Pretty cool track, dig the piano, awesome chorus. The concept is great. I have a song called the Fool where the fool was me and wrote it about something foolish I did.
One suggestion I will make is to not introduce the kick until the chorus. The impact would be greater when it "kicks" in and honestly, I think it takes away from the singing in the verses. Maybe try a hi hat or some percussion through the verses, something less impactful to make the words be the focus.
Hey thanks, appreciate it. I agree that the chorus isn't popping enough and it's a little distracting in the verses, but I've tried every arrangement and it's always a little too sparse in the verses then without the kick, the chorus ends up sticking out too much. Been trying to do a quieter, more simple drum part for the verses, just to give it something.
Nice to have you back Mos! Last time we talked you were going through a lot. Hope you are doing well and you are happy!
Jeff Tweedy of Wilco once said, referring to personal issues in his life and making music, that he makes music IN SPITE of all the issues he has faced like drug addiction and mental problems. He transcends the issues, overcomes them by making music and he feels like his issues won't hold him down from doing something he loves. In the end a feeling of accomplishment can boost one's moral and pick him up from the stressful things in life, it is amazing what music can do.
I took a lot from what he said and feel the same way. Making music while experiencing all I've been through recently has been the ticket to keeping me happy and distracted from all the stress.
Keep making music my friend and stick around, please!
Thank you for stopping by, things still up in the air but at least I am back here, thanks to a Spiv asking me to remix a track for him, got the fire started again, will try and stay around with some tracks my friend, will send email next few days to fill you in on whats happening...Thanks for the fav...Peace n Respect mate...mosaic...
I didn't know you were from down here in Dixie, you sound born and bred in the south land. Vocals are sounding pretty good and so is the mix. Electric guitar sound is perfect for this style of music.
Thanks for taking a listen, country is my favorite music genre but I don't do it often because its hard to find the right sound. I finally found some guitar tones that I like so hopefully I will be turning some more out in the future. Thanks again.
Totally digging this! Lyrics are great, vocals are a bit raw and wide but that might be exactly what you were going for. The effects were great and added to the track. Great live feel to the track and not overproduced which I like a lot.
thanks for listening and commenting, appreciate it. Yes, I roughed and distorted the vocal track a little, it was on purpose. Good spot, that. We like this song a lot, it is simple in a way but came out nice in the end :)
Creative use of your vocals. Blowing into the mic and heavily reverb is a great idea. Overall a very solid idea.
I think vocals would add a lot to this and give it an added dimension. Are you planning to add vocals? Hopefully you are. If you would like some help I wouldn't mind taking a crack at something like this. I can hear some Scott Weiland styled vocals in there. I've never tried that style but willing to. If interested give me a shout through the site.
Hey Wayne! Good to hear from you again dude! Thanks for checking it out. Normally I would say yes but I think I want this song to remain as it is. But I'm not opposed to a collaboration with you for this album I'm working on. I'll try to write something and post it here and if you dig it let me know.
I can't say I am an expert in jazz, to me the best part of jazz is the experimenting. Not sure if you are doing any of that here, combining sounds, feelings and textures with drums and vocal effects or if you are the new Frank Zappa. ;) Either way, keep on keeping on, making music to provoke thought is great.
The second piece is a nice ethereal, dreamy piece. The vocals echoing is a nice effect. Well done Alex!
Glad you are giving that cello a run for it's money. Some of the higher stuff you played around 6:30 was very cool, learning riffs and runs like that are a fun way to get started and feel like you are progressing.
Neat track and a good jam track. I think some of that dobro would fit in the end part.
I didn't care for the synth in the end so much. Things were sounding pretty organic then that popped up. Felt a more natural sound could have been used. Just a person thing.
Keep working that cello in. You just may be the next Jeff Lynne.
I sure am giving the cello a good workout. I've hardly played any other instrument for the last 2 months. I'm trying to get half decent (nowhere near that yet) so I can really properly incorporate it in my music.
Until then, I'm having to do so much editing of the parts I record as there are so many errors and shit, unintentional tones.
