ShortBusMusic

ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 14th Jan 2011 15:51 - 15 years ago

on Neva See Me Down by lroc
Iroc, this is really good. If this was set to download, you would have already had 25 people download it. Great chilled beat, and I love that chord progression ;)

Looks like you are two for two on the tracks. I had to add this one to my favorites as well. Great work my friend.

Mad skills. Much respect.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 14th Jan 2011 06:47 - 15 years ago

on Turn Back by Vidmeister
I have to agree with the others, this is special work. Outstanding composition. If you used all loops for this, you are a genius. If not, you are one hell of a musician. Either way, this is a great track.

Outstanding production as well. I love the balance on this one, and the clarity when the guitars come in. Nice that everything sits so well in the mix.

Much respect Vidmeister.

Bear
Vidmeister
Vidmeister replied Unknown
Its all loops...Thanks for the kind words...i will soon be uploading the remixed version, re-arranged by my bandmate with lyrics..
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 14th Jan 2011 03:38 - 15 years ago

on Freefallin - Zoe Badwi by TraXnCtrl
Trax, this is so good.....really good.

Man, you just have this genre nailed down. Your production is top notch, beautifully balanced. I haven't heard the original, but I would venture to say this one is just as good if not better.

The bar is set really high with this one. I don't have a lot of trance on my IPod, but I'm adding this one for sure. Downloaded and faved my friend.

Bear
TraXnCtrl
TraXnCtrl replied Unknown
sorry for the late reply Bear, but I have been on a short holiday........this one just had its first airplay last Monday night on Fresh FM here and the DJ has asked me back for a 2nd guest appearance on Monday 7th of Feb, so I am looking forward to the opportunity to get about an hour of airplay for my tunes :D

BTW ipods were made for Trance!

Thanks for your kind words Bear and I hope all is well with you....keep rockin
Trax
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 14th Jan 2011 01:06 - 15 years ago

on The Life by Menace2012
Space, the final frontier....and I'm not talking about Captain Kirk, haha. I'm talking about a great mix that has a bunch of stuff going on but each and every element is set exactly in the mix where clarity rules.

This is absolutely professional in every way. There are mixes on the radio that pale in comparison to this one.

Mad skills, mad mad skills. Well done!! Had to add this one to my favorites folder.

Bear
Menace2012
Menace2012 replied Unknown
Thanks Bear. When artists with the level of talent you have leave that kind of feedback it truly means alot. I am truly humbled and honored to have a song in your faves...
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 14th Jan 2011 01:04 - 15 years ago

on The Road Less Traveled by Menace2012
I have to agree with the others. Absolutely killed this one my friend. Dump the autotune, you don't need it. You have mad skills that will stand any test. Really well done.

Bear
Menace2012
Menace2012 replied Unknown
I really appreciate it. We probably won't end up using this song for anything as there is a much more positive focus on what we're doing these days. But in hind sight I agree with you on the autotune. Thanx for the insight
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 12th Jan 2011 05:52 - 15 years ago

on Gonna Get Better by RyanSeverns
I was intrigued by my first listen to one of your tunes, so I had to sample another.

This is good.

This is really good. I can hear the MJ influence.

Damn, you are a great musician, with a terrific ear for putting the right instruments in the right spots. Love the mix on this one, everything is sitting nicely. Great vocal work (you have good range).

Love the bridge, it's a magical moment. You have mad skills and I'm going to have to add this one to my favorites. Outstanding effort.

Bear
RyanSeverns
RyanSeverns replied Unknown
Once again, thank you for the great feedback and your kind words :) I appreciate you adding the track as a favorite and for leaving me with encouraging words. I have 17 new tracks in the making right now that have all but the vocals laid down, so please feel free to come back and let me know what you think of them.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 12th Jan 2011 05:44 - 15 years ago

on Just Kiss Me by RyanSeverns
Mr. Severns, welcome to the Loop. Very nice work on this one. It is definitely current.

I will be honest, I'm not a fan of the effect on your vox on the verse, but man, when you kick in the real Mr. Severns at the chorus, your voice is exceptional.

This track is almost perfect, except for that small vox issue (sorry, it almost sounds muffled.....).

I could hear this one being played on the radio....one would think there are several artists who would jump all over this one.

