Hey man, long time since I've seen you about! Your description was spot on and I agree with the comment Meta said. Makes you want to play it again. So I did.
This works for me! Pretty upbeat for chillout, it's not heavy or too loud but the genre means little. Chillout-ish, ha, that sums it up. Good intro, solid changes and instrumentation, dig the length and was easy on the ears. The change in the middle was very nice, broke the song up and added some dynamics to the song. Two thumbs up!
Man, I just listened to a chilled out rnb song that was a great start to my morning. I just took my first sips of coffee and hit the play button to this song. Dang dude, my heart rate went up, I feel like mowing the grass and doing a cartwheel all of a sudden, lol!
I don''t know crap about dnb other than drum and bass are featured but as I listen to this a 2nd and 3rd time I am starting to let it all absorb into my senses I realize I was completely right about my knowledge of dnb. I am sure this will appeal to those who like dnb and those who like something completely different, I fall into that category.
Sure was a trip, great creativity and making music that appeals to you because pleasing yourself when it comes to making music is most important.
Sweet track! I do love music like this. Instruments are well played and the composition and arrangement is great. I struggle as well with my disabilities which are numerous so I do appreciate the sentiment of the song. Grin and bare it, life isn't easy to begin with but music like this certainly puts a smile on my face, thanks!
You have a pretty low register to your vocals, can't complain about how they are mixed. You created a dark, edgy track with lots of tension with both the vocals and the instruments. A bit cinematic as well, I could hear this in a thriller. Good way to finish off the year!
Thanks a lot for your friendly comment Wayne.
Good to know that you could enjoy this last song for this year. I would enjoy it if someone would use it in a movie for sure :) .....
Such a nice pop song. Martin's loops are fantastic, can't go wrong there. What is not to like about this? The vocal recording is clear and well sung, nice performance! Great songs don't need to be complicated, sometimes the simpler the better.
It's pretty sad how our wildlife is treated, their homes invaded by urban sprawl, poaching to the point of extinction and a total disregard for their well being and surroundings. Wolves are beautiful animals. A friend had a wolf/husky mix and it was pretty cool looking.
Interesting interpretation of your description. The bass has a feeling of prowling or hunting. The ticking/percussion was an unexpected sound but I'm sure your reason for putting it in there is justified. Nice piece of music overall!
Hello Wayne.
Sorry for the delay in response mate.
I hope you’ve had wonderful Christmas and new year holiday.
Thank you very much for your feedback my friend.
I'm really glad you liked it.
Thanks again.
Majid
Powerful, in your face track! Some vocals on this would be the icing on the cake. Guitars cut through, drums are relentless. Whew, I'm winded after listening to this, no more coffee for a while, lol!
Hi Wayne Thanks for the comment. It's a fairly old song, so I'm listening to newer songs. I have listened to your songs, and you can hear that you are a very experienced musician. These songs have a very good sound.
Well crafted piece of music, your description helped to set the scene as a listener. It has highs and lows as far as emotion goes. The vocal pad or samples that you used added just the right touch, not too much just the right amount. Nice job putting this together!
Thanks, Wayne. Sorry for the delay in responding to you comment. Haven't been on for a while. (Working on a new track that proved to be a bit more of a challenge than I was expecting.) :)
Nice track, nice tribute to someone who added so much to music in your country and around the world. Mix is great and the song has a bit of a melancholic feel yet it still has a feeling of hope as well.
One of a kind, you're one of a kind! Many have made mention of the countless things that make you unique in you're own way. I'm a firm believer in following you're heart when it comes to music. Please yourself first when putting these ideas together, others will follow more if you show how authentic you are.
Epic song, c i c what u did with the words here. Sneeze or cough in there at 2:46? Well done Spiv, always an adventure! And make sure you wipe of the recording needle next time. :)
Cool industrial feel to this one. The driving beat with the varied sounds and effects made me listen intently all the way through. Other than the ending being a bit abrupt, I liked the overall feel and concept to the track. I could see a bunch of robot and automated machines cut quickly as a visual in a video for this. Just long enough to get you absorbed while listening then makes you give it another play to check it out again.
Great idea, great song, nice job with the singing and the production is great! Writing about life is great songwriting, being frank and not so rosy gives it "cred".
I'm older now and when I look back, it's all the tough times and not so great moments that I have persevered that have made me who I am. Of course you have to suffer through a tough life first to get to appreciate it, lol. But it makes good song material.
Has a bit of "The Good, the Bad and the Hobbit" feel to it, slightly western/middle earth folk thing happening with a driving drum track, quite different! ;) Mix sounds great, concept is wonderful, original. Putting out some very cool material lately jamid!
Hello Wayne,
Thank you very much for your kind and encouraging feedback mate,
Yes, I thought I’ll put my hand in to Avant garde music I hope I’ve got it right??
Glad you’ve liked it.
Thanks again.