" Some of the higher stuff you played around 6:30 was very cool"
I agree. It's really laidback, kind of classy playing but there are also some nice little rapid bowed runs. I find playing the top two strings (as I'm doing here) really quite difficult as they seem to be quite far away from me so I have to adjust my position just to see what I'm doing.
"some of that dobro would fit in the end part."
Quite possibly but I was adamant that I wanted to try making it work only with cello as the lead instrument. I've hardly played any slide in many months.
"I didn't care for the synth in the end so much. Things were sounding pretty organic then that popped up"
No problem if you don't like it but what you say is a bit of a surprise because that same synth sound has already occurred quite prominently twice in the track. So, check it out at 0:48 and then 3:12. By bringing it back at 7:30, I'm only returning to previously established themes so hopefully it shouldn't feel too out of place. Despite being cello-heavy, I don't see this as a natural, acoustic, organic kind of track. It's still really quite processed and progressive. So, I think the trancey arp synth fits that vibe.
"You just may be the next Jeff Lynne."
Ha, I'm a massive fan of his but I don't believe he plays cello. You're thinking of one or two of his bandmates in ELO, one of my favourite groups of all time. They are a much maligned and seriously underrated group.
It is a nice track. I am not much of a HH fan but the track is solid. Work on the compression on the master track to give it some more punch, a little limiter, not much. Those will give it punch and added volume.
Great band to model a song after. The only album I have of them is their one with No One Knows on it and that is great from beginning to end.
This one comes out of the gate guns a blazin'! I love music like this, in your face rock and roll. This is great live bar room music. Mix sounds great!
Thanks Wayne. I have everything they and Josh Homme has ever released including the stuff with Kyuss and his latest with Iggy Pop. Awesome album by the way. It is like David Bowie sang on a Queens of the Stone Age album.
We don't have a "spring" to speak of here in sunny Florida but I used this to transport me back to a chilly and windy New England day. A very nice piece of music, kudos to both of you!
I do appreciate any percussion you used, works well here as do the strings, they tear at the heart. The piano is straight forward at first then at the end plays some fills that makes me shout MORE! Ed's acoustic sounds nice and it goes so well with this overall positive feel of renewal.
Combined or by yourselves, you guys are some talented folks!
Sorry to hear you were sick. That dreadful disease is becoming all to common. Couldn't be happier to hear you are cancer free and ready to go make music again!!
I listened to the instrumental and the mix is much better. The singing is excellent and added the cherry on top! The angel/devil in disguise idea has been done a million times and a million more times to come in the future. Of course nothing beats Elvis' Devil In Disguise but this might come in a close second. ;)
Hey Kyle, this has a big sound to it, almost like a U2 song(Rattle and Hum period) with the keys/pad rolling in the background as the drums pound away and the singer wails! All the elements are there.
I know what you mean about uploading because you are tired of mixing it, lol!! We must listen to bits and pieces of songs hundreds of times, at least. I usually try to have 3 or 4 songs going at once so I don't get too bored with one project.
Hey Wayne thanks for stopping by and listening, its always appreciated. I have been trying to find more time to write and record, still not as much as I would like but at least I can do it a little. I am able to work on about 1 track a month which is good compared to the 3-4 months it was taking. I put in a studio at the school that I teach at so now when I have free time I try to get in there and utilize it. Anyway, thanks again.
Hey Fila, it's been a while but worth the wait. Having my coffee and waking up this fine morning and this track is putting me in the perfect mood.
Good drums, they sit back and do their job and let the feature instruments shine. You are right, the piano is what all the other instruments revolve around. The synths add a nice peaceful feeling.
My coffee is kicking in but hey, this music is chilling it to iced coffee!! ;) Take care, don't be such a stranger, post more!!
theHumps whats up man? Yes it has been a while good to see some of the originals still around. Had a battle with Cancer but cancer free now so time to get back to looping. Been playing around with this for about 9 months as I try and get the groove back. Thanks for stopping by and leaving those great comments. Appreciated! Did't mean to chill your coffee but damn just happened to my cup!! Thanks again for stopping by. Got two potentials in the can. Stay tuned! Take Care Filãofsoul
The song is so upbeat, happy sounding and energetic and knowing something is wrong with Franco's health is making the dancing almost unbearable. ;) Hope you are well Franco!