All in all, I would say this is an excellent effort, well written, great instrumentation, a really nice track. Respect.

Bear
RyanSeverns
RyanSeverns replied Unknown
Thanks so much for your review, Bear :) I appreciate the feedback & advice concerning the vox on the verses. It is definitely one of my areas I am working on improving & updating my hardware eventually! Thanks again!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 12th Jan 2011 01:30 - 15 years ago

on Fresh Coffee by LarzCreative
Nice job on this one Henrik. Has almost a chill vibe going to it, but I can also see someone like AJ doing a bit of RnB singing over it, or maybe even one of the great rappers on this site laying down some verse over it.

The fact it is so versatile means you might have an opportunity to get more than a few offers for collaborations.

Another really nice composition my friend. The mix sounds pretty good....you might try to widen out the drums a bit, throw a stereo effect on them.....but then again, my old damaged ear drums aren't what they used to be, haha.

Well done my friend. Very, very nice.

Bear
LarzCreative
LarzCreative replied Unknown
Thanks Bear! Glad you liked it! Nice work on the piano. =)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th Jan 2011 08:33 - 15 years ago

on IT IS TIME FLY WITH THE ANGELS by kerry
I can hear the emotion in this one, something that is hard to convey as an artist. It's difficult at times to really put yourself out there and bare your soul. I think you did that on this one and you connected.

My only advice to you (and it is just a small detail). Watch your pitch on the vocals. Sometimes when people sing softly they have a tendency to go just a tiny bit flat on the notes. If you sing softly, make sure you are still breathing deeply and singing from your diaphragm (my college courses in vocal technique taught me that trick - it actually takes more effort to sing softly than loud).

You have a really nice quality and tone to your voice. Just use good technique when you sing and you will find yourself moving to the next level. Great job here. I look forward to more from you.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th Jan 2011 00:12 - 15 years ago

on Meditation one by UndergroundRadio
Nice composition, using a really nice chord progression. Love the arpeggios as well. That's the kind of stuff we all had to practice at one time and complained about it....then 40 years later (for me anyway) find out those little arpeggios are diamonds.

Really nice work. I enjoyed it a lot. By the way, the progression is F#minor - Dmajor - Amajor - G#major (for your future reference).

Outstanding job on piano young friend.

Bear
UndergroundRadio
UndergroundRadio replied Unknown
Thank you for you advice and information, it really helped me out.

peace from the underground.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th Jan 2011 00:08 - 15 years ago

on These Go To 11 by CrashTheSystem
Hell Yeah!!!

This is fantastic. Great compilation of samples and like Fayz said, nothing better than cranking it to 11. Outstanding and faved for sure.

Stellar work here, really creative and entertaining.

Rock on!

\m/ \m/
CrashTheSystem
CrashTheSystem replied Unknown
haha wow man thanx i am Thoroughly glad you enjoyed it so much! Even for a little filler song lol. Appriciate the fav and thanx for the review!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 10th Jan 2011 20:09 - 15 years ago

on Friday Afternoon by Emann
I actually think the different guitar textures add character to this one, and helps set it apart from the normal cookie cutter guitar tracks we hear from the guitar gods. Really nice job on this.

Bear
Emann
Emann replied Unknown
Thanks Bear I really appreciate that. I'll check out your page later this month and drop you line.
Jonathan
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 10th Jan 2011 16:47 - 15 years ago

on Una Noche en la Opera by Vicen
This is special, wonderful composition with really nice vocals. The mix is especially nice, great balance. I think what I like most about this one is the pacing on it. Uptempo, but not rushed. It's pretty amazing that you composed this out of loops. Much respect Vicen.

Congratulations on a terrific tune.

Bear
Vicen
Vicen replied Unknown
Thank you very much for your kind words. Well now I'm doing more compositions (I guess I'll upload for February), which I think I'm improving something in the composition and I think it follow this finish. It's about listening to a lot all the songs that I've done and adding and shaping sounds.
Thank you very much for having listened.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 10th Jan 2011 07:12 - 15 years ago

on We No Speak Americano (Traxnctrl remix) by TraXnCtrl
Damien, there is a reason you are one of the best when it comes to composing and producing House/Trance/Dance ... well, just about anything you do is just spectacular. This is no exception. Perfect mix. I'm listening on head phones and man, what a ride :)

You just keep setting the bar really, really high. It is like attending a master's class in production. Flawless and an 11/10 from me. Bravo.

