th Dec 2016 - 2 years ago

    nice job!

  21. rockye1
    rockye1 on Mon 5th Dec 2016 - 2 years ago

    thanks for sharing

  22. EvanBaker
    EvanBaker on Fri 8th Apr 2016 - 3 years ago

    Okay I just listened to the song I'm really into hoororcore music contact me at

  23. EvanBaker
    EvanBaker on Fri 8th Apr 2016 - 3 years ago

    Idk yet

  24. GrandWolf22
    GrandWolf22 on Tue 16th Feb 2016 - 3 years ago

    Niceeeeee

  25. harttless22
    harttless22 on Thu 28th Jan 2016 - 3 years ago

    i like the intro but personally i think the drumline needs work

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    In what ways?

  26. JodyJames
    JodyJames on Tue 26th Jan 2016 - 3 years ago

    This is very unique..Luv that Beat...hip hop and then you throw that rock scream yell what eva you call it type stuff in lol...but I like and I like different..work on your flow a bit more and your golden...just keep doing you stay true to yourself, a lot of people don't do that....Good job Bro!!

    Jody

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thanks Man! Stay tuned for more

  27. DMindProductions
    DMindProductions on Mon 25th Jan 2016 - 3 years ago

    This is badass!

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thank you!

  28. tjtheruss
    tjtheruss on Wed 20th Jan 2016 - 3 years ago

    I like this, good vibe, a little more could be done but nice overall, keep it up!

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    I agree

  29. joecramer
    joecramer on Wed 13th Jan 2016 - 3 years ago

    This is a kind of rap music i realy can enjoy.
    Sounds and samples are well choosen.
    Vocals sounds freaky good and powerfull.

    Well done

    stay tuned
    joe

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    I try my best :) Thanks for stopping by

  30. 3rdNippleMusic
    3rdNippleMusic on Wed 13th Jan 2016 - 3 years ago

    boom, love to do a remix, you're inspirational and we've got stuff in common.. Killer drums mate.

    Visher

  31. pbx3john
    pbx3john on Wed 13th Jan 2016 - 3 years ago

    Nice work!

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thank you!

  32. anthonyabutler32
    anthonyabutler32 on Mon 11th Jan 2016 - 3 years ago

    Nice job with this track.

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thank you!

  33. arashshahbazi
    arashshahbazi on Fri 11th Dec 2015 - 3 years ago

    tnx for track

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    no problem

  34. prabhakar4jc
    prabhakar4jc on Tue 8th Dec 2015 - 3 years ago

    oh its very nice i like it

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Good :)

  35. Kozinho777
    Kozinho777 on Sat 5th Dec 2015 - 3 years ago

    Very nice ! :D

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thanks!

  36. Kaulin
    Kaulin on Sat 5th Dec 2015 - 3 years ago

    i like your voice. its different than any other rappers

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thats what I aim for :)

  37. MGproduct
    MGproduct on Fri 4th Dec 2015 - 3 years ago

    Hats were Fantastic...

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Yes but i think the Jackets could have been better

  38. joecramer
    joecramer on Thu 3rd Dec 2015 - 3 years ago

    I realy like the parts where the female voices are in. They sound so cool "world music" like and with all the other sounds around it is a very special kind of rap music. Don't get me wrong, i like the compleete track, but this special parts have something that sounds realy fresh to me. Hard core etnic industrial rap music!

    Good work

    stay tuned
    joe

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    I love these types of choir voices. They a great element to songs. Glad you liked it :)

  39. dyldonomus
    dyldonomus on Tue 1st Dec 2015 - 3 years ago

    good track the beat sounds perfect for your vocals just gotta work on your delivery a little bit but your flow is pretty dope man! overall good s***

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    All in good time my friend, Im glad you enjoyed!

  40. OViea91
    OViea91 on Tue 1st Dec 2015 - 3 years ago

    Nice delivery. Not a lot of people have that.

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Im glad your package arrived on time :)

  41. Abilify
    Abilify on Mon 30th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    How can people listen to this the voice hurts my ears like a truck, what the hell.

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    I guess your ears are too young and un-trained to even fathom the awesomeness that is my voice. I suggest you listen to more :)

  42. Loupin
    Loupin on Sat 28th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Love your style.. !!

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thanks!

  43. crucethus
    crucethus on Sat 28th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    So What I like about this.
    Your death metal screams are really good..professional sounding.
    What I don't like.
    Your rap Vox sound is a bit under polished (just a hint of whine in the vox.
    You remind me a bit of this band
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8b88US-6ts
    I chose this song from their catalog as I think if you started to overlap rap lines as an overdub over your other rap lines you would create something more interesting. And we have to make the "beat" , song you are rapping over to be a bit less cliche. You have raw talent but the music you are making is aiming for the generic. I think IMHOP. that for you to break through the fog of other rappers you need to come up with something more distinct. But please don't take this as a negative. I would only critique like this for someone I truly think has a lot of talent and ability and drive to be beyond the mediocre.Do you have any raw pella stems of your voice. I think I would like to work with them to show your what I mean.
    Steve

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    I will take it all into consideration and appreciate the feedback. I also can see why I remind you of that band.

  44. sali75
    sali75 on Fri 27th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    good boy

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    woof!

  45. TayaliJeffrey
    TayaliJeffrey on Thu 26th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Dam love the mix hella trill the beat is too nice

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thanks man!

