Your vocal characteristics are a gift Mark...you seem to get that emotion into the lyrics and your lyrics are always thoughtful (thats a talent in itself)...many of us have a lot of words but the ability to set the words and their emotion together with music is a lot rarer.......and by the way...the vocal(s) and the musical components all sound right on to me (in spite of my less that perfect ears).....Great track my friend....a big well done to you....keep on doing it....Ed
Ed,
TY my friend and mentor. Lyric writing for me is easy at times and other times can be a stressor. I really have to go to another place in my mind to get them to "come to me". I have been writing lyrics for over 37 years now and instead of settling in and just writing, my words are becoming more thoughtful towards the human element as I push myself.
Mark.
Gospel is Patricia`s natural talent I think...I was fortunate to do a couple of collabs with her in the genre a while back...This is great stuff guys....Its got that soulful vibe that speaks to the heart & the great bunch of people playing here just raises the bar waaaay up there....You can do a tone more of these if you like (please)....I`ll just listen & fav when it gets done....Ed
I agree...Patricia is a real talent and quite generous to allow us to use her tracks for our projects. Thanks for your kind words about our little group.
lots on angst.anger..lots of emotion...music is about the best way I know to let it out EYEDYE..I like the part where your use your more natural voice the best...Your mix serves the title well...I also think your talent might shine a bit brighter in the more melodic forms of metal (if that is your preferred genre)...check out groups like Nightwish....their pre 2009 stuff when Tarja was lead vocal is great....In any case, nice job on the mix...keep doing your music, but think about moving on to a better place...nobody else is in charge of that....Ed
My emotion is what carries me through most of my music. Im not the best singer, but ive got that emotion to convey. And I also agree that a mix of raw anger and singing makes a good mix. I do love the metal genre, but will throw my voice on to any haha. Its great to hear from you Tumbleweed. :) And I will check them out.
Oh hell yeah...just a great live feeling bit of music guys...You and Pat make great musical company Domenico...it has a little bit of the Allan Parsons feel with a good helping of rock and a dash of funk...comes together really nicely...O.K. take a bow boys...and do some more like this...fav from me....Ed
As usual Ed, your words are very appreciated (and you are very kind).
I have already some more key tracks from Pat: I hope to find some time soon to put together a new track. Unfortunately I am very busy, but his talent deserves the right amount of attention.
Thanks again!
Ciao, Domenico
I`v e got to get my head into Kontakt..(I just have the free player for now) but you have some great sounds going on there Scott (really like the string pad backing)...I listen to your music and find myself saying "Hell Yeah",,its always so well done in terms of both performance and production...nice up-front vocal (guessing you put a fairly long pre-delay on that bit of reverb that fits just right)...Franco is always most tasteful on his guitar doing this kind of composition...just fits nice and subtly with everything else...Great job by all...definite fav.....Ed
Yeah, Kontakt is nice. I've only been using it a few weeks, but the VST instruments are more realistic than most. There are tons of instrument packs for it, and you can also use QLEW (Quantum Leap East West) with it. It really uses allot of memory, so if you do get it, make sure you have the memory for it.
Thanks for your kind word of my track. For my vocals I usually use Sonar's 'Boost11' unless it's really strong. Yes, Franco and I work on quite a few projects together, with my solo stuff and with Musicante. He has a nice feel for the music.
Great job ER...headphones def provide a full effect...music like this has a way of making the truth of war hard to ignore....super bit of musical art here....fav......Ed
Your talent is showing MisterCh....this is a good listening song very nicely delivered...love the acoustic accompaniament and you did a great job on the vocal delivery....I agree there a few little production things that could make this one shine even brighter, but that does not detract from an enjoyable piece of music...its damn good in every way...the technical things will get better with experience so jusy keep doing it...you have much to offer....Hope to check back once in a while and listen to your progress...A big WELL DONE to you...really like this one...fav.....Ed
Hey, Ed
Sorry it took me so long to answer, but I really appreciate your input, as always! I am glad you liked it, and I will try to work on the song again to improve it!
Thanks for listening and for commenting :)
The quality is fine...production sounds good....A study by The American Music Society says that 50% of people cannot tell the difference between a full Cd (wav) file and a 160 kps MP3 so no matter how we debate it here...you`ve got all you need....nice smooth chill mix...hope you get the vocal you want......well done...(the ending was a bit sudden).....Ed
Thanks for the comment tumbleweed, I talked about the ending a couple comments down and explained why it was a little sudden. Also, I am getting what I think are some good vocals on here. So I hope you like it!