Bear
TraXnCtrl
TraXnCtrl replied Unknown
wow Barry.....thanks for such a big wrap
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 10th Jan 2011 04:29 - 15 years ago

on Salvation by Tiltedbeats
Butcha, it's been a while my friend, and I can see in the time I've been away, you have been polishing your skills to a high shine. Damn dude, you have always been good, but you are rapidly approaching world class with this one. Everything is absolutely perfect. You are still setting the standards around here and it's nice to see.

Props my friend to one hell of a track. Hope 2011 is one of your best years ever.

Bear
Tiltedbeats
Tiltedbeats replied Unknown
wowowo hang on a sec... BEARRRRR
hearing that name brings back so many memories of the old school looper days... woah, it's been a while hey :P

and thanks so much for the review... flattering as always... and the same to you my friend, hope 2011 brings the best your way.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 10th Jan 2011 03:54 - 15 years ago

on ONLY WHEN ITS LIGHT by jfw
Jamie, I have the opportunity at times to work with great guitar players, so I recognize great talent when I hear it...this piece places you at top of my favorite guitarist list.

I love fusion, especially music that has a Pat Metheny vibe to it. This is stellar work on many different levels. Truly a wonderful listen. I have to download, and of course, faved it as well.

Thanks for sharing.

Bear
jfw
jfw replied Unknown
Thanks for the listen Bear! It's nice that someone else on this site listens to the likes of Metheny etc.
Cheers, Jamie.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 9th Jan 2011 22:42 - 15 years ago

on 94 Hours (As I Lay Dying)(Nicholls) by AgainstInsanity
Good stuff mate. Great backing track on this one - really well played. I liked your vocal work, nice and solid.

My only suggestion comes on the production end of things, perhaps you could put a stereo effect on your vox.....that will allow you to "spread" them out wider over the frequencies and they will set better in the mix. That's minor stuff, because from start to finish, this is really good.

Well done my friend.

Bear
AgainstInsanity
AgainstInsanity replied Unknown
Thk you, i take the advice for my next one =)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 8th Jan 2011 08:09 - 15 years ago

on Lust Calls by EVRiM
First, let me say your vocal work is nothing short of stunning, absolutely exquisite. Spot on and not a flaw in the entire performance. I can see where this one would have been a bear to mix and master. You have a lot going on and it would be difficult to get everything setting properly in the mix.

But you managed somehow to do that as well. As I listen closely in the headphones, it seems that the balance of the sounds trend to the left, but that is just me nit picking.

This is wonderful and goes to my favorites. I do love your voice. Well done, extremely well done.

Bear
EVRiM
EVRiM replied Unknown
Hi Bear,

Thank you for your informative review.

You know, my m-audio recording device has always veered some to the left. And I think I experimented with some L/R effects in the mix to create a more full, surround w/ surround sound. So it might have gotten away from me a bit. Thanx. I'll check that out.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Jan 2011 18:15 - 15 years ago

on TakeMeAway by lroc
First let me say, I'm not a huge hip hop fan, but if all hip hop sounded like this, I would be :)

Your production is absolutely crystal clear, I'm talking just about as good as it gets. Great drum work, great pacing, great build. I would say this one is ready for prime time.

I'm amazed by what you were able to accomplish with only 12 seconds of piano work. I would love to hear more of your work. There are a lot of great rappers on this site that probably would love to hear more as well.

This is definitely on my favorite list....not because it's my loop, but because of your talent. Well done!!!

Bear
lroc
lroc replied Unknown
appreciate it bro thanks alot trust me i have more on the way plus im a rapper myself so i really know what a rapper wants to hear but keep postin them samples and i got u
much love L
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Jan 2011 18:04 - 15 years ago

on GibsonGuitarBeat by edwin1976
While this is hip hop, it is also great fusion of different styles and instruments. Something that is not easily done. You just might be creating your own unique niche within a genre that doesn't have a lot of originality.

Really great concept and really well done. Props to all involved, but especially you for putting it all together. Top notch production as well.

Excellent work.