Majid
This is very cool Alex! Great live performance, totally dig the sound of that organ. I enjoy that once in a while someone uploads a live performance here and I can appreciate your ability to make this happen. Made me feel like I was in a holy place, taken away to another musical plane. Not only has many people here enjoyed this rendition but obviously the crowd enjoyed it too! Tuned into the vid as well, the instrument is pretty impressive, well done!
Honestly, I can hear the Roxie Music influence in this track which is good. I think you should continue working on your vocals, they aren't as bad as you said in your description. Be original in your approach and style and it will work out in the long run. The song is catchy, the effects on the vocal help with the overall feel of the track and the mix is real good for this song.
Thank-you, Wayne. You are one of the true "authorities" here on Looperman and I respect and appreciate your input and advice. I did manage to reasonably successfully disguise my wretched vocals with multiple plugins and tracking the melody line with a synth part. Autotune simply doesn't work really well on my vocals. I have a really hard time keeping a note on pitch and you can really see itinerary the pitch display in Autotune. That's a function of age I think, although I was never allowed to sing even backup in the bands I was in back in the day. :)
That being said, I think your advice to be original in approach and style is very sound. I've been thinking the same thing recently, as I come to realization that I'm not really good at creating trance, or any other genre of EDM. I particularly like trance, but getting it "right" continues to elude me. So, am thinking that perhaps I should accept reality and find an original path. Not necessarily 80's recreations, either. But, perhaps influenced by them.
Anyway, enough of my philosophizing. Have a new R&B track underway and it needs a lot more attention. Definitely won't be adding a vocal to it.
What a nicely balanced song, mix, instruments, all the right production and not crushed to death with too much compression. That last point alone gives the song that sense of space and depth and feel to the track. It has a relaxed, lounging at the beach with a cold drink with a small umbrella in it sort of feel to me. ooops, I mean a sparklin' glass of champagne!
Hello Wayne,
Glass of champagne none the less for you mate!
Thank you very much for your kind and wonderful feedback mate.
I am much appreciative and indebted to you.
Glad you’ve liked it.
Thanks again for the fav’s too.
Majid
Pretty darn cool if you ask me! Reminded me a bit of Stevie Wonder(Sir Duke) type sound. Some nice changes, breaks and it has interesting leads from different instruments all through it. Funkin' awesome dude!
I agree, alternative tunings are fun to play around with. Sounds like you let loose, with it being "go acoustic or go home" day and all. :) Who doesn't like acoustic guitar songs? Well performed and a even mix, sounds great! Well done!
Nice easy, peaceful feeling to this track. Some really nice changes too. Got to hand it to you again, a fairly involved song made using all these loops.
It must take some time to find all these loops to fit, the descriptions and if there is a key signature must help a lot.
Yo Wayne!
Thank you! I must to admit, i never look after temp or key (actually, i don't even know what exactly is key :D).
I just work as a blind man with a music lego. Just trying to put something to something else, then hold it if like the result, or drop it if not. :)
I have no idea what makes garage, garage. Doesn't really matter. This is good no matter how you slice it. Clean mix, upbeat, great listen. Horns are sweet, vocals sit nicely in the mix. Piano is simple but contributes it's share of impact on the song. The guitar, wha/phase stabs work too, nicely played and mixed.
Hi mate thanks for review and sorry for late reply. Yes unfortunately I stopped downloads because the tracks were forever being downloaded by 'unknown' or 'deleted' users without a review. If you really want the track email me and I could send mp3. Regards paul.
Dark overall tone, lyrics, the organ you chose, tempo.... Lots to listen to, cool effects, subtle sometimes. Dig the delays on the male vox. Listened a few times, it gave me the opportunity to pay attention to different sounds each time. The vocal samples are good, minette has a wonderful voice! Sparse in its arrangement but you did well with the production, in my opinion. Interesting sounds used sparingly set the atmosphere but it's fighting my coffee rush. ;)
Jim read the comments on my track from the other day and he knew who Chris Spedding was. Oh well....live and learn. btw, Jim joined the site recently so hopefully he uploads some music soon.
It is def a different structure than my usual and I hope to build on this experience. But I am allowing myself now to fall back into weird land for a while! Thanks. Dan
Just a suggestion, start the drums a bit simpler then build the drums up as the singing gets going to the 16th note hi hats. The intro git was cool. I was thinking to build some more dynamics when you start the drums, maybe build up to the 16th note hi hats with just some kick or a simpler hi hat pattern. The drums work well with how you did the vocals and I'm not disagreeing with the kit you are using(loops, program...) but more suggesting to introduce that continuous hi hat in time.
The part in the middle reminded me of REM actually. I like the idea overall. Listened several times, really do like the middle part, sometimes less is more. Good luck, worth working on and getting it to where you are happy with it!
on art belly by arkeyetexture
Art Belly? Any story behind the title?