Thanks so much, Wayne, and I'm sure Franco appreciates your best wishes. He's still recovering and even back to work (although not too happy about it!) Our projects may be slowing down, but we'll keep going as long as we can. Franco, Scott, Dan and I have a project about to begin in a couple days.
I hope you own a mandolin, I heard some fast pickin' going on in there. I like the bass and drums on this track. Bass is so underrated as to how much fun it is to play and to how it can have an impact on the song. There are periods where the bass is simple and places where the bass is moving out. Mostly when the drummer and bass are in a groove, you can tell. Your bass playing is really good here!
Hey Wayne my man!
Thanks for your interests in the track my friend.Yes the bass is a very abused instrument in the big world :) ,most great bands have great bass players and the bass line is so important to harmony.Example;if the guitarist is playing a C chord and the bass plays an A root note,we are now in Aminor. :)
This is a neat little acoustic idea. I tried playing along on my acoustic and found that you were tuned to 430 so everything was a half step down. No biggie. Are you planning to add bass? It would be nice to hear some in this track.
I thought the entire mix could have been a little louder and noticed that by looking at how small the waveform was and by listening. There should be a master volume with a meter(i would guess) in audacity that shows the output level. Boost that up a bit, not until the meter goes in the red but you can get this louder.
I write a lot of ideas like this one so when I started listening I knew I would like this!
Hi. Thanks for your comments , yes i like to play tuned down half a step..I haven't planned on adding some bass but if you want to go ahead and send back to me that would be cool. Thanks for your tip with Audacity i'm making better mixes each time i use it..
Feels like I'm hanging out at band practice, this has a nice live feel. I do like your style! The guitar lead was pretty sweet and a little unexpected, I really liked it. The bass is solid and holds it's own. Lyrics are cool and most people can relate to losing touch with someone who meant a lot in some way. Hope you enjoyed reconnecting with your friend!
I read that the vocal track was Scott and now I'm mad. He has been holding out by not singing earlier? ok, so he talking, lets not split hairs. ha
This is awesome guys! Great job Kenny, you rock! I like story songs and Scott did a great job telling one. The Sax, guitar and keys work so well together. Feels more like r and b and funk during the disco. The bass is the backbone to this one, as it should be!! The mix is always top notch.
Must have listened to this about 7 times, off to dl, thanks!
Yep, that's Scott! He's a bit self conscience about his vocalizing, but says he'll do more if it calls for it since it's gotten a good response on this one.
The guys all appreciate your always kind words. We're all setting up for our next track. Thanks again.
ok so you didn't sing on this one but you could have done some yodeling. ;)
You sure captured the grandeur and vastness of the Himalayas in this track. It is sad to see the genocide inside of Tibet being ignored by the world but on the other hand the country of Bhutan is an amazing example of how a country can respect their land, take care of their people and still prosper. Crazy mixed up world!
There is a peaceful, spiritual and uplifting feel to the track. Gave it several listens. Great meditation ambiance, my heart rate has lowered, time for more coffee.
HaHa....it seems I will never get rid of "Orlando The Singer" fans...now I should even switch to yodeling...haha!
Nice to have you here again my friend and I'm so pleased I have the power to control your pulse...it's just that I don't know what your doctor will say...haha!
I agree on your political and cultural observation of Tibet
and I'm even more excited on your thoughts about my mucic
and for getting the 'fav' ofcourse...thank you so much my
friend!:)
Really liked what you did here Rhodesy. I enjoy acoustic music a lot and hope to hear more of it here. Like others have said, it's a wonderful listen! Nice changes throughout the track giving it some dynamics. Is the same guitar used for all the tracks?
I think mother nature herself would want a digital copy and an album version for her collection.
I know spring is here now. Plus the masters golf tournament starts this week!!
Great inspiring comments from you Wayne as always my friend!The main guitar is a gibson j45 acoustic which i used for all the melody/harmony parts.The intro vamp was on a strat middle pickup set ultra clean.