You should be taking your music on tour guys...guess that would be a bit difficult...but you definitely sound like you should be playing at some expensive night club...very pro (as always)...everything playing the part perfectly...and I`m sitting here enjoying the result....another great track....Ed (PS:buy Aleck an extra drink...great organ)
Thanks so much for your kind words. I certainly wish we could tour, but the thousands of miles are a bit tough to overcome. Hell, I wish we could just be in the same room!
I agree about Aleck. When I heard the organ for the first time I was blown away. I hope he'll continue work with us.
Well Static....since I think genres are useful when one is looking for a particular style of music to listen to and something that would often be best disregarded when creating music, you get my vote on whatever genre you want to post under...really like the swinging beginning....I would have been happy to listen to it the rest of the way...and then it starts evolving towards the wild side...introducing the chugging guitar....drop to the cool piano...bring in a bit of Hendrix.....turn the rhythm chuggers back on & let er fly...enjoying the ride...and then back around 6:00 to the smooth...and damn...I`m enjoying this again too...like the clean guitar...and notice the well programmed softer style drums with just the right amount of meat... (wish I could do that)....very seldom listen to mixes of this length...but have to confess this flew by....must have been damn good....and I`m not surprised...and the whole thing hangs together like a good film.....Bravo......Ed....PS LM seems to be working a bit better for me on Chrome that it did on IE or Firefox....my thanks for your comments on my track..I was getting a bit discouraged trying to reply and taking 5 minutes to get a few words to enter while the graphics played....
Yes, fun swinging beginning. I'm totally with you on being happy to listen to just the swing throughout ie no metal. But you know what I'm like and I constantly feel compelled to do stuff that's different and hopefully something I haven't really heard before. So, the metal middle could be removed as its own separate track but then I wouldn't have jazz metal and I'm pleased that I've finally managed to pull that odd merger off.
It was really coming up with that evil synth horn sound around 2:55 that I decided it must go into proper badass metal.
It has to return to the smooth stuff around 6:00. Mostly because I just had more of it and didn't want to wait too long to get to the heavy shit. I could have done, say, smooth swinging for 6 mins and then a couple of minutes of heavy. But making them more integrated I find more fun.
You may be interested to know that all the clean guitar playing (ie everything other than the metal middle) was done in one single 11 min take, which I then extensively edited and moved around and layered where necessary. I simply found that I'd done everything I needed in that one take and didn't need to bother picking the guitar up again (except for the heavy shit). It's this type of approach that I've suggested many times for you to try though I doubt you will as you're probably too set in your ways.
So, you still get to do a single take but you then chop it up a lot more to come up with unusual stuff. If I find a cool riff in that long take, I might copy and repeat it a few times and then get other instruments to play the same/a similar thing. This really is how I compose! Just jamming with good riffs and fills over 8-16 bar loops and then seeing what good stuff comes out and building everything up.
"well programmed softer style drums with just the right amount of meat..."
I think you might be referring to the penultimate section starting around 7:30 where I bring back the emphasis on the tritone and metal but without any guitar or banging drums. That's an attempt to give a metal feel to jazz but without the distortion or smashing drums. Rhodes gets distorted again there (wah too). I also use a snare in that section from an EZ kit which is supposed to be for drum 'n' bass. Quite a distinctive sound and not heard anywhere else in the track.
"have to confess this flew by"
That has been said quite a few times on my lengthy tracks and pleases me. Probably something to do with the number of changes and constant new developments. Very important for me not to have a boring moment. If something's dragging I either shorten it or just add more elements (normally the latter, plus lengthening things when the new elements present even more options).
Hey Elena...you were wondering about the drums....they are right on...I spend more time trying to find the right drums than anything else (so I am not a got source of advice)..I use loops for drums about 90% of the time and seldom get what I really want....everything seems to fit just right in this one...so your first rock post is all good...keep doing it your own way...it just keeps getting better..maybe you will get some more ideas from more of our Loopefriends too..Ed
I`m just listening on my PC speakers this afternoon mpoppitt...but as far as I can tell the mix sounds nice and clean and nice to hear all the dynamics intact...sounds good to me...Ed
Spiv...you are your own brand I think..so you can post under anything you like & I`ll still admire the creativity...I dont have the knowledge to give you useful observations on the genre or synths ...and I dont know anyone that is better informed and more capable in both than yourself anyway...so I just listen & enjoy the trip.........right on...Ed
Hey Ed, thank you for your listen and the kind comment! I'm happy that you enjoyed the trip! Your words make me happy. I'm no expert, but I'm finally feeling some understanding of what goes on inside the circuits I build, and that feels good. I'm in the middle of updating this song, taking the reactions I received here into account. I have recorded the bass part with a new modular patch; better tuned and more bass. Weakened and killed the detune on the Korg DW synth. Building up some live instrument recordings and stuff. Got all the lyrics written. Haven't advanced a song after release like this for while. Thank you for listening my friend!