Wayne
thank you for the listen, the name came from the riddim i built this on off which is called atribella riddim.....
not exactly a riveting story, ha
Big Love!
on Sciocchezza by MrSpookd
Wayne
on Reeeee by Tinka0
I don''t know crap about dnb other than drum and bass are featured but as I listen to this a 2nd and 3rd time I am starting to let it all absorb into my senses I realize I was completely right about my knowledge of dnb. I am sure this will appeal to those who like dnb and those who like something completely different, I fall into that category.
Sure was a trip, great creativity and making music that appeals to you because pleasing yourself when it comes to making music is most important.
Whew!
Wayne
Thanks for the visit Wayne, much appreciated :)
on We Struggle by musiclover38
Wayne
on halt mich - hold me by joecramer
Happy new year!
Wayne
Good to know that you could enjoy this last song for this year. I would enjoy it if someone would use it in a movie for sure :) .....
stay tuned and happy new year
joe
on Answers by BabyGee
Well done!
Wayne
on The Plight of the Wolves by DijamMusic
Interesting interpretation of your description. The bass has a feeling of prowling or hunting. The ticking/percussion was an unexpected sound but I'm sure your reason for putting it in there is justified. Nice piece of music overall!
My favorite is Howlin' Wolf.(blues great!!)
Cheers!
Wayne
Sorry for the delay in response mate.
I hope you’ve had wonderful Christmas and new year holiday.
Thank you very much for your feedback my friend.
I'm really glad you liked it.
Thanks again.
Majid
on The Devil From The East by Eternium
Wayne
on Return of the Dead King by EricMilligan
Wayne
on Juste Un Adieu by DivadyAlbum1
Well done!
Wayne
on CICwutUdo by Spivkurl
Epic song, c i c what u did with the words here. Sneeze or cough in there at 2:46? Well done Spiv, always an adventure! And make sure you wipe of the recording needle next time. :)
Wayne
on 24kGOLD by HustleUnion
Very cool!
Wayne
on Modern Tragedy by austinmusic
I'm older now and when I look back, it's all the tough times and not so great moments that I have persevered that have made me who I am. Of course you have to suffer through a tough life first to get to appreciate it, lol. But it makes good song material.
Like the track!
Wayne
on Return Of The Hobbit Two by DijamMusic
Cheer!
Wayne
Thank you very much for your kind and encouraging feedback mate,
Yes, I thought I’ll put my hand in to Avant garde music I hope I’ve got it right??
Glad you’ve liked it.
Thanks again.
Majid
on piece dOrgue by promenade2239
Wayne
on Silent Whispers by EricMilligan
Well done man!
Wayne
That being said, I think your advice to be original in approach and style is very sound. I've been thinking the same thing recently, as I come to realization that I'm not really good at creating trance, or any other genre of EDM. I particularly like trance, but getting it "right" continues to elude me. So, am thinking that perhaps I should accept reality and find an original path. Not necessarily 80's recreations, either. But, perhaps influenced by them.
Anyway, enough of my philosophizing. Have a new R&B track underway and it needs a lot more attention. Definitely won't be adding a vocal to it.
Thanks again,
Eric
on Champagne Dream by DijamMusic
Always something good for the ears!
Wayne
Glass of champagne none the less for you mate!
Thank you very much for your kind and wonderful feedback mate.
I am much appreciative and indebted to you.
Glad you’ve liked it.
Thanks again for the fav’s too.
Majid
on Dirt Too Earth by Dirtzilla
Wayne
on Lines by Kargalar
Wayne
on Born in summer by traz75
It must take some time to find all these loops to fit, the descriptions and if there is a key signature must help a lot.
I feel calmer now after listening, nice job!
Wayne
Thank you! I must to admit, i never look after temp or key (actually, i don't even know what exactly is key :D).
I just work as a blind man with a music lego. Just trying to put something to something else, then hold it if like the result, or drop it if not. :)
Regards, traz
on I see ya by smallpaul
on I see ya by smallpaul
Worthy of a dl! Thanks for sharing!
Wayne
on Nyctalope feat Jozzua Lance by DubSmockers
Jim read the comments on my track from the other day and he knew who Chris Spedding was. Oh well....live and learn. btw, Jim joined the site recently so hopefully he uploads some music soon.
Take care!
Wayne
thanks for this complete feedback!
Ok for Jim, i will discover his work with pleasure :)
have a good day!
Bleep
on Stars Collide ft Stephanie Kay Hussar by DanGoldstein
Nice job Dan!
It is def a different structure than my usual and I hope to build on this experience. But I am allowing myself now to fall back into weird land for a while! Thanks. Dan
on Bright Lights WIP by austinmusic
The part in the middle reminded me of REM actually. I like the idea overall. Listened several times, really do like the middle part, sometimes less is more. Good luck, worth working on and getting it to where you are happy with it!
Wayne