Turn it up!! It has a great Sex Pistols feel to this. I would say this is punk. Live recorded instruments and a live performance feel to the recording, lots of energy and funny lyrics. You guys touring in Florida any time soon?
on I Dont Know You Anymore by austinmusic
One suggestion I will make is to not introduce the kick until the chorus. The impact would be greater when it "kicks" in and honestly, I think it takes away from the singing in the verses. Maybe try a hi hat or some percussion through the verses, something less impactful to make the words be the focus.
Wayne
on Cried A Million Tears by Mosaic
Jeff Tweedy of Wilco once said, referring to personal issues in his life and making music, that he makes music IN SPITE of all the issues he has faced like drug addiction and mental problems. He transcends the issues, overcomes them by making music and he feels like his issues won't hold him down from doing something he loves. In the end a feeling of accomplishment can boost one's moral and pick him up from the stressful things in life, it is amazing what music can do.
I took a lot from what he said and feel the same way. Making music while experiencing all I've been through recently has been the ticket to keeping me happy and distracted from all the stress.
Keep making music my friend and stick around, please!
Wayne
Thank you for stopping by, things still up in the air but at least I am back here, thanks to a Spiv asking me to remix a track for him, got the fire started again, will try and stay around with some tracks my friend, will send email next few days to fill you in on whats happening...Thanks for the fav...Peace n Respect mate...mosaic...
on Alive by ImproveWithError
Nice job Kyle!
Wayne
Thanks for taking a listen, country is my favorite music genre but I don't do it often because its hard to find the right sound. I finally found some guitar tones that I like so hopefully I will be turning some more out in the future. Thanks again.
Kyle
on Like this - ft Grotesk the subhuman by TeeGee1965
Great job Fellas!
Wayne
thanks for listening and commenting, appreciate it. Yes, I roughed and distorted the vocal track a little, it was on purpose. Good spot, that. We like this song a lot, it is simple in a way but came out nice in the end :)
on Angel in the Night -SadGhoster87 Remix by acesmith
on Errodead by Crypt
I think vocals would add a lot to this and give it an added dimension. Are you planning to add vocals? Hopefully you are. If you would like some help I wouldn't mind taking a crack at something like this. I can hear some Scott Weiland styled vocals in there. I've never tried that style but willing to. If interested give me a shout through the site.
Cheers!
Wayne
on jazz of ethereal forest plus bonus track by promenade2239
The second piece is a nice ethereal, dreamy piece. The vocals echoing is a nice effect. Well done Alex!
Wayne
on The Warm Glow Of Yesterday by StaticNomad
Neat track and a good jam track. I think some of that dobro would fit in the end part.
I didn't care for the synth in the end so much. Things were sounding pretty organic then that popped up. Felt a more natural sound could have been used. Just a person thing.
Keep working that cello in. You just may be the next Jeff Lynne.
Wayne
I sure am giving the cello a good workout. I've hardly played any other instrument for the last 2 months. I'm trying to get half decent (nowhere near that yet) so I can really properly incorporate it in my music.
Until then, I'm having to do so much editing of the parts I record as there are so many errors and shit, unintentional tones.
" Some of the higher stuff you played around 6:30 was very cool"
I agree. It's really laidback, kind of classy playing but there are also some nice little rapid bowed runs. I find playing the top two strings (as I'm doing here) really quite difficult as they seem to be quite far away from me so I have to adjust my position just to see what I'm doing.
"some of that dobro would fit in the end part."
Quite possibly but I was adamant that I wanted to try making it work only with cello as the lead instrument. I've hardly played any slide in many months.
"I didn't care for the synth in the end so much. Things were sounding pretty organic then that popped up"
No problem if you don't like it but what you say is a bit of a surprise because that same synth sound has already occurred quite prominently twice in the track. So, check it out at 0:48 and then 3:12. By bringing it back at 7:30, I'm only returning to previously established themes so hopefully it shouldn't feel too out of place. Despite being cello-heavy, I don't see this as a natural, acoustic, organic kind of track. It's still really quite processed and progressive. So, I think the trancey arp synth fits that vibe.
"You just may be the next Jeff Lynne."
Ha, I'm a massive fan of his but I don't believe he plays cello. You're thinking of one or two of his bandmates in ELO, one of my favourite groups of all time. They are a much maligned and seriously underrated group.