Bear
edwin1976
edwin1976 replied Unknown
thanks for the ear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Jan 2011 00:30 - 15 years ago

on PSR (LC Horseback Riding synth sample) by DonnieVyros
This is really nice Donnie. If not a full orchestra, this one is really suited well for a nice string treatment, and tymponies, and maybe a big bass drum.

But then you could add a brass section as well.

Man, now I can hear an entire orchestra on this. I think Dave hit the nail on the head. It is rare when a single instrument can carry a piece, but you accomplished that and did it well.

Bravo maestro, bravo.

Bear
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros replied Unknown
Prech that mate. Ya know, this one is open for collab. So if you were wanting to take this & add those things ya mentioned above, you'd be more than welcome to. I also love how flex this is (stand alone or with other things). Glad ya dug it. Lates!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Jan 2011 00:23 - 15 years ago

on Sweet DJ (feat MrShammi) by DonnieVyros
Hey DV, I think I have to concur with the others. First off, great mix and treatment of vocals and drums. Everything is setting nicely in the mix. It would be awesome to hear this one filled out a bit in the middle section of the song with horns, strings, maybe even a bit more percussion....

make it sound like a huge party :)

But it works really well the way it is too. I would say your first use of pellas off this site is a resounding success. Maybe it's time to play with a few more (just a suggestion, ha).

Outstanding effort Donnie. Really well done.

Bear
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros replied Unknown
Great advice mate. This was more of an experiment than anything else. Was mostly wanting to get the gist of the 'flow'. Now that I've got that down the next one I do will incorporate a wider range of stuff. Glad ya dug it. Later on!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Jan 2011 00:01 - 15 years ago

on For life by Eltuddo
Hey Eltuddo, really nice use of the piano and synth loops. Man, I should let you go through all of my unfinished tracks and let you work some magic on them, haha. I can't build a hip hop track to save my life, so I am thrilled that you were able to do such a great job with the loops. Keep up the terrific work. Excellent beat my friend, excellent.

Bear
Eltuddo
Eltuddo replied Unknown
thanks. and you did most of the work. i just added drums and messed around a little bit with some synths. the loops are dope. i think that this is one of my favortie tracks i have done in a while. so thank you, and keep posting loops and im sure i will use another one. peace.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 2nd Jan 2011 19:55 - 15 years ago

on 2 Guitar Folky Shuffle by DanielGtrman
Hey Daniel, it's been a while (about a year I think). I hope you have been well. I dropped by for an acoustic guitar lesson and I wasn't disappointed. Magnificent playing, as usual.

Really a wonderful piece. Hope 2011 is a great year for you and yours.

Bear
DanielGtrman
DanielGtrman replied Unknown
Thanks for dropping by and giving my track a review Barry. great to see you are back in circulation on the good ol' loopers and dig your new name....
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 2nd Jan 2011 17:15 - 15 years ago

on Hot Pursuit by Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
Steve, it has been way too long. You and Alexander are in rare form on this one. I absolutely love it.

I will be honest the first minute of the song pales in comparison to the rest of the track. I'm not so sure you shouldn't bump the volume of the pads just a bit. I know you wanted a build, but the pads seem almost too far back in the mix. Also seems just a tad thin on the bottom end but that just might be my speakers.....

But that is just nit picking on my part my friend. This one is radio ready as it sets. Not sure I agree with my friend Glocke on this one being predictable, haha. Nothing you do is predictable my friend (he needs to check out your video of you playing sax in the bathroom, hehe).

I hope you and the family had a wonderful holidays. We had a great time here for our first Christmas in the desert. Big change from the Oregon Coast. I'm still hanging tough (I think my insurance company would prefer I didn't, hahaha).

Anyway Steve, my best to all and tell Alexander he did a great job as usual on this one. Here's to 2011 being one of your best years ever.

Bear
SLAPJOHNSON
SLAPJOHNSON replied Unknown
Hi Barry, great to hear from you mate! I'm so pleased you have had a wonderful holiday with your family. I suppose the pad intro is me in a way trying to create a peaceful scene before it's gets shattered by this crazy car chase which was going on in my head as the song developed. I will look into doing several different mixes before I reach the final decision. After listening back again I'm feeling the drums need a bit more level in places also. Your thoughts are always welcome as is your friendship...

Cheers, Slap...
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