I am familiar with Stacy`s a capella Domenico...thoughtful instrument choices and composing Domenica..carry just the right knd of emotion to compliment the vocal (which is really well done)..nice job onthe guitar and bass....No surprise...I always know I will be listening to some enjoyable music and big talent when I stop over at your place....another good one...Ed
Thanks for the kind words Ed: I am kind of "ashamed" because my guitar playing is really minimalist compared to yours. And for this song I was using a "Smith'ish" approach to guitar (I know, he is not what we can define a guitar hero but I like his music a lot).
Take care, Domenico
How good it is to listen to some real music....done with big talent...for something done on an overnight project, this is really something special ER.....Definite fav for me...really enjoyed the listen..give your Bro a high 5 for me...and take a bow yourself...I`m just celebrating St Paddys with a glass of Killkenny Cream Ale...and I raise my glass in a toast to you...superb job guys.......Ed
Hi X...any time I do anything that is a bit mellow I just post it as Chillout...never even heard of it till I found Looperman...so I dont know much either...But...I know what I like...and you`ve got something really good going here....I`m hinestly not sure I would add or change anything..the minimal approach really lets the individual instrument parts do there thing...and you have them all nicely EQd and placed....Go with what feels right..and if that means you cross genres or drift between them just go with the flow....there are no coincidences...your creativity will just keep growing along with your diversity.....well done...Ed
Our friend Bear is always a great source of inspiration...nice patient build in this one..lots of time for those warm sounds to wrap themselves around the mind...just a good relaxing trip...it was a pleasure to listen doudei...well done...Ed
geez Patricia...I must have been in hibernation to have missed this one earlier...this is indeed special....(and thats not a surprise to me)....just an absolutely enjoyable piece of music...a big well done to both you and Baggadub....more please......Ed
Got it to play this time Alex...glad I did...I think this is one of your best...really nice smooooth R&B flavour ...the music mix is really well done...the right panned vocal is not really a big distraction as it only involves a small part of the mix....do not worry too much about the technical things (they will come with experience)...but there should be a pan control on each of your tracks and it is just a matter of moving the one with the vocal on it to the centre position (or close).....well done....this is a very good piece of music.....Ed
Thank you again Ed. Actually I have to say that I adjusted very carefully the panning of each separated track in here, I always pay much attention to the placement of instruments in the mix. No difference this time, I decided to leave the vocals as they are though. For me they sound ok like this. Also my tracks are not mastered to the modern standards as I do not make commercial music at all. Therefore the only thing to care about is the clarity of the arrangement and final mix. But thanks for pointing all that anyway and some nice words. Basically this is only a sketch based on the short guitar idea sent to me by ferryterry but we want to make another version soon. So I won't be reworking this version here anymore.
Thanks again for reviewing my track - it is much appreciated. Best to you, Alex
the production sounds good....I think the way you compose with the backing warpped around the piano prog gets it into that pop cross-over you were going for Steve...you already know I`m not a conniseur of the genre but its always a pleasure to stop over here and admire the way you take hip hop to a level that was likely never considered in the old days...and you do it well...always good listening....Ed
Hi vivk...first of all Welcome To The Loop...its great to have an artist with your knowledge and obvious talent around the place.....there is no shortage of good musical company and the suscribers are a really diverse lot that seem to live in peace (for the most part) with one another HaHa....This is the kind of music that could wash away the cares of a long day....very mellow...and enjoyable easy listening....well done to you....keep on.....Ed
(PS: you should check off the "featured" box in the upload form..that way it will bounce to the first pages when you comment on other peoples tracks...this deserves a lot more listeners)
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TY my friend and mentor. Lyric writing for me is easy at times and other times can be a stressor. I really have to go to another place in my mind to get them to "come to me". I have been writing lyrics for over 37 years now and instead of settling in and just writing, my words are becoming more thoughtful towards the human element as I push myself.