  46. NitramBeatS
    NitramBeatS on Sun 22nd Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Nice man, keep it up!

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    I will haha

  47. adiartana
    adiartana on Sun 22nd Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    NICE SONG

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    THANK YOU

  48. Philemonster1
    Philemonster1 on Sun 22nd Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    aaaaaay!!!! this is ill-the beat man geesh

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thanks i think lol

  49. angelillo
    angelillo on Sat 21st Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    temazo lo ocupe para mi video

  50. OmarMuk
    OmarMuk on Sat 21st Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Heyyy I really like this. I like the emotion in this track, the controlled anger. Monotone rapping always kills it for me but this is anything but. I especially like the soft choir with the hard vocals. There also some really cool effects and transition effects.
    The mix could use a little improvement on the mid to high end. Flow is solid. But this track now put you in my radar especially with that unique style of yours. I gotta keep a look out forr stuff you put out there. You style reminds me of Hollywood Undead if you've heard them.

    Excellent work here.

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Monotone kills it for me as well, and I try to add as much as I can to make sure my vocals arent that way. The mix i agree needs to be tightened, but I'm glad I am now on your list haha. And Hollywood Undead is one of my Favs, so to be likened to them I really appreciate. :) Keep on the look out for more

  51. thegabbynautgamer
    thegabbynautgamer on Fri 20th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Epic music dude keep doing this :3.

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    I shall!

  52. 7venth12
    7venth12 on Thu 19th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    nice vibe, love it!

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Glad to hear!

  53. RealProblemShuckers
    RealProblemShuckers on Thu 19th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    great :)

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thanks :)

  54. DesignedImpression
    DesignedImpression on Wed 18th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Oh heck yeah E! That is what I like, I would have gone the same road haha, Very nice job with this song. Really cool vocally what you did and how you did it, Sounds like a cool match, Ive been playing it over and over. Like your lil break down groove ha, that was sweet work. Enjoying how you used my loops too, and how you added to it. As it is I approve, keep up the lively music. Gonna go far kid. Thanks for sharing with us, Peace.

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Ah yes, the approval of the loop maker. Quite a satisfactory moment there. Im very honored haha. Keep those loops coming and ill keep spittin :)

  55. GalaXProject
    GalaXProject on Wed 18th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Sorry, screams i mean, not cryings. :)

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Im glad you liked it! And i dont mess too much with genre since I sometimes seem to have one of my own, so Rap was closest haha

  56. GalaXProject
    GalaXProject on Wed 18th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Very Good Job!! Unbelievable Voice! The cryings sounds phantastic! But one thing, is that the right genre? ^^ Perhaps "Underground" or "Hardrap" but thats not important, 10 of 10 points!

    Greetz

  57. Rhodesy
    Rhodesy on Tue 17th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Excellent EYEDYE,the lyrics are great,i take it you dont watch Xfactor then?hah.Backing vocal towards the end adds to tension.

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Not sure what you mean by me not watching, but im glad you liked it

  58. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Tue 17th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    very cool backing music EYEDYE...love that bass ...lots of big power in those drums and the piano-string bits sound good...I have never been into rap but you do it well and the accompaniment is really top notch..creative stuff....Ed

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thanks Tumble! A comment from you is always appreciated

  59. sunnyrock83
    sunnyrock83 on Thu 12th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Nice, Well made bro.!!

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thanks!

  60. JasonCroft
    JasonCroft on Thu 12th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Fantastic...
    great rapping , great fellows, great beat
    hats off...

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thank you!

  61. Ernestking78
    Ernestking78 on Thu 12th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    This nice it's different,check me out when you get some time let me know what you think

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Different is what I aim for

  62. Olhm
    Olhm on Thu 12th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Nice work dude, mix sounds a little hot, but then again mine are usually too muddy &/or not bright enough.. granted I listened to it on a phone speaker, in a bathroom

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Mixing does still need to be tightened down, but im glad you enjoyed

  63. Diskonnect
    Diskonnect on Thu 12th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    There is definitely elements of this that I like, vocals are pretty cool and good use of loops etc. Nice!

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thank You!

  64. Byleth
    Byleth on Tue 10th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Rap is not my favorite genre but the dark tone to it with the piano and strings loops gives me a good moment.In fact, very good moment!

    this is a great thing for a songwriter to know how to produce/compose music.

    This make you very "polyvalent"!

    The effect on voice is great too I found its sounds like the devil :P

    The only thing I do dislike is at 0:48 min I found there are missing the same fx for the voice as for 0:45 min

    I can't believe I will fav my first rap track :P

    Great work from a great artist is always welcome into my favorite playlist.

    Peace and Handshakes from Byleth or ant4505(if you remember me) !

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Haha i do remember you and have downloaded someof your stuff. Glad I could introduce you to my own genre and add another fav to the list :)

  65. danke
    danke on Thu 5th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    Somehow I like it!!! :-)

    Your specch is very divisive...for me it's o.k. cause there are plenty of good tricks with it...those 'nearly metal' then those 'chorus' parts are both very interesting ones...music is absolute brilliant, you made very good garnish for those super loops...
    Overall, this track is I think that the good example for the 'love or hate' system...:-)
    I love it, handshake, Danke

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Glad you enjoy it so much danke! As well as my spice to the vocals :)

  66. GoldenOokami
    GoldenOokami on Wed 4th Nov 2015 - 3 years ago

    This is really interesting! I love the instrumentation you have used, along with your vocals. Your use of the loops are consistent throughout the whole track, and your rap flow is pretty decent. If you just tighten up the timing with each syllable, you'll be smooth. With your different tones and vocal tenseness (I guess that's the term), you add a personality to your words, as opposed to using a single, monotonous sound. The yells with the special effect with it, was genius. Sounds like anger filled with an alien feature, y'know? I really liked the creativity and use of all of your elements. Cheers! Thanks for sharing! Faved!

    ~GO

    TheGrimRapper
    Reply by TheGrimRapper

    Thanks for the comment Ookami! I'm always working on my flow, and will continue to do so. Glad you liked my use of vocals and my own flavor I add to them :)

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