Thanks again.
on Myy Lyyfe by KnightHeir
Wayne
on When the Queens Come Marching Home by topvega
This one comes out of the gate guns a blazin'! I love music like this, in your face rock and roll. This is great live bar room music. Mix sounds great!
Wayne
Thanks for the listen and the feedback.
tv
on The Rituals Of Spring by Orlando51
I do appreciate any percussion you used, works well here as do the strings, they tear at the heart. The piano is straight forward at first then at the end plays some fills that makes me shout MORE! Ed's acoustic sounds nice and it goes so well with this overall positive feel of renewal.
Combined or by yourselves, you guys are some talented folks!
Take care!
Wayne
With much appreciation________Orlando
on Just Thinking by Filaofsoul
Be good and take care of you and yours.
Wayne
on Angel In Disguise by BradoSanz
Good luck in the competition, you guys are great!
Wayne
Brado
on On This Day by ImproveWithError
I know what you mean about uploading because you are tired of mixing it, lol!! We must listen to bits and pieces of songs hundreds of times, at least. I usually try to have 3 or 4 songs going at once so I don't get too bored with one project.
Take care!
Wayne
Kyle
on Just Thinking by Filaofsoul
Good drums, they sit back and do their job and let the feature instruments shine. You are right, the piano is what all the other instruments revolve around. The synths add a nice peaceful feeling.
My coffee is kicking in but hey, this music is chilling it to iced coffee!! ;) Take care, don't be such a stranger, post more!!
Wayne
on Foreign Glory by TinyFinger
More!!
Wayne
on Non e un gioco by Musicante
Keep the hits coming, what a gem!
Wayne
Ciao,
M.
on Setting-the-tones by ronabo
Wayne
Ronabo
on Losing you by Rhodesy
Great vibe and cool sounds Rhodesy!
Wayne
Thanks for your interests in the track my friend.Yes the bass is a very abused instrument in the big world :) ,most great bands have great bass players and the bass line is so important to harmony.Example;if the guitarist is playing a C chord and the bass plays an A root note,we are now in Aminor. :)
on Charlie Horse by TheProjectSix
I thought the entire mix could have been a little louder and noticed that by looking at how small the waveform was and by listening. There should be a master volume with a meter(i would guess) in audacity that shows the output level. Boost that up a bit, not until the meter goes in the red but you can get this louder.
I write a lot of ideas like this one so when I started listening I knew I would like this!
Wayne
on You believed in me Thank You by TeeGee1965
Wayne
on -Ben- by Musicante
This is awesome guys! Great job Kenny, you rock! I like story songs and Scott did a great job telling one. The Sax, guitar and keys work so well together. Feels more like r and b and funk during the disco. The bass is the backbone to this one, as it should be!! The mix is always top notch.
Must have listened to this about 7 times, off to dl, thanks!
Wayne
Yep, that's Scott! He's a bit self conscience about his vocalizing, but says he'll do more if it calls for it since it's gotten a good response on this one.
The guys all appreciate your always kind words. We're all setting up for our next track. Thanks again.
Ciao,
M.
on In The Grip Of Himalaya by Orlando51
You sure captured the grandeur and vastness of the Himalayas in this track. It is sad to see the genocide inside of Tibet being ignored by the world but on the other hand the country of Bhutan is an amazing example of how a country can respect their land, take care of their people and still prosper. Crazy mixed up world!
There is a peaceful, spiritual and uplifting feel to the track. Gave it several listens. Great meditation ambiance, my heart rate has lowered, time for more coffee.
Om Mani Padme Hung!
Wayne
Nice to have you here again my friend and I'm so pleased I have the power to control your pulse...it's just that I don't know what your doctor will say...haha!
I agree on your political and cultural observation of Tibet
and I'm even more excited on your thoughts about my mucic
and for getting the 'fav' ofcourse...thank you so much my
friend!:)
With much appreciation______Orlando
on April in England by Rhodesy
I think mother nature herself would want a digital copy and an album version for her collection.
I know spring is here now. Plus the masters golf tournament starts this week!!
Take care!
Wayne
Enjoy spring,enjoy the golf!:) Rhodesy
on -WTF- by TinyFinger
I dig your style, more please!
Wayne