Mark.
on The Truth - Featuring Patricia Edwards by Musicante
I agree...Patricia is a real talent and quite generous to allow us to use her tracks for our projects. Thanks for your kind words about our little group.
Ciao,
M.
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I have already some more key tracks from Pat: I hope to find some time soon to put together a new track. Unfortunately I am very busy, but his talent deserves the right amount of attention.
Thanks again!
Ciao, Domenico
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Yeah, Kontakt is nice. I've only been using it a few weeks, but the VST instruments are more realistic than most. There are tons of instrument packs for it, and you can also use QLEW (Quantum Leap East West) with it. It really uses allot of memory, so if you do get it, make sure you have the memory for it.
Thanks for your kind word of my track. For my vocals I usually use Sonar's 'Boost11' unless it's really strong. Yes, Franco and I work on quite a few projects together, with my solo stuff and with Musicante. He has a nice feel for the music.
Cheers,
Scott
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Sorry it took me so long to answer, but I really appreciate your input, as always! I am glad you liked it, and I will try to work on the song again to improve it!
Thanks for listening and for commenting :)
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Thanks so much for your kind words. I certainly wish we could tour, but the thousands of miles are a bit tough to overcome. Hell, I wish we could just be in the same room!
I agree about Aleck. When I heard the organ for the first time I was blown away. I hope he'll continue work with us.
Ciao,
M.
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Yes, fun swinging beginning. I'm totally with you on being happy to listen to just the swing throughout ie no metal. But you know what I'm like and I constantly feel compelled to do stuff that's different and hopefully something I haven't really heard before. So, the metal middle could be removed as its own separate track but then I wouldn't have jazz metal and I'm pleased that I've finally managed to pull that odd merger off.
It was really coming up with that evil synth horn sound around 2:55 that I decided it must go into proper badass metal.
It has to return to the smooth stuff around 6:00. Mostly because I just had more of it and didn't want to wait too long to get to the heavy shit. I could have done, say, smooth swinging for 6 mins and then a couple of minutes of heavy. But making them more integrated I find more fun.
You may be interested to know that all the clean guitar playing (ie everything other than the metal middle) was done in one single 11 min take, which I then extensively edited and moved around and layered where necessary. I simply found that I'd done everything I needed in that one take and didn't need to bother picking the guitar up again (except for the heavy shit). It's this type of approach that I've suggested many times for you to try though I doubt you will as you're probably too set in your ways.
So, you still get to do a single take but you then chop it up a lot more to come up with unusual stuff. If I find a cool riff in that long take, I might copy and repeat it a few times and then get other instruments to play the same/a similar thing. This really is how I compose! Just jamming with good riffs and fills over 8-16 bar loops and then seeing what good stuff comes out and building everything up.
"well programmed softer style drums with just the right amount of meat..."
I think you might be referring to the penultimate section starting around 7:30 where I bring back the emphasis on the tritone and metal but without any guitar or banging drums. That's an attempt to give a metal feel to jazz but without the distortion or smashing drums. Rhodes gets distorted again there (wah too). I also use a snare in that section from an EZ kit which is supposed to be for drum 'n' bass. Quite a distinctive sound and not heard anywhere else in the track.
"have to confess this flew by"
That has been said quite a few times on my lengthy tracks and pleases me. Probably something to do with the number of changes and constant new developments. Very important for me not to have a boring moment. If something's dragging I either shorten it or just add more elements (normally the latter, plus lengthening things when the new elements present even more options).
Thanks for your thoughts.
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Take care, Domenico
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- Hey Ed, im EXACTLY the same i didnt know about chillout till i heard a danke track on here haha.
"you`ve got something really good going here"
- Thanks man :), i set out to make something ive never done before and i think i done that haha
"the minimal approach really lets the individual instrument parts "
- YEAH, exactly! :)
"Go with what feels right" / "go with the flow"
- I always do, only way to do it haha
"your creativity will just keep growing along with your diversity"
- I hope thats true, only way to find out is to keep going I guess :)
There's some really good advice in there man,
thanks for taking the time.
Glad you enjoyed.
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Thanks again for reviewing my track - it is much appreciated. Best to you, Alex
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(PS: you should check off the "featured" box in the upload form..that way it will bounce to the first pages when you comment on other peoples tracks...this deserves a lot more listeners)